Tempus - Completed (Part 3 - Mauli)

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Hey, this is a three shot and each chapter focuses on the life of one of the protagonists. I hope you guys like it. I will update Mauli's part in a day as i need time to write her point of view. Please give this a try before making any assumptions.


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Ten years later...


Nandini smiled as she cleaned the blackboard and waited for the students. She found satisfaction in her students' happiness and she loved spending time with them. A few years back she decided to become a kindergarten teacher as she loved kids and spending time with them made her forget her past. And now she had been recently shifted to a very high profile school in Delhi and today was her first day at new school. At first, Nandini was a bit skeptical about joining such a high profile school as often students at such schools were spoilt brats but she changed her mind after visiting the school and now here she was, eagerly waiting for the tiny tots to join her. True enough, very soon the first graders started coming in.


"May I come in miss? Nandini turned around and looked at the owner of the voice. It was a little girl, about a five-year-old and with a bright smile on her face. For a moment her smile and confidence reminded her of certain someone and her heart thudded.


Quickly pushing aside any thoughts, she asked the little girl to enter the class. She was really amazed by the child's obedience. None of the other kids had asked for permission to enter, except this little angel. Vanya Sharma, that was the name of the little girl. She was attentive throughout the class and even during the lunch break Nandini saw her sharing her lunch box with another student. Nandini sat next to Vanya, which grabbed the little one's attention and she offered her lunch to her teacher too. Nandini chuckled at her innocent act and asked her who taught her so much at such a tender age.


"My papa says that it is good to share, Vanya said as she continued munching on the apple that her mother had given her for the lunch.


"Mumma doesn't like it when I share too much. But papa says that sharing is caring and my papa is always right, she explained and Nandini wondered why her parents had such conflicting opinions.


After the school got over, Nandini waited for all her students to get picked by their parents. Almost all the students were gone except for Vanya. She asked her if her parents were late, to which the little girl replied with great maturity saying that her parents were doctors and they sometimes get late due to the work. Nandini decided to wait with Vanya outside and went inside the classroom to grab her bag. But as soon as she stepped outside, the scene before her made her stop in her steps.


Mauli.


There she was after ten years looking as radiant as ever. With the same grace and confidence around her. She was wearing a long kurta and her hair was a bit shorter than before. Nandini was shocked to her core when Mauli hugged Vanya and she started chatting animatedly with her. And in a few minutes, Vanya left in the car that Mauli came in.


Mauli was Vanya's mother.


The realization hit Nandini and she stood rooted to the ground. Now she realized why that kid reminded her of someone and why Vanya's mother didn't want her to help anyone too much. Afterall Mauli had once helped her selflessly and she paid back in the worst way possible. She wondered whether Vanya was his daughter although they looked nothing alike. There were so many questions going around in Nandini's head but she didn't have the courage to face Mauli.


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PART TWO

Kunal hurriedly did a last check before finishing his breakfast. A cab was waiting for him outside, just like he had asked the hotel staff before. He was back in this city after so many years and the guilt still pierced his heart like a sharp knife. Ten years ago he lost everything that any man can ever ask for. He lost his wife who was his best friend through thick and thin. He also lost his family. His mother and dida now lived with Mauli and he couldn't blame them. His mother never talked to him after that but his dida sometimes picked his calls. He knew that Mauli was doing fine now but he didn't have the courage to ask anything more.


Ten years back a girl worked for his dream while he chased an illusion. An illusion that Nandini was everything that he needed in his life. An illusion that any girl could ever be better than Mauli. He still remembered how heavy the keys of his clinic felt when Mauli placed them in his palm. He remembered how his heart stopped beating when he saw the divorce papers that Mauli had signed. But the last straw was when he saw Nandini standing in the temple and asking him what he saw in the future. It was that very moment, that he realized that there was only one person and she was gone.


Kunal rubbed his forehead as all the memories came crashing on him. He couldn't stop himself and dwell on the past. The look of dejection on Nadini's face when he told her that for him there was only one wife and that was Mauli. The look of painful realization when both of them realized that what they had between them was just an attraction. An attraction which turned into lust, which in turn burned their lives. A mistake which cost them everything.


