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LoveLaughLive

@LoveLaughLive

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey guys im new here i love to write shayris so here are some of my collection do comment

Umeed nahin tooti, par kuch mayoosi se hain,Aansoon nahin, par aankh main kuch nami se hain,Hont khamosh, par dil main aik aarzoo se hain Muskuraahat main bhi, kuch udaasi se hain

Badlon K Darmiyan Kuch Aysi Sazish Huyi,Mera Mitti Ka Ghar Tha Waheen Barish Huyi,Falak Ko Aadat Thi Jahan Bijliyan Girane Ki,Hum Ko Bhi Zidd Thi Waheen Ashiyana Banane Ki

HUM HAR BAAT KO KHUDA PE CHOUR DETAY HAIN..TOOTE NA DIL KISI KA DIL APNA TOUR DETAY HAIN. HUM BHI INSAAN HAIN PATHER TOU NAHI. JO LOG HAR TOOFAAN HUMARI JANIB HE MOUR DETAY HAIN

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Sehr

@KYPH-AK

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

hey 😊
welcome to the forum

great collection of shayari...especially the last one

do check other topics too and comment

one little suggestion so as u see this is a bit confusing when u read
Badlon K Darmiyan Kuch Aysi Sazish Huyi,Mera Mitti Ka Ghar Tha Waheen Barish Huyi,Falak Ko Aadat Thi Jahan Bijliyan Girane Ki,Hum Ko Bhi Zidd Thi Waheen Ashiyana Banane Ki...

u should cut it into sentences for example
Badlon K Darmiyan Kuch Aysi Sazish Huyi,
Mera Mitti Ka Ghar Tha Waheen Barish Huyi,
Falak Ko Aadat Thi Jahan Bijliyan Girane Ki,
Hum Ko Bhi Zidd Thi Waheen Ashiyana Banane Ki...

it gets easier for reader to read the rhyme of it...i hope u don't mind it was just a suggestion 😊