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Posted: 6 years ago
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Today I witnessed the death of a beautiful soul. A slow, silent and painful death..

Eyes shining bright with love, a smile that lightened up an entire room..That was Mauli for me.
But perhaps today was the last day I witnessed that precious smile.
The farewell of Bappa turned out to be the farewell of her happiness too. The farewell festivities of Bappa seemed synonymous to a prayer meet for Mauli's funeral.

That angelic girl who spread happiness everywhere was murdered today. She loved two people with her entire being. She trusted her heart with them. Least did she know that they were stabbing at the same heart behind her back.

Today she saw it all. She saw the perpetrators sharpening their swords... She saw them slaughtering her trust with no remorse.. She saw them laughing at that bleeding heart ruthlessly..

She staggered on her feet, unable to handle the blow of betrayal..
Her unshed tears, a testament of her shock & disbelief..

The nature cried seeing the fallen angel. The symbol of love that she adorned so affectionately, flowed away with water. And what remains is an empty shell; broken & battered..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashi3


Today I witnessed the death of a beautiful soul. A slow, silent and painful death..

Eyes shining bright with love, a smile that lightened up an entire room..That was Mauli for me.
But perhaps today was the last day I witnessed that precious smile.
The farewell of Bappa turned out to be the farewell of her happiness too. The farewell festivities of Bappa seemed synonymous to a prayer meet for Mauli's funeral.

That angelic girl who spread happiness everywhere was murdered today. She loved two people with her entire being. She trusted her heart with them. Least did she know that they were stabbing at the same heart behind her back.

Today she saw it all. She saw the perpetrators sharpening their swords... She saw them slaughtering her trust with no remorse.. She saw them laughing at that bleeding heart ruthlessly..

She staggered on her feet, unable to handle the blow of betrayal..
Her unshed tears, a testament of her shock & disbelief..

The nature cried seeing the fallen angel. The symbol of love that she adorned so affectionately, flowed away with water. And what remains is an empty shell; broken & battered..



OMG...This is so beautifully worded...😭 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It is beautiful, Nimmi..❤️
You know how much I love your works. You create magic with words. And I fall for it every single time!

This was like a swan song for Mauli. It definitely stirred my heart strings. This has left me feeling overwhelmed with a whole set of emotions.

Love you mate! 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetNeeta



OMG...This is so beautifully worded...😭 👏


Thanks dear! 😊
I feel so bad for Mauli.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalu79

Beautiful :)👏 Take a bow, friend



Thank you SO much Shalu.😳.
thanks buddy.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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thank you so much mafaaza😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Silverrmoon

You write so well, the way you depicted Mauli's situation and penned it down is brilliant. Looking forward to more of your brilliant write ups. 😃



Thanks a real lot silver.
but the way she broke down and yet stood tall and slayed (Aditi was bloody phenomenal.).. i don't think i can do justice to that brilliance any further.

Thank you once again.😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jiggy7

Mauli oh God.. Even today she was refusing to see videos..😭😭

Keep writing more



THAT'S her honesty, faith and all the goodness that is SO rare in this cynical world.
it is just heartbreaking that all those precious priceless emotions were wasted on worthless beings.

thank you for reading and liking Jiggy.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you Viji😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..silverlotus..

We may not actually feel her pain. But you wrote it all beautifully. But I wish she rises again threading the tears and piecing her broken self



Thank you so much silverlotus.😳.
and i say.. Amen. wish the same.

and after yesterday we not only felt her pain.. we bled with her. I know i did. i don't even remember when was the last time i actually cried for a desi tv character and a sequence.
Mauli teared me up and how🥺

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