ANURAJ FF- PATHS COLLIDED AND INTERWEAVED! CHAPTER 13 UPDATED PG 72 - Page 48

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Well done with writing an emotional moving chapter
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Originally posted by: Vits

Well done with writing an emotional moving chapter


thank u vitasha😃
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m updating today guys😉
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CHAPTER-9

it took a lot of guts on her part to walk into her college campus where the fest preparations were in full swing... she saw the hoardings, the lights, the costumes and recalled devyani's hurtful words, she has left behind all her demands... her dreams... her desires ... so now why does she have to look back... those memories really worked well to stab her heart... it was never easy for her to move out of that situation and there at some distance stood rajat instructing his battalion...

anu- rajat kya aap humse gussa hai???😭

rajat- miss shastri u r late for the class😳

anu- rajat pls humse baat toh kijiye😭

and rajat walked away... without even looking at her leaving a heartbroken anu behind

still caught in two minds anu but she gave a thought of having a discussion with neil about what kind of show do they really want to put up for the fest when he called her twice ... although she had said she will never want to perform but dance was something she unconditionally loved... she remembered how many a times she actually slipped while taking the spins... how she loved the sound of the tiny bells tied to the white string, her beloved ghungooroos... how her teacher used to pull her ears when she missed the beats... how she fell short of breathe and sweated profusely after every routine...😊

she entered an empty dark auditorium... with a hundred empty seats and an empty stage... but suddenly the spotlight lit and she saw the dark reflection of a tall handsome muscular frame...

EK LADKI HAI DEEWANI SI... PEHLI JO MUJHPAR NAHI MARTI HAI😆

and she suddenly giggled thinking of the so self loving rajat sareen!

SAMJHI WOOH SABKE DIL KI BAAT

PARR CHIPAAYE HUMESHAA APNE DIL KA HAAL😔

her smile vanished for a single tear rolled down her cheek... he walked towards her just to hold her hand and bring her in the spotlight where her tears just sparkled like two bright twinkling stars... cupping her face... he just said

rajat- follow your heart anu...😃

she turned but his firm grip did not let her go...

O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..

he asked for her hand holding her slightly by the waist and she just took a step forward in his possession... as he held her with utmost care and affection😳

Udne laga kyon man baawla re
Aaya kahan se yeh hosla re

keeping her hand on his shoulder she felt the soothing music seeping in her breathe... his touch was was protective and comforting... she wanted his support... in the pin drop silence of the hall ... her nervous heart needed to calm down😳


O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..

stepping on the other side she stretched out her arms which he tried to follow.. but she immediately came spinning towards him... their fingers entwined as their feet moved rhythmically😉


Tanabana tanabana bunti hawaa haaye bunti hawa
Boondein bhi to aaye nahi baaz yahan

her moments were powerful yet soft... she let her heart out letting her soul reminisce all the love she had for her passion ... she swirled around him trying to separate herself from his firm hold but he did not let her go just to bring her back in his safekeeping 😳


Sagish mein shaamil sara jahan hai
Har zare zare ki yeh iltiza hai

her tipped toe worked on the floor just for her to lean in his chest... as his fingertip lifted her chin up she smiled noticing the sincerity in his eyes but his other hand just got busy in pulling her loosened rubber band letting her know about the mischievous being he was😉


O re Piya
O re Piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re Piya

her movements were graceful... her style was commendable and her expressions were something one can die for... he damced as she directed... from step to step to beat to beat... swaying her in his arms he let her be on the stage... as her feet matched every beat of the song...❤️

ni re ,re re ga
ga ga ma
ma ma pa
pa ma ga re sa
sa re re sa
ga ga re
ma ma ga
pa pa ma
dha dha pa
ni ni sa sa pa
pa sa ma pa dha ni sa ni
re ni sa sa sa.. . . . ..

her footwork was sharp, crisp and neat and all her spins seemed to be so well practiced... she was owning the stage forgetting all her pain, all her bad memories... she just danced😳


Nazrein bolen duniya bole
dil ki zaban haaye dil ki zubaan
Ishq maange ishq chahe koi toofan

she stood sweating profusely in the middle of the stage, her chest was throbbing heavily but her slightly bent waist with her twisted wrists held by her fingers made her such a lovable poised angel to admire...

