Some Idea for Future Track on HaYa along with Epi take

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I cant believe what I saw yesterday 😲 ..An entire episode dedicated to Shanno and her rights ?? really ?? 😲...Do Shakti Writers really think we watch the show to see if Shanno gets her rights or not ?? 😆

Its high time Shakti writers pull up their socks and bring a drastic change in the storyline because trps wont rise with such episodes and once trp falls below 2 mark , no matter what u show , it will not rise .. So do something before its too late .. Mayb change your writer and bring a new young writer with fresh ideas and who knows how to present a unique love story focussing on the main leads , that is HaYa ..

And if they need ideas , let us fans know .. We hv better ideas than our so called writer .. If u really want trps to go up then bring in the main concept of Society vs HaYa asap where Society finds out Soumya is a kinner and want to kill off Soumya , then HaYa run away from home while society chases them .. After some action packed episodes and HaYa intense moments , if needed kill off HaYa with a dramatic high point episode and then go for Reincarnation with HaYa taking rebirth again , of course same faces but different names and family ..Remember once Saya told Soumya that change will definitely come and mindsets will change too but mayb HaYa wont b there to witness it .. So show something similar like society accepting HaYa's love after they die and then go for rebirth with HaYa eventually returning back to Gurdaspur again .. This time Soumya will b a complete girl and both HaYa will get flashes of their past birth .. Then how they meet , how their love story starts again and how they eventually remember everything can b shown in detail .. Even kinner connection can b kept with Saya becoming the main medium for HaYa's meeting post rebirth .. Think about it as this track will hv enough potential for trps ..


Coming to yesterday's episode , I really dunno what to write because nothing really progressed other than Harak declaring that he will give 11,000 monthly salary to Viren-Shanno from now onwards when Soumya insisted about Shanno's rights .. Woww what a progress in story 😆...And the irony is nothing was edited in yesterday's episode when the editor was needed to edit the scene and not waste complete 20 mins on Shanno's rights giving ceremony 😆

Also I m disappointed with the way HaYa's characters r again going downhill ...

Soumya is once again becoming Preeto's puppet , shivering and getting scared of Preeto like she used to b .. What was the use of showing strong Soumya then in previous track when they had to make her Preeto's puppet again ?? ..I know for the first time she got the courage to spoke about someone's rights which Harman will praise in today's episode , but the way she is almost shivering whenever Preeto or Harak speaks , I see that same timid Soumya once again in Singh house and that new strong Soumya is lost somewhere

Coming to Harman , the moment he is back in Singh house , that intelligent smart Harman who instantly sensed Harak's hand in fake murder charges is lost somewhere and now he instantly believes that Preeto is a great mother-in-law who accepted Soumya and even distributing sweets to all in Preeto's honour ?? 😕...He so easily forgot how HarPreeto disowned them and kicked them out of the house after they lost Aditya ? ..He also forgot how Preeto was major reason why they lost Aditya ? Suddenly he believes Preeto has changed and distributes sweets to all ??...I know he wanted this change since long and also wanted to see Soumya getting that respect and acceptance in his family , so he was really happy when she finally got all that but I was expecting him to keep his doubts intact on Preeto at least even if he was shown happy yesterday ..

Though I did like Harman's style of forcibly feeding sweets to all unhappy souls and celebrating Gulabo's victory 😆 ..Also loved that moment when he feeds his Gulabo 😳..


And I thought Preeto's plan will b a dangerous one but yeh toh tai tai phus nikla 😆..She gave keys to Soumya so that rest of the family starts hating her .. hein ? Well who cares as long as Harman is not hating Soumya and we all know Harman even in his wildest dreams cannot even get such thought 😆...Preeto's idea looked more like her desperation to win Harman's trust than anything else .. It was quite a thanda plan from her this time 😆...

