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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hola guys this shaayari just popped into mind when i kept myself in mishti' s shoes. I feel this is what as a character mishti is going through hope u all like it

Ya mera khudha is duniya mein sab kuch hai magar kisi k liya humdardi kyu nai. Kyu kuch sahi karne mein tareef nai, magar kuch galat karne se mein is duniya mein rehne k kabil nai, kyu mera doosro k liya jeena kisi ko deekhta nai, magar pehle baar pyaar karne k liya khudprast mein bani

Kya galati meri mujhe jis se pyaar karna chahiya tha use cha kar bhi kar na saki aur jisse nai karna use mohabbat kar baithi

Ishq tu khudha teri sabse badhi rehmat hai na , phir mere liya ye gunna kyu

Kyu mera ishq sabko gawaara, kya mein humdardi ya insaniyaat k bhi layak nai?

PS: i would really appreciate if on this mishti wont be critsied. Bcz this piece of work is my art. But do tell ur opinion how is it so i can improve

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is beautiful and thank you for posting it as new thread

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Excellent shayari dear👏

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: khatimeethi

This is beautiful and thank you for posting it as new thread

Aww my pleasure , thank you for loving it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranurosid

Excellent shayari dear👏

Thank you pranu, today i thought everything went over board so couldnt help but write what mishti as a character goes through

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheen97

Thank you pranu, today i thought everything went over board so couldnt help but write what mishti as a character goes through

Mishti is a fictional character..so it's okay..Don't know what will happen if any girl faces this situation in reality

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranurosid

Mishti is a fictional character..so it's okay..Don't know what will happen if any girl faces this situation in reality

Most PPL will forgive over course of time and rest assured none will bash so much ...

Heck even PPL forgive ema and move on cough Sridevi and hemamalini

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranurosid

Mishti is a fictional character..so it's okay..Don't know what will happen if any girl faces this situation in reality

Actually the truth is mishti' character is close to reality and another harsh truth is girl who face the situation like mishti actually go through worse and are called names, looked through judgemental eyes .

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's excellent dear... Keep it up & post more & more 😍

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is such a beautiful piece 👏

Mishti is the most misjudged character of this show. This piece of poetry fits her well. It looks like she has just visited this forum and is now complaining to the God about being harshly judged based on just one mistake of her.

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