Chalna aahiste ishq naya hai
Pehla yeh vada humne kiya hai

her duppata slipped from her shoulder but the flair of her plain red anarkali was making her look even more beautiful... she held her dress just to amble across the stage like a royal princess...😳


O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya
Piyaaa...

yehhh piya

she perfomed a learned piece of some footwork which he enjoyed watching but was hardly able to understand... her face glowed because of her boundless happiness... her footwork was energetic but the delicate movements of her wrists complimented her performance very well... he did not know what she was doing but at the same time he did not know what was happening to him...😲


Nange pairo pe angaro
chalti rahi haaye chalti rahi
Lagta hai ke gairo mein
Palti rahi haaye
le chal wahan jo
Mulk tera hai
Jahil zamana
dushman mera hai

he stood like a statue in a corner of the stage admiring her magnificence but she just stopped to walk towards him... he wiped the sweat trickling from her forehead with his handkerchief...😳


O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..

she did not speak a word... he did not fing it necessary to converse... the vividness in her eyes and the luster on her face satisfied him and the care, sincerity and genuineness in his eyes reassured her about how she was not living a dream... ❤️


O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..

she asked for his hand so as to return his favor but the moment had become awkwardly cute as she slipped not fall but to land in a pair of strong protective arms and that added a really dramatic feel to the moment...😉


O re piya haye..

he helped her stand but her eyes... fixed on the wooden stage did not dare to look up as she located her duppataa fallen somewhere in the middle of the stage.. she walked away to pick it up as he left her grabbed wrist...😳

the moment they shared was a memorable one but awkward at the same time he thought as the day passed by... and now in the storeroom he was enjoying how she excitedly tightened all the knots of her ghungooroos chirping continuously about various incidences in her life as a performer... but while searching for a bell of her thread she found a broken cane with rajat's name written on it...

anu- rajat ye aapkaa hai???🤔

rajat- haa... bohot puraanaa hai... u know I met an accident during my training days...😒

anu- haa sareen uncle told me about it😊

and the single tear on his cheek scared her to the core...

rajat- u know anu it was intentional one... some of my batchmates pushed me down a hill just because they feared that I will win a race scheduled the next day!😭

anu- phir??? 😲

rajat- tumbling down the hill my left foot broke into two pieces because of a passing bike... I did not realize what was happening... I felt numb... tumhe pata hai tab bilkul dard nahi ho raha thha but after my operation It felt horrible!😭

and now anu was not able to control her tears

rajat- u know those 8 months... 3 weeks and 5 days on my bed were killing me from inside every moment... mujhe laga shaayad meri life khatam ho jaaegi... I felt it was useless living as I was denied my uniform after that... u know maine ye baat kisi ko nahi bataai coz at that time both mom and dad were happy that atleast I was able to walk that I was alive but from inside my heart cursed my mind for being unattentive, for being careless... 😭

rajat- anu u know I was the happiest person on this earth when I saw u dancing today because I know when u are hurt... when you are just about to lose all your dreams your ambitions... u r heartbroken and I say a person like u can never deserve that terrible feeling...😭

anu felt so guilty for complaining to rajat about her pain in life because now in front of his struggle, his suffering her tears seemed so small... she just hugged him tightly with her forehead against his neck...🤗

rajat- anu what happened??? ye kya hai!😲

anu- JAADU KI JHAPPI... u know this always works!😳

rajat- yeah it works wonders but anushkaji... I hate tears re!!!😉


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poitu!!!!😳 this was so magical!!! aisa toh laga hi nahi ki im reading a story! i was living the scene! so beautifully scripted!!!😳 the dance!! omg!!! i was so beautiful!!! every single move expression was explained so intricately i lost myself to anu!!!it was not rajat but i felt myself standing in the corner looking at her dance her heart out!!!😃 this part proved u to be a pro in expressing!!!and the store room scene!!! yaar rajat ne toh rula diya yaar😭😭 itna dard!!!😭😭 hayeee!!! and the way she comforted him by hugging was so cute!!!😳 all in all im struck by ur awesome writing😳 im so glad to read it😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanku so much poorva for such a nice update... that's a nice thing to see the growing relationship between anuraj... a sweet and small dance between anuraj was nice and i had a great treat in visualizing each and every scene of yours
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Originally posted by: shrividhya