He knew that he could never undo what he did in the past but in order to do even a tiny bit, he started working on his dream of having a clinic. Since past few years, he spent most of his time at his clinic. He only went home to eat and sleep. The empty rooms suffocated him. That's why he spent most of his time and energy helping the needy. He had no clue where Nandini was as neither of them tried to contact each other ever again.


Today Kunal was meeting Dr. Kabir Sharma, a very renowned pediatric surgeon. Although a bit younger than him, Dr. Kabir was known for his dedication to his work. Soon he arrived at the hospital and he waited outside Dr. Kabir's office. A few minutes later he was called inside.


The meeting went as per his expectation but Kunal couldn't help but notice a strange look in Dr. Kabir's eyes. As if he knew Kunal for a long time. But the meeting was entirely professional and Kunal couldn't get to ask the reason. Before leaving he asked Dr. Kabir if he wanted to have lunch with him. A bit hesitant at first, Dr. Kabir agreed and they both went to the cafeteria. Kunal was surprised to know that Kabir was married and he had a daughter who was almost five now. This made him go down the memory lane when he remembered how badly Mauli wanted to start a family with him and how foolish he was to turn her down.


Just as they were about to leave, Kabir's phone that was lying on the table, buzzed. But it was the wallpaper on his phone that made stunned him. It was of Mauli with a little girl in her arms. Kunal couldn't believe his eyes and before he could say anything, the screen went dark and now he was staring at his reflection. He gulped and looked at Kabir whose jaw was set.


"I wanted to keep this meeting formal. You are a great doctor and inside this hospital, I don't care what you did in the past. I am meeting you as Dr. Kabir here and you are of a great value to this new project Kabir said in a very professional tone and started to leave.


"H-How is she? Kunal finally asked.


"She is happy now. I won't say healed completely but she is a fighter. You and I both know that. She knows that I am meeting you today and she is fine with you working with us. I would like it if you make sure that you don't cross her path. It is solely her decision to meet you or not. I hope you understand Dr. Kunal. Now if you would excuse, I have to leave. Today is a very important day for my daughter.


With that, Dr. Kabir left leaving Kunal with a bittersweet feeling. He was happy that Mauli finally got what she deserved and sad that it could've been him if he hadn't crushed everything with his own hands.


Edited by kendra - 6 years ago
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PART THREE - Mauli

"This is all your fault!" Mauli said angrily and turned to look outside the window. He tried to touch her hand but before that she burst out again.

"You never listen to me! See what she did!" With that, she turned her face to the other side again.

Kabir sighed and decided to stay quiet as he knew that this was the best option right now. He decided to give his angry wife some time to cool down. Then he looked in the rearview mirror and saw the reason for their fight smiling cutely sitting in the backseat - their daughter Vanya. The twinkle in her eyes made him forget everything for a second. But then he realized that Mouli was right, it was his fault.

Vanya Sharma was the lifeline of her parents. Both her parents along with her grandmother and great-grandmother adored her to no extent. And the smart little five years old knew that. She was very aware how she had her dad wrapped around her little finger. Yesterday a boy in her class tried to hug her and as told by her dad, Vanya punched him in the face. Her parents were called to the school the next day and needless to say, her mother was not happy about it. She even glared at her father when he did a high five with Vanya saying something along the lines of we are raising her right. Right now the little family of three was coming back after a meeting with the principal and Mauli was angry at Kabir for pampering Vanya too much. Both father and daughter silently communicated with their eyes and they knew they had to do something to make up to mommy.

When they reached home, Yamini (Kunal's mother) took Vanya to help her get fresh and then feed her something. Mauli went to her room while Kabir disappeared into the kitchen. A few minutes later, Mauli was lying on her bed when someone offered her coffee. She looked up and realized it was Kabir. He was holding a tray with a cup of coffee with a poorly made smiley on it. This made her smile and shake her head. She took the cup and patted on the space next to her on the bed.

"You are right Mauli. I am spoiling Vanya but you need to know that what she did was not wrong. She needs to know that no one is allowed to touch her without her consent." Kabir said while grabbing her hand in his.

By now even Mauli had realized that she had overreacted. She simply leaned in and pecked him on his cheek. Kabir pretended to faint which made Mauli laugh again.

"I love you." He said as he lightly touched her face and she leaned into his touch.

"I love you too but you have a very important video conference call today. So go to the study. I will help Vanya with her homework today."

