Jaane Pyaar Kab Hoga FF - Part 2 Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys ok i decided to do a fanfic to basically liven up a forum i hope u guys will enjoy this fanfic all characters are the same from the drama so please reply on this topic if i should carry on

I will be starting from the night of Amrit's & Saroj's Suhag Raath :) and trust me i hope u guys like it because this ff will be with a bang and if have enough comments i will start tonight :)

Love Noori

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Posted: 13 years ago
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bang on dear👍🏼
i was eagerly waiting for a FF on SaRit😳
will be eagerly waiting

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for ur reply jus needin few more than i shall continue :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well it will take time as u know forum is not so active
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeah i know but i jus saw promo so fingers cross the forum shall get busy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yeah Noori Sis...
Plz con Soon...
We all are waiting...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u for ur reply jus waiting for more replies then i will :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok i will start now lol

Jaane Pyaar Kab Hoga - Part 1
Who Knows when will love Happen - Part 1

Saroj is patiently sitting on the bed smiling seeing it all decorated with rose petals and candles lit everywhere then Amrit enters being pushed in by the girls he looks at Saroj and smirks and puts the lock up and was about to sit on the bed as he is about to go his phone goes and its Sarla his eyes widen he cuts the call and sits on the bed next to saroj


Amrit: Hum kuch kahe Saroj
Amrit: I want to say something Saroj

Saroj shy: boliye Amrit ji
Saroj: Say it Amrit

then his phone goes off again and he cuts her off once again and we see Sarla

Sarla: uske itne himat mera phone cut kiya *then she slams the fone on sofa and bk to Saroj & Amrrit*
Sarla: how dare he cut my fone call

Saroj: aap kuch kehna waley tey Amrit ji
Saroj: you were about to say something Amrit

Amrit: uh haan haan sarry
Amrit: uh yes yes sorry

Saroj smiles shyly

Amrit: aap bohot Khobsurat lag rahe thi aaj
Amirt you were looking very beautiful today


Saroj: thank u

then Amrit's mobile rings again and he frowns as he doesnt recognise the number and Answer Saroj looks at Amrit

Amrit: uh ek min sir ji ka fone hai *he lies*
uh one min its sir ji phone call

He goes to the bathroom and answers phone

Amrit: kaun hai tu
Amrit who are are u

Sarla: arrey vah Amrit bhar bhar mera phone cut kiya tumne, biwi kay saath busy tey aur mujhe bhol gaye itne jaldi
Sarla: wow Amrit u kept cutting my calls, too busy with your wife and forgotten me already so quickly

Amrit: arrey Sarla ji aap main kaha apko bhol gaya darah sul mein aapke pass aa raha tha haan
Amrit; Hey Sarla how can i forget u actually i am coming to you

Sarla: acha kab
Sarla: really when

Amrit: bas abhi aya
Amrit: I will just come now

Sarla: hmm teek hai jaldi karna
Sarla: ok come quick

Amrit: hmm aa raha hoon
Amrit: i am coming

Amrit goes out the bathroom

Saroj: sab kuch teek tou hai na Amrit ji
Saroj: everything is alright isnt it

Amrit: uh woh actually mere ko kuch kam dekhna hai shayed dher wapas aao ga
Amrit: uh actually i have some to work look at i might be back late

Saroj: teek hai koi baat nahi aap jao
Saroj: ok no problem you go

Amrit begins to get ready spraying aftershave on and leaves, Saroj jus looks around picking up the rose petals from the bed and then removing jewellery and changes her clothes and gets into bed and as she waits for Amrit to return her eyes clothes and next scene shows Sarla's head on Amrit's chest

Sarla: Mujhe Pata tha tum zaror aao gaye mere pass
Sarla: I knew you would come to me

Amrit sighz

Sarla: kya hua biwi ke khayalon mein khoye howe ho
Sarla: whats wrong lost in your wifes thoughts

Amrit: kya nahi tou
Amrit: what no

Sarla: leekan aisa tou lagta hai Saroj kay nasha mein ho
Sarla: but it looks like your drunk on Saroj

Amrit then gets up and begins to put his shirt on

Amrit: tou kya hua agar hoon biwi hai mere
Amrit: so what if i am she is my wife

Sarla scoffs: biwi
Sarla: wife

Amrit: kyun kya hua aapke pass tou Pati dev hai
Amrit: why whats wrong you have your husband

Sarla hugs Amrit from behind

Sarla: haan leekan woh yaha nahi hai
Sarla: yes but he isnt here

Amrit: haan hamesha ke tarha
Amrit: yes as always

Sarla: kya hogaya tujhko
Sarla: what has gotten into you

Then Sarla stops hugging Amrit and Amrit just leaves forgetting his phone behind when suddenly his phone rings and its Saroj Sarla sees the number Saroj flashing and smirks

To be continued

tell me if u want i continue :)
Edited by BlessedCuteOne - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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is was really nice dear👍🏼...plz continue...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: roopalgupta

bang on dear👍🏼
i was eagerly waiting for a FF on SaRit😳
will be eagerly waiting


Eijaz has posted on facebook that jodi's name should be AmritSa, it was Neha's dad who chose 😆

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