Rant Alert !!!! Pls bear with it,,as it's long,,if time less then skip it.....but I hv to say it out aloud,,
What's going on ????
Is this Chandragupta Maurya jaha child Chandragupta plays Raja praja game !!?....I mean luv kush ke liye grateful hai villagers that's good,,but making them king,,,and luv kush after defeating Shatrughna,, either shd hv sent him to Ayodhya in his rath in parajit state or held captive is ok,,but hiding him this way looked inapt totally,,I mean sabhi ke haarne ke baad Raja Ram ko aana hi tha,,uske liye yeh chacha collection start karna😑🙄 !!!! Also villagers helping them in hiding Madhupuri king who's brother of their Raja Ram like this,,,and Lakshman bhaiya ka villagers ke saath this confrontation,, totally unnecessary scenes written firstly,,as naahi yeh villagers ko suit karta hai ki Father like king ke yagya horse and bhai ko chupane mein help kare,,, despite being grateful to Luv Kush,,,naahi luv kush ke liye suitable laga yeh scene,,also Lakshman bhaiya is not at all irrational personality,his anger also used to have rightful reasons,,he speaking only rudely & don't even try pehle with compassion or negotiation looked inapt,,firstly he was mild in speech actually,,though capable enough but man of few words as Sita ma described him in VR in front of Hanuman ji in Sunderkand,, secondly if Raja ke loyal kisi task ko accomplish karne bheje gaye hai to they will have that intellect and prudence to handle situations which lakshman actually had apart frm anger always which they show of him,,forget about that,,ok Sita ma Hanuman ji scene good,bus itna hi acha tha pichle 2 episodes mein,,,
Sita ma ka bhi yeh kaise likha hai,,she was so intellectual & wise woman,,unke bhi kuch scenes inconsistent likhe hai writers ne,,
She didn't told luv kush truth b4 going to Ayodhya,,when they returned back with resentment for ShriRam,,then also she didn't clarify,,now she was told by Rishi Bhardwaj that war going on with entire sena,,she prayed also,, but didn't ask such rational questions abt kiske saath yudh hua,,not trying to know situation,,not trying to explain to kids nicely,,,even now when LuvKush asking for aashirwad to find devi Sita,,tho I know if aisa dikhate to aage fight nahi dikha pate luv kush ki vs ayodhya,, isliye bhardwaj muni se bulwa diya future nahi puchne ke liye Sita ma ko,,,
par Bhai to Sita ma ko laaye kyu abhi iss scene mein😑
,,swarn kamal track pehle dikha dete ,,fir fight start karte,,yeh fight with Shatrughna ke bich mein zombie and swarn kamal😑,, Lakshman ke saath fight ke bich mein bhoot nagri🙄,,arre side track yaa pehle dikaho,,yaa baad mein dikhana,,yeh bich bich mein daalne se saare characters ka arc,decision,war,storyline sab kuch inconsistent lagta hai😟🫠😒😵💫😵...be ready Bharat bhaiya ki baari aane par fir koi nahi kahani aayegi !!!
Sorry to say,,,With more time in hands,,,,makers messing up more with writing part of Characters and Storyline adding unnecessary scenes & misplacing tracks
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Edited by RamAayenge - 10 months ago
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