ShaKhi FS: Shadows of the Past ***Updated Part 4 (last) - Pg11 (Jul 3) - Page 2

Hey hi, so can I start by saying wow? 👏

Kudos to you for handling their ideology differences in such an apt plot. Which includes no kidnapping, no Shagun, just the two main protagonists 👍🏼

Its just that whatever Shaurya said to Anokhi in the library that day cannot be taken aback. I think one should be a woman only to understand how harsh those words were, since even if we call a man 'What kind of a s*** are you?', they'll be taking it in a comical way & laugh out. Such issues should be addressed which isn't happening sadly

However what was the most appealing thing to me was how Shaurya & Anokhi discussed his choti soch & his refusal for an ambitious woman as his wife. Coming to the present, Anokhi's mocking tone without trying as she asked about that quote from Shaurya was classic. It felt straight to the mind & yes, I guess in a practical world out of the dreamy ITV fraternity touch, a woman wouldn't compromise their life for a man with such mentality & if it happens so, it'll only be because of unwanted pressure. If this scenario happened in real, this is how a girl should answer back & take her stance. Determined, career-driven & independent ❤️

Meaningful plot, waiting to see how you shape up their story at the end! Stay safe!

Something which I fear I want to see from now onwards, but I would say a very thoughtful piece, on patriarchal mentality and that homemakers can't be carrier oriented women

Originally posted by: pratikshaa100

This journey of Shaurya towards changing the thinking pattern he has for ambitious women will definitely be a treat to read. What a lovely concept! 😍

Pls continue soon, dear.

Thank you❤️ Will update soon!

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

How I wish the treatment would have been similar in the show we watch...

Beautiful writeup! Waiting for next parts... Character assassination scene was quite put under the carpet in simplest way by makers but glad it's still one of the most highlighted scene of the show...

But a concept like soch ki takkar really need to dealt as sensitively as here! It needs time, talk and reflection... Not drama like we see in the show...

So happy Shagun isn't in the picture... And she left after dropping the bomb...

Thank you❤️ the scene combined with its dialogues was profound.

Will update soon!

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Wow... i love this💖...love how you put their different sochs in writing...the conflict in their minds is so realistic...exactly what i thought of but you put into words so well...waiting eagerly for part2👍💖😊🌹

Thank You ❤️;

And it makes me happy that the write up could relate to your thoughts. hopefully, next part would be relatable to! Will update soon!

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

I wish this is what we get but pretty sure we won't.

This is one story I will come back again and again. And all the women will see themselves in Anokhi.

Thank You❤️ Means a lot when you say that it can be read more than once and about the relatibilty factor with anokhi!

Originally posted by: anjalivaswani

Loved it.. simply superb

Thank You❤️

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

This is hw the serial sd hv addressed the topic too. Bt unfortunately they won't n gv faltu ka dramas.

Thanks a lot for at least quenching my yearning through ur writing. 😃

Thank You❤️

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

I loved it, it has to be a war kind of thing and slow thinking change rather than changing with the snap of a finger. U depicted both their dilemmas perfectly.

Looking forward to the next part.

Love Preet ❤

Thank you❤️ Glad you loved it preet, and nicely described, this was kind of the thought with which I started, nice to know the thought was conveyed! Will update soon!

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Hey hi, so can I start by saying wow? 👏

Kudos to you for handling their ideology differences in such an apt plot. Which includes no kidnapping, no Shagun, just the two main protagonists 👍🏼

Its just that whatever Shaurya said to Anokhi in the library that day cannot be taken aback. I think one should be a woman only to understand how harsh those words were, since even if we call a man 'What kind of a s*** are you?', they'll be taking it in a comical way & laugh out. Such issues should be addressed which isn't happening sadly

However what was the most appealing thing to me was how Shaurya & Anokhi discussed his choti soch & his refusal for an ambitious woman as his wife. Coming to the present, Anokhi's mocking tone without trying as she asked about that quote from Shaurya was classic. It felt straight to the mind & yes, I guess in a practical world out of the dreamy ITV fraternity touch, a woman wouldn't compromise their life for a man with such mentality & if it happens so, it'll only be because of unwanted pressure. If this scenario happened in real, this is how a girl should answer back & take her stance. Determined, career-driven & independent ❤️

Meaningful plot, waiting to see how you shape up their story at the end! Stay safe!

Hey! Thank You❤️

Yea, can't tolerate shagun in the show too lol, I think when it comes to this clash no one else is needed except them and their effort (more so from shaurya, no one else can make him change except him)

as you said, Library scene was way too profound for it to be taken back; the next good thing one can do is to take conscious steps not repeat it again.

So many issues are present including the one you pointed out which doesn't have enough awareness or discussions, but atleast slowly (albeit very slowly) but things are changing, we can only hope for a more aware and sensitive society

Thanks! and I hope you like the way story shapes up; and you too, take care!