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simply paagal

@simply paagal

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Posted: 18 years ago

meri archana tum hi,tum hi to ho pooja
sach kehte hoon main meri priya,tere siva na sapna koi dooja
karishma chhaya tera meri tripti ki pyaas mein
teri ada hi akansha meri sooni zindagi ke ehsaas mein
kho gaya main,bas yaad rahi teri disha
din mein ki araadhna,akriti vidya mein gayi nisha

theres sumthing more 2 this,if u read it just lik tht,its useless😃

Edited by simply paagal - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

its really well written poem 👏 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

😆 I get it Raghav!! According to me, you have 12 women in your life, am I right? 😉

Really nice and thoughtful sher! Well done!! 👏

Cheers,

Anjali

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amisra
😆 I get it Raghav!! According to me, you have 12 women in your life, am I right? 😉

Really nice and thoughtful sher! Well done!! 👏

Cheers,

Anjali

ya remembering all his 12 loves in 1 sher, good, i liked it. t4s.