Epitaph of Mauli...

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nimmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: amortentia15

Wonderful nimmi!!!! This is just so poignant and heart-rending...
Thank you for penning down such a beautiful thing...
I will always be looking forward to your writeups! 😳
Lots of love
Juhi

Thank you so much Juhi 🤗

you are a darling re.

lots and lotsd of love right back at ya.

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nimmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: SweetNeeta
👏 Superbly worded...

Thank you so much Neeta😳

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nimmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Sabhayata
Beautiful

Thanks a lot Sabhayata😳

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nimmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Ashi3
Today I witnessed the death of a beautiful soul. A slow, silent and painful death..

Eyes shining bright with love, a smile that lightened up an entire room..That was Mauli for me.
But perhaps today was the last day I witnessed that precious smile.
The farewell of Bappa turned out to be the farewell of her happiness too. The farewell festivities of Bappa seemed synonymous to a prayer meet for Mauli's funeral.

That angelic girl who spread happiness everywhere was murdered today. She loved two people with her entire being. She trusted her heart with them. Least did she know that they were stabbing at the same heart behind her back.

Today she saw it all. She saw the perpetrators sharpening their swords... She saw them slaughtering her trust with no remorse.. She saw them laughing at that bleeding heart ruthlessly..

She staggered on her feet, unable to handle the blow of betrayal..
Her unshed tears, a testament of her shock & disbelief..

The nature cried seeing the fallen angel. The symbol of love that she adorned so affectionately, flowed away with water. And what remains is an empty shell; broken & battered..

O my god..

this breaks my heart all over again.

This is stunning, poignant, painful, touching and tremendously penned down Ashi.🤗

This deserves to be a separate post of its own girl.

how i missed your writings!

can a place a request for an OS please? please pretty please.

you rock emotions like no one else Ashi boo.

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nimmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: SweetNeeta

OMG...This is so beautifully worded...😭 👏

I totally second that.💔

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nimmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Ashi3
It is beautiful, Nimmi..❤️
You know how much I love your works. You create magic with words. And I fall for it every single time!

This was like a swan song for Mauli. It definitely stirred my heart strings. This has left me feeling overwhelmed with a whole set of emotions.

Love you mate! 🤗

Thank you so much Ashi.🤗.

i know yaara and trust me.. the feelings are entirely mutual. i so love your words.

thank you for loving this write up mate. Mauli was inspiring.

and love you back and more.

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nimmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Arshi67
Another of Ghalib's sher for Mauli... for the feeling in her as she sought to see herself through her husband's perfidious eyes. Love doesn't die an instant death, does it?

Mohabbat main nahin hai farq jeene aur marne ka
Usi ko dekh kar jeete hai jis kaafir par dam nikle

Beautiful Arshi🥺.

This sher is so hauntingly beautiful for our Mauli.

nopes.. love doesn't die so mercifully. it demands the very last of your blood, tear and shred of soul and then.. and then if you are lucky.. it meets its demise.

thank you for this lovely post.

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nimmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: abhiya_12

She died yesterday that's what I felt 💔

True that Abhiya. 💔.

and i'll be waiting for our girl's magnificent resurrection!

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nimmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Frozen11
Wow...u penned it down beautifully. 👏 This is truly mouli's situation now. 😭

She thinks she is nothing now but she will rise from the ashes.

Thank you so much Frozen😳.

rise from the ashes.. that she will. Mauli is a phoenix who shall rise again.

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nimmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Jess_Ru
The episode was a rollercoaster ride for me
Mauli nd her hurt was unbearable to watch nd her a very dialogue was piercing into d heart but gotta give d gal salam even when she was broken,lifeless her"am not like nandini nd won't be "👏

Rajdeep...people have been saying he's getting awesome one liners but kal I've seen nd🤣 kamina hei par he's being d most relatable right now

Kunan these two raise their own bar of stupidity daily nd tbh I don't have d patience or d interest to elaborate on them

Coming to d actors must say rajdeep guy is funny nd scary out of all 4 dd acting isn't impressing at all

I'm tone deaf when it comes to poetic way of expression I know only chapad chapad😔 so wahi Likha

But nimi dis is so sad ...funny posts pls🤣🤣

love you ra Jessi.

🤗

past two episodes were indeed roller coaster ride.

Mauli was rising higher and the other two were simply going down and down. (not that they weren't in the lower level already😆).

Mauli and her dialogue writers deserve ekkis topo ki salaami. brilliance at the bloody best.

and Aditi was phenomenal.

Rajdeep is a vile creature alright.. but you said it.. he makes lot of sense and is helluva fun.

ah.. Kundini.. well Jess.. as they genius has its limit. Stupidity has none.

I totally dig Rajdeep nowadays (minus the manhandling bits). (haven't seen earlier epis.). He brings in the zing.

i am ff'ing through errmm you know who and rewinding and watching in loop Mauli and Aditi's brilliance as Mauli and dhulai of Kunal.

aww.. i LOVE your cute chapad chapad dear girl. so keep them coming. *hugs*