My Own Shayari(SONIA)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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These are my 3 first shayari
hope u all like dem
Jisse hum apna kehte thay woh chhorgaye mujhko
Jo hame dekhe baghair ek din nahi rehsakta tha.. Usne aankhe pherli aaj humse..
Woh jo raat bhar hamse baatein karte thay.. Woh unke lab ab thartaraate hai humse baat karne ke liye..
Jin haatho ki hum kismat thay woh aaj humse hi ruth gaye..
Hai umeed aaj bhi kaash kabhi woh hamara haath pakar kar aankho mein aankh daal kar kahein ke " main aaj bhi tumhara hoon".

Ae dil-e- nadaan na jal tu beethey lamho ko sochke
Qatra qatra bahaa ke..
Kyu nahin bahaa deta tu ekbaar mein barsaat..??
Kyu karta hai tu roz roz usko yaad..??
Kyu lamha lamha tarapta hai tu..pal pal aahein bharta hai tu?
Aakhir kyu..pal pal..marta hai tu..?
Chhorde usse umeede..bhool jaa beethi baathe..
Ae dil-e-nadaan na jal tu beethey lamho ko sochke..!

Aaj bhi tumharE gali ke us kinaare aaye..
Par tum na aaye..
Suraj dhalgaya..
Raat dhalgayi..
Par tum na aaye..
My new shayari
Unki raahe dekhte thay woh na aaya
aankho se aansoon tapakte thay koi na aaya
sisak sisak ke jal gaye hum kissi ne paani tak na poocha
jal jal ke mar rahe thay hum par maut na aayi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2

Originally posted by: Sonia_ji

These are my 3 first shayari
hope u all like dem
Jisse hum apna kehte thay woh chhorgaye mujhko
Jo hame dekhe baghair ek din nahi rehsakta tha.. Usne aankhe pherli aaj humse..
Woh jo raat bhar hamse baatein karte thay.. Woh unke lab ab thartaraate hai humse baat karne ke liye..
Jin haatho ki hum kismat thay woh aaj humse hi ruth gaye..
Hai umeed aaj bhi kaash kabhi woh hamara haath pakar kar aankho mein aankh daal kar kahein ke " main aaj bhi tumhara hoon".

Ae dil-e- nadaan na jal tu beethey lamho ko sochke
Qatra qatra bahaa ke..
Kyu nahin bahaa deta tu ekbaar mein barsaat..??
Kyu karta hai tu roz roz usko yaad..??
Kyu lamha lamha tarapta hai tu..pal pal aahein bharta hai tu?
Aakhir kyu..pal pal..marta hai tu..?
Chhorde usse umeede..bhool jaa beethi baathe..
Ae dil-e-nadaan na jal tu beethey lamho ko sochke..!

Aaj bhi tumharE gali ke us kinaare aaye..
Par tum na aaye..
Suraj dhalgaya..
Raat dhalgayi..
Par tum na aaye..

wow... somebody actually does a poetry? 😃 Impressive 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haan yaar laraib..awein mein aaj kal farig sooo dil me jo aaya likhdiya...by the way u liked?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonia_ji

haan yaar laraib..awein mein aaj kal farig sooo dil me jo aaya likhdiya...by the way u liked?

very muchhh 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanksss :)
yeh to kuchh nai :P abhi to maine bharri shayar ban ni hai :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Unki raahe dekhte thay woh na aaya
aankho se aansoon tapakte thay koi na aaya
sisak sisak ke jal gaye hum kissi ne paani tak na poocha
jal jal ke mar rahe thay hum par maut na aayi...
by me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice . thaks for sharing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Keep up this good work

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