Hi ...presenting a poem !

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi everyone , just posting a poem here ,..it's very lengthy and with a very bad rhyming ...still if u feel it's worth reading ,..go ahead and comment 😊

DEATHBED ROSES

there were they smiling
with all their fragrance and charm
covering the dead skin
and sure notdoin any harm
wronging the man whom they cover
robing his garb under and over


she was standing there
wthether in gloom or glare
don't know but still dressed in blue
her eyes still having that glue
yet intriguing me with
wht they had
ohh i can't even read them yet
again how can i go that bad?

there were they two
who brought me to earth
i bornt to fail
so destined to hearth
they showered love at all time
and cudn't ever bear me mud with lime

with each step taken
in next i fell
once to peak
then bound to well
every breeeze that blew
turned into winds
if i met it
slapped me with wings

i can hear the echoes of all flavour
of all yesterday's coward and valour
the sounds were dim but the pics were bright
painted in time that hold them tight
but i couldn't see anything as all were just dark
faded were they vane as ark
just as what was that they shown
i cried foul and demanded some paint
again none hard all that i moan

so she was an ugly lord
and i was the slave
wanting to move out of her
esoteric cave
i met that lady someday
who came at the dusk
she offered me escape
as it was her task

she took me to cliff
and asked to let free
a vibe sent into me
i hesitant to be
ugly dam was running to catch me there
duskess promised escape she was taking
me where
i looked into her mirror
as she asked me to close
as it was the way to
get into the eternal pose

so i moved my foot & droped my eyes
duskess letted me telling u r the wise
white shutted eyes i saw her flash
embracing me with the never splash
followed her the parents
trying to fill my endless vents
duskess was there as
took me to dawn
that moment can't recall
just came and gone

i looked into him
he caught me in chain
said come with me
to where there is pain
don't know if they were hard to bear
but never brought me those dried tear
empty was me broken was my core
so it never hurted
whether they burnt or bore

he who was the king
asked the reason
to b brought into his ring
tired was i carrying this soul
earth or hell felt like
like all one hole
i pleaded him for being all atrocious
that could let me
peace from the fatigue of concious
punched & declared that i 'll rot
giggled i uttered happy with what i got
lifeless to rot was better than
breathing to rot
he turned red & asked me to b scavanged
insult he felt his and wanted the revenge

the man on the hearth was my messiah
as he was to annihilate my soul
thrown me to hearth
to fulfill my ultimate goal
as heart reached the fire
i told him bror
u r finally letting me
part with this whore
all i remember was he outted me with all vigour
and my soul faded all in one trigger

slaughtering in hell pavd me to peace
as pain was the mate and
joy the alien to tease
but ohh deathbed roses
for my sake bear all spitted hate
as under u came the way where
buddy left me and alien became my mate....

ohh deathbed roses i thank uu...

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-Vanshika- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very very very nyc poem.......... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute vanshika

very very very nyc poem.......... 👏



thanks vanshika 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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my pleasure......

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks yaar 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ur welcome
a writer has his/her days
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Posted: 17 years ago
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The poem is awesomeeeeeee 👏

Very gud..... but a suggestion u could have made it in 3 parts.... otherwise it's perfect 😃 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: verni

The poem is awesomeeeeeee 👏

Very gud..... but a suggestion u could have made it in 3 parts.... otherwise it's perfect 😃 👏 👏



actually yaar , i was just writing it when i wrote it , i was never actually having in mind to write any poem 😊 it just came out ...u can tell tht by how bad d rhyming is at places .😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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No it's not like that.... rhyimg is gud.. me too write poems... aur main bhi kabhi poem likhna plan nahi karti I just write when I want to express something... 😳 😊

poems are never made.... they are expressed.... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks everyone whoever read the poem ,..and thanks for appreciating 😊 😊

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