Shaurya's girl- my first OS on ShaKhi - Page 3

Originally posted by: mehr05

Hi Sejal!

Thank you for reading. I'm aware my english isn't over the top. I'm more fluent in french. Tried my best in this OS. i kept the story out of the mature content. For my own sake.

This story was adorable! It had some of beautiful moments we would like to see...

In my head though, Shagun is still nice to Anokhi... She will try to create rift between ShaKhi by Instigating Anokhi.. But all that is to torture Shaurya 😆... Hopefully makers won't make her mean to Anokhi...

Your writing style is absolutely fine and I could understand through your OS😛...

This is beautiful written ❤️

Loved the showdown 🤣 maza aaya

And his care for anokhi, shaurya carrying anokhi in his arms and tending to her ankle ☺️

And for heaven's sake SIAC students are not blind or deaf 🤣

And that i love you professor

It was so subtle and beautiful

Keep writing

I loved reading this yaar. So beautifully written. Shaurya being so gentle with Anokhi and just being an overall gentleman. Anokhi was like a chotu baccha in this.

So written and a happy read ❤️

Keep writing 💕🌼

👏 Fantastic

Love the shaurya stood up for anokhi

Really loved it. ❤️

What I liked the most are the word exchanges. ShaKhi's conversation, especially Shaurya's confession in front of Shagun... I loved them.❤️

The way you portrayed emotions and crafted scenes were upto mark.👏

Do write more works like this. Would love to read them. 🤗

Loved it

Beautifully written ❤️✨

Shaurya handled it very well 💯

End was perfect ✨

Keep writing

Originally posted by: wamavasant

And for heaven's sake SIAC students are not blind or deaf 🤣

🤣🤣