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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Amrtina
It's amazing
Please continue

thnks fr d comment 😳 its an one shot dear... i have no plans to write but u never know 😳😳

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Shadow-Fax
It's beautuful, nicely written
I loved it😊

thnks dear 😳

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.
Aww... 😭 you made me cry re...
It is beautiful... make it longer. Continue it please... ❤️
The kumkum and crossing the threshold lines were indeed very touching... :( You portrayed Somu's feeling so well... Starting from the unknown feeling she had when he first walked into her house to the point where her dreams were broken. 💔 In few seconds her whole universe vanished and she doesn't even know what made him react like this... :(
I loved it re... 🤗
Want more of it... 😆 I'm addicted to your writing now... if you have time, please continue it. 😳

i know u are addicted to shades of my writing 😆😆 have not thought about more... will try something for shobhis demand and rest can be seen later 😳😳

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xAishuuux

@xAishuuux

Elite

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: BlackWidowBaby
i know u are addicted to shades of my writing😆😆have not thought about more... will try something for shobhis demand and rest can be seen later😳😳

Take your time 😆 waiting... 😳 🤣 I mean... all are waiting. For Shobi's demand 🤣

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.
Take your time 😆 waiting... 😳 🤣 I mean... all are waiting. For Shobi's demand 🤣

kisiko bata nahi demand k baare me 🤣🤣🤣 surprise hoga 🤣🤣🤣

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xAishuuux

@xAishuuux

Elite

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Aur yeh kya tha you wrote it during that biology experiment? 😲 😆 Hun how do you manage to keep your concentration on it? I fail badly 😆 so badly... 🤣 But it is not that much surprising naa, you have a lot of shades... 🤣

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xAishuuux

@xAishuuux

Elite

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: BlackWidowBaby
kisiko bata nahi demand k baare me🤣🤣🤣surprise hoga🤣🤣🤣

pakka promise 😆

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Reenatyzed

@Reenatyzed

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.
Aur yeh kya tha you wrote it during that biology experiment? 😲 😆 Hun how do you manage to keep your concentration on it? I fail badly 😆 so badly... 🤣 But it is not that much surprising naa, you have a lot of shades... 🤣

aishu said it all 🤣 🤣

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Sowmya

@_Sowmya_

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Awesome 😉😆 really awesome 😆

Continue... make somu bold like me 🤣

I want to see her grow nicely (age wise nahi😕) she should become popular n come back in front of those ppl who hated her... her mom should feel proud of her... everyone should wonder how did this happen? I want her to achieve something big n make a good position...

Edited by Butterfly.1993 - 9 years ago

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.
Aur yeh kya tha you wrote it during that biology experiment? 😲 😆 Hun how do you manage to keep your concentration on it? I fail badly 😆 so badly... 🤣 But it is not that much surprising naa, you have a lot of shades... 🤣

Aaj weekend tha naa koi nahi tha lab me akeli thi... to kya karti me... likh diya 😕😕