Coming to Shanno's rights , I really dont get the reason why this scene was dragged so much .. Unwanted drama and nothing else .. only good thing is yes Soumya spoke up for someone's rights and with this she might earn brownie points from Viren-Shanno , so Preeto's plan to make everyone hate Soumya is not really working here .. Also liked how Harman kept supporting Soumya in front of all and asked Harak to listen to what Soumya had to say and then sit and talk instead of shouting unnecessarily 😆 ..Well he spoke what we viewers r saying too since last 2 weeks 😆😆

Last but not the least , Surbhi and her crying over divorce papers but why ?? 😕 .. Is she sad that she will b called a divorcee now which obviously is not a good tag for anyone or is she sad because she still has feelings for her Jiju and so upset with the divorce ...Anyways looks like VarBhi marriage on cards now with Maninder talking to Varun about it .. good for us 😆

Overall a bad episode with Precao as only saving grace as it was focussing on HaYa


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anitarani thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully written...a pity CVs have totally lost the plot...and everything...and
a concept which could have been dealt with so well...is come to this...I wish
CVs do read each of your posts so that the grey cells can be activated and
they take the required advice...Dont even want to discuss anything about
episodes dedicate to Preeto Empire...and the treatment of her slaves as she
rules ruthlessly...this is Shakti...empowerment of the cruel...😡
Edited by anitarani - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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dont know their problem
ths show is going down day by day 😕


amazing post jyoti ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

I cant believe what I saw yesterday 😲 ..An entire episode dedicated to Shanno and her rights ?? really ?? 😲...Do Shakti Writers really think we watch the show to see if Shanno gets her rights or not ?? 😆

Its high time Shakti writers pull up their socks and bring a drastic change in the storyline because trps wont rise with such episodes and once trp falls below 2 mark , no matter what u show , it will not rise .. So do something before its too late .. Mayb change your writer and bring a new young writer with fresh ideas and who knows how to present a unique love story focussing on the main leads , that is HaYa ..

And if they need ideas , let us fans know .. We hv better ideas than our so called writer .. If u really want trps to go up then bring in the main concept of Society vs HaYa asap where Society finds out Soumya is a kinner and want to kill off Soumya , then HaYa run away from home while society chases them .. After some action packed episodes and HaYa intense moments , if needed kill off HaYa with a dramatic high point episode and then go for Reincarnation with HaYa taking rebirth again , of course same faces but different names and family ..Remember once Saya told Soumya that change will definitely come and mindsets will change too but mayb HaYa wont b there to witness it .. So show something similar like society accepting HaYa's love after they die and then go for rebirth with HaYa eventually returning back to Gurdaspur again .. This time Soumya will b a complete girl and both HaYa will get flashes of their past birth .. Then how they meet , how their love story starts again and how they eventually remember everything can b shown in detail .. Even kinner connection can b kept with Saya becoming the main medium for HaYa's meeting post rebirth .. Think about it as this track will hv enough potential for trps ..


Coming to yesterday's episode , I really dunno what to write because nothing really progressed other than Harak declaring that he will give 11,000 monthly salary to Viren-Shanno from now onwards when Soumya insisted about Shanno's rights .. Woww what a progress in story 😆...And the irony is nothing was edited in yesterday's episode when the editor was needed to edit the scene and not waste complete 20 mins on Shanno's rights giving ceremony 😆

Also I m disappointed with the way HaYa's characters r again going downhill ...

Soumya is once again becoming Preeto's puppet , shivering and getting scared of Preeto like she used to b .. What was the use of showing strong Soumya then in previous track when they had to make her Preeto's puppet again ?? ..I know for the first time she got the courage to spoke about someone's rights which Harman will praise in today's episode , but the way she is almost shivering whenever Preeto or Harak speaks , I see that same timid Soumya once again in Singh house and that new strong Soumya is lost somewhere

Coming to Harman , the moment he is back in Singh house , that intelligent smart Harman who instantly sensed Harak's hand in fake murder charges is lost somewhere and now he instantly believes that Preeto is a great mother-in-law who accepted Soumya and even distributing sweets to all in Preeto's honour ?? 😕...He so easily forgot how HarPreeto disowned them and kicked them out of the house after they lost Aditya ? ..He also forgot how Preeto was major reason why they lost Aditya ? Suddenly he believes Preeto has changed and distributes sweets to all ??...I know he wanted this change since long and also wanted to see Soumya getting that respect and acceptance in his family , so he was really happy when she finally got all that but I was expecting him to keep his doubts intact on Preeto at least even if he was shown happy yesterday ..

