FF: The Horizon Ch 55(a) ,55 (b) & Epilogue-page 144 updated 5th J

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Veejay_kfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

wow simply superb lovely update !!eagerly waiting for u next update !!

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manishasatpathy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

amazing!! by the way i dont understand one thing why is anu playing this hide n seek game with rajat, is it because of the awkward they spebt together in the same house?

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Leelalore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: awida
Nice update!
AnuRaj fight of words is very beautifully and cleverly written. And Niel's intruducing brought a fresh air in the story. Love his character.

AlHan also are coming..I hope they aren't a boring couple which are coming with suggested relations for Anu. And I feel like you made many changes in previous characters..you are going to sutprise us by AlHan too.

Thanks awida. you are right on both counts-regarding Neel and the other characters.

I shape characters to support the weight of the story as well as interest the readers. Hope you continue to like it .

Always look forward to your response.😊

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Leelalore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: shrividhya
Awesome update!!! Hope to see some more romantic moments btwn AnuRaj in holi!!! 😳

But of course ShriVidya,! How can it be avoided?😉

Edited by LoneSoldier - 10 years ago

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Leelalore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: eshah143
wow simply superb lovely update !!eagerly waiting for u next update !!

thank you for the kind response. Glad you like it!😊

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Leelalore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: manishasatpathy
amazing!! by the way i dont understand one thing why is anu playing this hide n seek game with rajat, is it because of the awkward they spebt together in the same house?

You got it right Manisha. Minty's sly look and Rajat's abrupt departure from her house made things more awkward!😆

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Leelalore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: mamta99
So cute 😳
Love their first interaction, with pyari si nok jhok
All that I wanted to see and thank you so much
For one more lovely update 😊
I guess it is going to be more interesting and romantic further
And let's she how they will play holi 😳

Thank you for the kind response. So glad you like it.

You are right about the story getting more interesting from this point!😊

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Leelalore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: iqrak
wow i realy like the way u play with your words 😊
amazing loving it👍🏼

Thank you iqrak. Keep reading dear-more word power coming up!😉

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Leelalore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: eshah143
wow simply superb lovely update !!eagerly waiting for u next update !!

Thank you so much eshah. I am glad you enjoyed it!😊

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Waida1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Lovely updates Leela...enjoyed it...! Read chapter 5 & 6 in one go...loved the way you play with the words...! Happy that although your story is completely different from the show...you're introducing the characters of the show one by one...each one at the right moment...! Loved the hide and seek game of Anu and the first knok jhok of Anuraj...! Anu is giving Rajat a hard time...I must say she is very smart...! Poor Rajat gave up his other activities, stopped meeting his friends...just to have a glimpse of Anu, and finally he got what...Babaji ka Tullu...!😆 Hope to see some lovey dovey moments of Anuraj in Holi...I want Anuraj Holi to be better in your FF than it was in the show...! What a headache and bakwass Holi it was...full of nagin drama...Uff..

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