"You know you are the best. And do drink the coffee. It will help you relax." With that Kabir got up and left for the study.

Mauli nodded and took a sip of the coffee and grimaced. She still wasn't used to his coffee. Mauli never had the heart to tell Kabir how much he sucked at making coffee. And to her it wasn't mere coffee, it was Kabir's love.

Eight years back Mauli met this young, energetic doctor who was full of optimism. They worked together for some time and then she shifted to another hospital. To say that she was shocked when Kabir visited her and told her that he liked her would be an understatement. She had recently got out of a relationship which left her with broken trust and betrayal wounds. She wasn't ready to move at all. So she calmly explained her situation to Kabir who just nodded and asked to be friends only. He told her that he would love her and he would never force her to love him back. Even though Kabir was three years younger to her, he was much more mature than her.

After one year of meeting Kabir, Mauli was a brand new person. Even her mumma and dida noticed this and they were very happy. Then one day Kabir proposed her for marriage and Mauli couldn't bring herself to say yes. She was still terrified of what happened with Kunal and was afraid of another heartbreak. Then Dida and mumma talked to her and a few days later Mauli went to Kabir's placed and asked whether he was ready to marry her.

Life wasn't exactly smooth sailing in first few months as she wasn't the old Mauli anymore. But Kabir her helped her with her transition and proved to be the best husband anyone could ask for. He even waited for six months for any kind of intimacy between them and it was Mauli who took the first step.

"I am sorry Mumma." Mauli looked towards the door and there was her daughter standing with her head down.

"Come here, baby." Mauli opened her arms and Vanya came rushing towards her. She lightly kissed the top of her head and made her sit on her lap.

"Vanya baby, it is right that no one should hug you without your permission but you don't punch them directly. Tell them no or tell your teacher first. Okay?"

Mauli gazed lovingly at the little girl in her arms who was a perfect combination of her parents. She had Mauli's eyes and Kabir's attitude. Five years back, Kabir and Mauli were blessed with a baby girl. It was Mauli's deepest desire to have a baby and she was the answer to all her prayers. Vanya, which means the gracious gift of God. Mauli remembered when she thought that Kabir maybe was a bit young to have a baby but he turned out to be the most hands-on dad ever and now Vanya was his heartbeat. And for Mauli, Kabir and Vanya were her heartbeats.

She knew that her husband was working with Kunal. Kabir told her when he received Kunal's application and he talked to her before making any kind of decision. But at that time she had to think as a doctor first. And surprisingly she was okay with that now. That didn't mean that she forgive or forget. She could never forget the ultimate betrayal of her ex-husband and her friend and that made her paranoid at times. But Kabir always managed her to see good and worry less. She didn't care where Kunal and Nandini were or what they were up to now. That was her past and what's past is past. What mattered was today and she was happy with her little family and she couldn't ask for more.


Edited by kendra - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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That was very good. Well written
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Well written
Can't wait to read maulis perspective or about her life after ten years
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this is good kendra..
i am glad even nandini is finally standing on her feet..
reserving this space for final shot..

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Loved it..
Nandini and Kunal have repented over the years and tried a new direction.. The writers should read this and try to build K N characters rather that what they are doing now..
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unreserving in a new post. i am a senior member now 😎
this is beautiful kendra.. i loved it so so much. this is what i thought the show would be but it is not..

coming to your story, its really beautiful. u dont see people seeking revenge, mauli is also happy she is least bothered which is a blessing..
not everybody is lucky to have a partner like kabir..
moving on is not easy but if u have such partner it is not that tough..
keep writing more..

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Very nice.Kunal and nandini realised their mistake.Kunal lost mauli forever that is kunal's punishment for betraying mauli.Mauli moved on and has a beautiful family.
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Originally posted by: Anahi

unreserving in a new post. i am a senior member now 😎

this is beautiful kendra.. i loved it so so much. this is what i thought the show would be but it is not..

coming to your story, its really beautiful. u dont see people seeking revenge, mauli is also happy she is least bothered which is a blessing..
not everybody is lucky to have a partner like kabir..
moving on is not easy but if u have such partner it is not that tough..
keep writing more..


First of all, congratulations on being a senior member.

I don't want the show to be about revenge but i also don't want Kunal and Nandini to get peace so easily. But alas makers are he'll bentvon whitewashing them

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