poitu!!!!😳 this was so magical!!! aisa toh laga hi nahi ki im reading a story! i was living the scene! so beautifully scripted!!!😳 the dance!! omg!!! i was so beautiful!!! every single move expression was explained so intricately i lost myself to anu!!!it was not rajat but i felt myself standing in the corner looking at her dance her heart out!!!😃 this part proved u to be a pro in expressing!!!and the store room scene!!! yaar rajat ne toh rula diya yaar😭😭 itna dard!!!😭😭 hayeee!!! and the way she comforted him by hugging was so cute!!!😳 all in all im struck by ur awesome writing😳 im so glad to read it😃


thank u so much yaar u know i right just and just because u all read... actually i have performed on this song toh jaise khud dance kiya thha waise anu ko bhi karwaa diyaa.. rajat ne! yeah on rajat's part, it was a bit sad but that is the basis of the kind of man he... of true blood and flesh!😳 aur haa even my fav part was the JAADU KI JHAPPI😉 ye le ere liya😳🤗
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Originally posted by: hari15

thanku so much poorva for such a nice update... that's a nice thing to see the growing relationship between anuraj... a sweet and small dance between anuraj was nice and i had a great treat in visualizing each and every scene of yours


thank u so much hari it is always my pleasure to write for u all😊 btw can i know your favorite romantic no.😳
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Amazing update...pooru...! The dance scene was very emotional...! You have meticulously and conscientiously described the whole scene...taking into consideration and determining both Rajat and Anu emotions...! Enjoyed reading it...! 👏🤗


PS: No need to mention...I didn't understand the song...! Sorry...very sorry soul sister...! 😕
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Amazing update...pooru...! The dance scene was very emotional...! You have meticulously and conscientiously described the whole scene...taking into consideration and determining both Rajat and Anu emotions...! Enjoyed reading it...! 👏🤗



PS: No need to mention...I didn't understand the song...! Sorry...very sorry soul sister...! 😕


thank u so much soul sister aand for the song it is a romantic melody with a sufi feel again from a hindi movie here comes the translation

O RE PIYAA

ohh dear beloved

UDDNE LAGAA KYON MANN BAWLAA RE

AAYAA KAHA SE YEH HAUSLAA RE

O RE PIYAA

my heart feels freedom being with u

I wonder from where I muster the courage

ohh my dear beloved

TANA BANA TANA BANA BOONTI HAWAA

BOONDE BHI AAYE NAHI BAAZ YAHAA

the winds are conspiring to bring us together

and even the raindrops are supporting them

SAAZISH MEIN SHAAMIL SARA JAHAA HAI

HAR ZARRE ZARRE KI YEH ILTEJAA HAI

the whole world is planning to bring us together

every being resent in this nature is requesting us

NAZREIN BOLE DUNIYA BOLE DIL KI ZUBAAN

ISHQ MAANGE ISHQ CHAAHE KOI TOOFAN

our eyes do the talking and the world gets to know our love

and again it is proven that true love has to struggle in the storms of cruelity

CHALNAA AAHISTAA ISHQ NAYA HAI

PEHLAA YE WAADAA HUMNE KIYA HAI

be careful in the path of true love

this is a new feeling, this is the first promise

NANGE PAIRRO PE ANGARE CHALTI RAHI HAA CHALTI RAHI

LAGTA HAI K GAIROO MEIN MAIN PALTI RAHI

m struggling for my life my love

and now I feel the whole world is against me

LE CHAL WAHA JO MULK TERA HAI

JAAHIL ZAMAANA DUSHMANN MERA HAI

take me away from here

the whole world is the envious enemy of our love

O RE PIYAA

ohh my dear beloved...


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