ANURAJ FF-KISMAT KONNECTION (updated part13 pg 56 and song pg 1)

shrividhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Ashakalyani
interesting...lovely update...will be waiting for future updates

thank u so much asha!! 😃

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iqrak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: shrividhya
thank u so much yaar!! 😳 tu bhi even I don't get up toh my sis wakes me up like this 😆 achcha hai yaar tu bhi likh na I wanna read!! 😃 haan Rajju ka entry kal hoga keep waiting!!
Baby I'm sorry Maine tumhara comment miss kar diya!! 😭

no need to be sorry plz

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Habiba

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Superb Shri 👏

A lovely introduction all of the characters! Sareen Saab isas always hearty and funny.. Or ye Minty... Kabhi badlegi nehi.. 😉

Eagerly waiting for Rajat's entry!! 😳

Thanks a lot!! 😊

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shrividhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: _habiba_
Superb Shri 👏
A lovely introduction all of the characters! Sareen Saab isas always hearty and funny.. Or ye Minty... Kabhi badlegi nehi.. 😉
Eagerly waiting for Rajat's entry!! 😳
Thanks a lot!! 😊

thank u so much habiba😃 hope u all like rajat sareens entry i have planned it a bit filmy😉

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Leelalore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Hi Shrividya,😊

Great to read the first chapter - a nice, sweet beginning.

What I liked best- all the characters are chipping in. Nobody is just standing around saying

nothing-many shows make this mistake and it doesn't look nice. You have made it

smoother with natural interaction!👏

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shrividhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: LoneSoldier
Hi Shrividya,😊
Great to read the first chapter - a nice, sweet beginning.

What I liked best- all the characters are chipping in. Nobody is just standing around saying

nothing-many shows make this mistake and it doesn't look nice. You have made it

smoother with natural interaction!👏

thank u so much leela it means a lot to me!!🤗

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Vits

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Thank you for this story- enjoyed the first chapter. Well done

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shrividhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Vits
Thank you for this story- enjoyed the first chapter. Well done

im glad that u liked it!! thank u vitasha😃

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Waida1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Hey...shri...! What a lovely beginning...enjoyed reading it...! You've described the distinctive natures and features of all the characters very nicely...! Loved the train scene...especially Peeya mischievous trick to wake up Devyani...! Waiting for our Hero Rajat Sareen intro...! Keep up the good work...! 👏 👍🏼

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mamta99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Hey shri. Such a lovely update. 😊 loved each part of it. Brilliant. Congrats for your ff. And hats off to u. 👏 u r also blessed with writing skills. Would like to read more. Plz update next part soon... 😉

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