Say you are mine. Short HaYa ff part 25 (3.10.2016) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful Update...!
Intense one i say... Harman lifestyle & him r complete mystery & u r writing it so well Soul... 👏
Somu is trying to understand him slowly, from her side she's making efforts to understand her hubby 😃
Definitely her hubby has mood swings 😆
Kaka is cool; Darling wala kaka 😆
Kishore Kumar song is apt for Harman life i guess...
Now further Harman u wud be watching a duet with somu as she's gonna change u slowly... 😆
Soumya charcter is intersting & lovely... positive towards life girl...
Harman seems a pessimist.
He loved watching Somu... I'm expecting more to come btwn them& their bond grows..
I wish to read HaYa fun scenes also where harman has no way but act as her hubby somehow if that way story goes...
Even though more than me u wud be having fantastic ideas for these 2 in ur story... just letting my thoughts know u, thats it 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Beautiful Update...!

Intense one i say... Harman lifestyle & him r complete mystery & u r writing it so well Soul... 👏
Somu is trying to understand him slowly, from her side she's making efforts to understand her hubby 😃
Definitely her hubby has mood swings 😆
Kaka is cool; Darling wala kaka 😆
Kishore Kumar song is apt for Harman life i guess...
Now further Harman u wud be watching a duet with somu as she's gonna change u slowly... 😆
Soumya charcter is intersting & lovely... positive towards life girl...
Harman seems a pessimist.
He loved watching Somu... I'm expecting more to come btwn them& their bond grows..
I wish to read HaYa fun scenes also where harman has no way but act as her hubby somehow if that way story goes...
Even though more than me u wud be having fantastic ideas for these 2 in ur story... just letting my thoughts know u, thats it 😃


Thanks for liking it. To be very honest Harman has a lot of reason to be pessimistic, his life has not been an easy one. Totally different from our onscreen Harman who has led a pampered life. Soumya is definitely going to change our Harman here but it will take time, love and patience to do that. HaYa will have fun and intense love scenes where both will have a lot to show to each other. Harman is a man of few words in this ff. This is a very emotional story. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Gosh new chappy... Hehe harman ki beauty dekhke somu ke man me ladoo fute and them somu ki neauty dekhke harman ke dil ke darvaje khulenge🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak

Gosh new chappy... Hehe harman ki beauty dekhke somu ke man me ladoo fute and them somu ki neauty dekhke harman ke dil ke darvaje khulenge🤣


Lol! that is the plan 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear I'm on phone so I can't post the comments for all the parts in just one post so I'll post more... 😳 hope you don't mind 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

Dear I'm on phone so I can't post the comments for all the parts in just one post so I'll post more... 😳 hope you don't mind 🤗


Keep 'em coming girl!!!! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

This is really different. Just love your portrayal of Harman... His entry talks a lot!!! Classy...
I must say the way you choose your words is so good... ❤️ Your description is all we need to connect with the story and characters. I must say I had too read it in one go 'cause it is too good!
Seems like this confident and handsome Harman is every girl's dream. 😆 What a determined man! Seems like this is the recipe of success. Hard-working personality, a classy attitude and confidence 😉
"Yes he made decisions, he made them in time and he stuck to them through thick and thin." - love this line, perfectly said!!!
The reception scene was so funny 😆
Girls are after him and he doesn't even give a damn... 😆
"Travel was a need and escape a desire he had combined both to suit his work the result was spell binding success." - Wow you nailed this! ❤️
So finally the driver tells him about the weather... and the radio thing is so true 😆
I usually do that... 😆 I mean changing it till I recognize a song 😆
Oh... Seems like Harman has a painful past and he doesn't want to remember it anything about it 🥺 I could feel the emotions... Amazingly written dear!!
The driver started chanting Gayatri mantra... in the back seat 😆 so Monty like 😆 🤣
So Harman is the best driver out there... 😳 this man multi talented 😆
Lekin iss baar kuch galat hua 🥺 And they faced that accident... The way you wrote that scene is incredible! Hats off to you dear ❤️
I'll come later with comments on the next parts dear...
Enjoying the story a lot You made me fall in love with the characters!! Keep it up dear 🤗 your work is fabulous...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

Part 1

This is really different. Just love your portrayal of Harman... His entry talks a lot!!! Classy...

I wanted Harman to be suave... 😆
I must say the way you choose your words is so good... ❤️ Your description is all we need to connect with the story and characters. I must say I had too read it in one go 'cause it is too good!

Aw thanks so much 😳😳
Seems like this confident and handsome Harman is every girl's dream. 😆 What a determined man! Seems like this is the recipe of success. Hard-working personality, a classy attitude and confidence 😉
"Yes he made decisions, he made them in time and he stuck to them through thick and thin." - love this line, perfectly said!!!

Well Harman here is very responsible no funny business sort of guy , I always found Vivian to have a very commanding presence and wanted to write something that would actually mirror that thought.
The reception scene was so funny 😆
Girls are after him and he doesn't even give a damn... 😆
"Travel was a need and escape a desire he had combined both to suit his work the result was spell binding success." - Wow you nailed this! ❤️

Which girl would not be after our drool worthy Harman? 😆 He does despise women but he has reasons for that trust me.
So finally the driver tells him about the weather... and the radio thing is so true 😆
I usually do that... 😆 I mean changing it till I recognize a song 😆

Don't we all 😆
Oh... Seems like Harman has a painful past and he doesn't want to remember it anything about it 🥺 I could feel the emotions... Amazingly written dear!!

Yup he does, thanks for liking it 😊
The driver started chanting Gayatri mantra... in the back seat 😆 so Monty like 😆 🤣
So Harman is the best driver out there... 😳 this man multi talented 😆
Lekin iss baar kuch galat hua 🥺 And they faced that accident... The way you wrote that scene is incredible! Hats off to you dear ❤️

If he is going to be stupid and drive rashly there will be consequences 😆
I'll come later with comments on the next parts dear... Look forward to that!
Enjoying the story a lot You made me fall in love with the characters!! Keep it up dear 🤗 your work is fabulous...

Thank you so much!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soul76



Lol! that is the plan😆


I like this plan🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soul76



Lol! that is the plan😆


I like this plan🤣
Jo ankho ko bhaaye wo dil ko kese na lubhaye🤣

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