Though I did like Harman's style of forcibly feeding sweets to all unhappy souls and celebrating Gulabo's victory 😆 ..Also loved that moment when he feeds his Gulabo 😳..


And I thought Preeto's plan will b a dangerous one but yeh toh tai tai phus nikla 😆..She gave keys to Soumya so that rest of the family starts hating her .. hein ? Well who cares as long as Harman is not hating Soumya and we all know Harman even in his wildest dreams cannot even get such thought 😆...Preeto's idea looked more like her desperation to win Harman's trust than anything else .. It was quite a thanda plan from her this time 😆...

Coming to Shanno's rights , I really dont get the reason why this scene was dragged so much .. Unwanted drama and nothing else .. only good thing is yes Soumya spoke up for someone's rights and with this she might earn brownie points from Viren-Shanno , so Preeto's plan to make everyone hate Soumya is not really working here .. Also liked how Harman kept supporting Soumya in front of all and asked Harak to listen to what Soumya had to say and then sit and talk instead of shouting unnecessarily 😆 ..Well he spoke what we viewers r saying too since last 2 weeks 😆😆

Last but not the least , Surbhi and her crying over divorce papers but why ?? 😕 .. Is she sad that she will b called a divorcee now which obviously is not a good tag for anyone or is she sad because she still has feelings for her Jiju and so upset with the divorce ...Anyways looks like VarBhi marriage on cards now with Maninder talking to Varun about it .. good for us 😆

Overall a bad episode with Precao as only saving grace as it was focussing on HaYa
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Nice post jyoti I totally agree what you said;if CVS see our points of views &ideas about future tracks Shakti will be on top.

Edited by Flora15 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you for your amazing post

I love your posts 😳

I think the creators woke up, and saas bahu, crap, ends. According to promo, there will be another track, very strong.

Hope that the creators, put everything in order.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A story of a beautiful, a problem Elkinar social issue address community and try to earn a living the life of her rights, but the offer has become boring and it has provoked a result of new events and family drama Britto and sullen and screaming and focus on them may offer and story credibility please focus p story core, a Elkinar and response to the community and the way to solve the problem, treatment and focus p duo Haya Herman and SOMIAH and made them the story of love and support each other in confronting society in order to get p normal life focus p solution to the problem Elkinar and addressed the treatment and the face of society and create a new and exciting events and exciting in the series and love story wonderful Mzh E p screen between Herman and SOMIAH in making them a normal life without drama, independent and frequent drama Family Screed
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Posted: 8 years ago
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first let me disagree with you about your idea for future tracks I don't want HaYa to get killed and back as normal I want solution for Somya as a kinner cause if they killed Somya so the message of the show will be for a kinner don't dream to live normal life cause you will be killed and the only solution for your is in the next life so lvie your life as they decide for you
I want Somya to get reated and to live her life as a normal woman with her husband
here we have thousends of people like Somya they got treated and live their life normaly without any problems and without any one knows out of the family
so why they can't live normaly in India
this is the message of the show to make a kinner live normal life with her husband and she can has her won kids one day
that's what I don't want them to kill HaYa and back as normal couple

about last night episode there is nothing to say
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anitarani

Beautifully written...a pity CVs have totally lost the plot...and everything...and

a concept which could have been dealt with so well...is come to this...I wish
CVs do read each of your posts so that the grey cells can be activated and
they take the required advice...Dont even want to discuss anything about
episodes dedicate to Preeto Empire...and the treatment of her slaves as she
rules ruthlessly...this is Shakti...empowerment of the cruel...😡



Mayb new ME promo is the damage control we all r waiting for ..we kept cribbing of no Harman in montage , so new promo is all about Harman only 😆 .. good thing is they r hearing our tweets 😆

hope main episodes r as good as new promo .. fingers crossed because these saas bahu episodes r clearly not working and even trp junta rejected it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zubeada

dont know their problem

ths show is going down day by day 😕


amazing post jyoti ❤️



their problem is side character obsession .. first it was Surbhi and now Preeto .. but trp viewers give them good slaps time to time 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flora15




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Nice post jyoti I totally agree what you said;if CVS see our points of views &ideas about future tracks Shakti will be on top.


thanks a lot dear .. hope CVs do the damage control after seeing current trps 😆

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