Shani-Dhamini OS: His Eyes - Page 2

Wow The Second Chapter Was Beautiful.
Dhamini Really Loves Shani. 😳
Hope She Some How Finds A Way To Get Rid Of The Curse.

Damn it's magical...such a soothing story

luved it luvd it...❤️ plz continue soon... njoyed reading it...😳

This is heart wrenching... love how Dhamini is supporting Shani

I am overwhelmed by your wonderful appreciations for last chapters.😳 I am turning the power of the curse stronger and dangerous in this story, also Shani more troubled emotionally than the show. You have all the right to throw rotten tomatoes at me.🤢

Chapter 3: Wall

From today your gaze will bring only destruction on whoever you will look at ...Waves of memories broke against the shore of his consciousness, and Shani's eyes flew open, and his gaze turned the flowery canopy above him brown and dead.

"From now on you can not control your gaze, Shani. Mahadev's voice continued ringing inside his head, "Your gaze will bring only destruction.

Frustrated, Shani closed his eyes.

He remembered his first curse- his father's curse. He was banned from the rays of the sun for so long, now he was banned to look at anyone forever.

"Shanidev, please help us... Many and many voices continued ringing inside his head, begging for justice, begging for fruit of their deeds. There were so many wrongs happening in the world. But he could not do anything to prevent this.

Feeling a rage of uncontrollable anger, Shani sat straight up on the bed. The air swirled violently around him, an unrelenting tornado reflecting his inner feelings. He remembered last night, how his gaze burnt hole into the arm of the little Gandharva girl who only wanted to offer her gratitude. But more than anger he was sad. No, beyond sad, even. he felt hopeless.

His devotees, the only people he allowed himself to care about, and he accidentally hurt someone with his pow- no, his curse.

He could not bring justice to the world anymore. Moreover he became a danger to everyone.

At a distance he could hear a lovely humming. The song seemed too familiar. Shani took a deep breath, and the sound of the song began to calm him down.

Dhamini...

She was singing his mother's lori while cooking foods for two of them.

The bed was still smelt of her, her warmth still did not leave his body. Shani remembered how gently she held him when he finally broke down, how her lori soothed his troubled mind, how her gentle whisper finally put his aching body down into a dreamless sleep.

You always bring sorrow to everyone. How much sorrow you will give to those who love you? His mother's voice at the night of Grhayudh rang inside his head. He had no right to make Dhamini live with a person who could bring her destruction by his gaze. He had no right to hurt his innocent devotes who prayed to him for justice. He could live with his curse. He had no right to bring sorrow in anybody's life.

"NO! Shani violently tried to shake the thoughts out of his head, but eventually, he got tired of fighting.

Slowly he rose from the bed, his head was still wobbly, his head was still aching. The curse was also sucking the life force away from his body. Slowly he made his way towards the inner chamber of his childhood home, behind the dark curtain where his mother used to hide him from his father's curse.

He closed the curtain behind him and sat on the stone where his mother used to sit when he was little. He waved his hand, and a wall of energy began to form around him, separating him from rest of the world.

"Dhamini will not find me. He thought as he closed the curtain behind him. Memories after memories flooded his vision.

He looked around the room where he once thought his mother used to hide during the day.

The painful truth when he found it was only a lie.

The eventful night when he learned about his father's curse.

His father's rays burnt his flesh.

And then Badhra...the little sister who loved him dearly, dying in his arms.

He closed his eyes, letting a single tear to fall. No he would not feel attachment to anyone anymore. Not with the world.

"Shani...

His chain of thought was broken with a soft voice from behind. "Dhamini... His hands stopped in the midair, leaving the energy barrier half finished. His lowered gaze met her tiny toes adorned with silver toe rings.

"Go away.. He averted his eyes before the power of his gaze could burn her toes.

"No, Dhamini took another step forward standing between him, and the energy barrier forming around him, "I am not letting you to detach yourself again form everything.

"You're not safe here..." Shani addressed Dhamini and felt the ground around him cracking. He clumped his eyes shut. If he completely lost control now, Dhamini would be killed! That terrified realization only forced him to throw more power from his hand and to close the barrier around him.

Memories of Bhadra killing herself flashed before his eyes. He could not let the history repeat itself.

"Go away, He cried. The power of curse was getting stronger. His gaze fell on the pillar behind Dhamini, and it began to crack.

Before Dhamini could move any closer through the power emitting from his body, Shani steeled himself and carefully created a thick wall of transparent energy barrier between himself and his wife. He shot his gaze on a nearby pillar and it did not go through the barrier, much to his relief. Dhamini was safe for the moment.

He closed his eyes again, a drop of tear trailed along his cheek.

To be continued...

Give me ideas how Dhamini can break Shani's shell?

Comments, appreciation, constructive criticism are welcome...

Hey...it's awesome. Emotional Shani is a treat to watch. I wish writer shows the vulnerable side of one of the most feared gods. Wouldn't that be great? Keep going. Breaking the curse...when Mahadev lands himself in crisis, it is his Shakti who comes to his aid. The energy that runs through the veins of every being..maa Gauri. I think as a mother, as a wife and as the supreme goddess, she might be able to understand the curse of Shani Dev and the pain both are going through. She puts their relationship to test and impressed by them, she will bend the curse...it's a suggestion.

Wow...I am impressed.

Amazing⭐️⭐️⭐️. Every human fears Shani but here you have shown that even the most powerful can be emotional too. The pathetic writer of the show has made everyone think that Shani is equal to destruction. But, your story is like a breath of fresh air.

luvd to read dis vulnerable side of shani...as we never get to c him breaking down.. we all think him to b strong of course he is bt dn d most powerful astro god has his darker side too...😳u have beautifully wrttn his emotions...waiting fr more...updte soon...😃