My heart is growing heavy with Mauli's broken trust

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Posted: 7 years ago
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some lines for Mauli ...
wrote what i feel...

My heart is growing heavy
With Mauli's broken trust
Wreathed by the sins of the betrayaers
She fell in to a despairing grief
My soul becoming sick with her grief !

Blind error was her trust
Which claimed no authority on love
Sharp claws of betrayal tear her heart apart
She lied in the wounded by their deeds
I lost my heart in her sorrow

Cowards in advances, dare not show their true self
Beaming high in lust and pleasure , union of two mere bodies
"Love died " i said to myself never thought it this hurting
As sharp scale of sobs breakes her body
Betrayers blinked at the pain of the broken soul!

Her trust in death bed , at the expense of her spirit
Look at the flaming wings of her marriage
As shameless man embrace mistress body
Lay broken , the lady with golden heart
Pinned down by the pain inflicted by them
Such a terror , my heart burns with anguish

Cheaters gave their heart away for a sordid boon
Yet truth will bring relief to Mauli
Hope God bless,comfort make her path beautiful
Hope she will strike a key note of success in journey
Because shadow of betrayers looming over her
Finally bid farewell...still my heart is heavy !

It is what i felt
Thought of sharing
Mauli ...aditi's painted Mauli with such an impact i couldn't stop scribbling it down
It was a heart wrenching episode ...my heart is still heavy
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😭 for M. Well written, so well expressed. 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I don't feel like watching today's epi
Yahi sochte hue ki--Hard to watch mauli in bikhri hue halat mein
Stay strong Mauli
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetNeeta

😭 for M. Well written, so well expressed. 👏



Couldn't hrlp
It was heart breaking even to watch
Such an impact .. Mauli set the screen on fire today
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sabyata

I don't feel like watching today's epi
Yahi sochte hue ki--Hard to watch mauli in bikhri hue halat mein
Stay strong Mauli



Have to watch it for Mauli
Aditi conveyed countless wives pain who get cheated every time
It was painful but breath taking
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rosh4rose



Have to watch it for Mauli
Aditi conveyed countless wives pain who get cheated every time

It was painful but breath taking



Will watch it

You written beautifully
Guys u are so talented⭐️

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sabyata



Will watch it

You written beautifully
Guys u are so talented⭐️



Thanks but i dislike to write
It makes me emotional
Today couldn't help such was the impact
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oscar for.aditi today. 👏 so well performed . The scene in the bedroom ..absolutely flawless ..and the questions she asked ,we have been asking from so long .

I dont have the answers to any but one .

Mauli -kunal us mein aisa kya hai jo mujh mein nahi hai

Me - 😭 hydroelectric plant

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _charu_

Oscar for.aditi today.👏so well performed . The scene in the bedroom ..absolutely flawless ..and the questions she asked ,we have been asking from so long .

I dont have the answers to any but one .

Mauli -kunal us mein aisa kya hai jo mujh mein nahi hai

Me -😭hydroelectric plant



Brilliant it was
Mauli set screen on fire today
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aditi Nailed it
,Fantastic work

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