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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hiiiiii! Welcome to my Poetry. I've written since i was a kid, but am not a meastro. It's my biggest hobby! Feel welcome to comment!



IF

If life had just been a computer game
Where the mission is as clear as day
To be played over and over again
Untile you head the Hall of FAME

if life was just a book to read
Where everything has a final end
To be read over and over again
With a peek at the end-just in case

If life would just be a Bollywood saga
Whence it always good or bad and black or white
Fairytale beauties and Prince Charmings dance
To tune-not a step outside the beat

But then this wondrous thing called LIFE
Would never be realized as it is
This no-comeback entity made up
Of shades of grey and pastel hues

-EraN😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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aw Eran! its a really beautiful poem. 👏
yesh, life is unique and continuous, we cant press the rewind button and relive the best moments so far... or modify our acts, no matter how much we want to do it.... seems that u were inspired.. 😛 when u wrote this piece of art. were you?..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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absolutely amazing poem👏👏

you are truly a talented writer.👍🏼


Edited by ~devi~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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iz excellent piece of poetry!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you all guys! Will post more! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice work Eran..see i told ya i'll chk it out...
very well written..do share more of ur poems..i've posted mine in the sher o shayri section!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Beautiful!! Bravooo!!👏

i loved it! i wish i could write poetry like THAT!

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