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amritat

@amritat

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Excellent OS.

Perhaps the best I have read on this forum for Season 2.

The most heartwrenching part is Pari's realization that underneath the fights, Mishti and Ruhaan are fiercely attracted to each other. Pari (both in your OS and this show) is far more mature and sorted within, contrary to her callous exterior.

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rmahi

@rmahi25

Stunner

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Naturegirl99

Hi Mahi! How can I forget u..one of the most entertaining maunal paltan 😆 Yes pari is bravely soldering on alone but she is also broken ,she just puts on a brave face. I hope makers explore Her more. I like Arnab pari too but only as friends I like pari ruhaan more 😳

Will write on maunal definitely..an alternate ending 😳

PM it to me when you will write one...Will be waiting 😆😆!!

Aww thank you so much for not forgetting me🤗

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Rinnks

@Rinnks

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Sooo beautifully written!! Love every word of it.

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Naturegirl99

@Naturegirl99

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: amritat
Excellent OS.
Perhaps the best I have read on this forum for Season 2.
The most heartwrenching part is Pari's realization that underneath the fights, Mishti and Ruhaan are fiercely attracted to each other. Pari (both in your OS and this show) is far more mature and sorted within, contrary to her callous exterior.

Aww thank u so much 😳

Yes pari is gonna be heartbroken when she gets to realize this in the show too 😭

Pari indeed is a very brave and mature girl, right from childhood and I hope makers maintain her strength and dignity.

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Naturegirl99

@Naturegirl99

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Ruhi122
Sooo beautifully written!! Love every word of it.

Thank uu 😊

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Ayesha

@Ayesha05

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

It's a beautiful OS dear. Please update it.

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Sabyata

@Sabyata

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Beautifully written

Great work Girl👏

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Naturegirl99

@Naturegirl99

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Sabyata
Beautifully written
Great work Girl 👏

Thanks a lot 😳

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Naturegirl99

@Naturegirl99

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Guys. Part 2 is updated on page One!!

Plz do read and review 😊

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Ayesha

@Ayesha05

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#20

The part 2 is amazing.
How I wish now you converted tis OS into an FF.
Good job though.
I loved the part where you told everybody that her sistwill never leave her and will always be there for her.

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