Amor Fati ... A Pranushka Fanfiction ... Part 3 - Page 4 dt 10 Jan

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Nishtha
Absolutely loved the update !
I can feel pain in nikhil's eyes he must have gone through hell and beyond! Drinking at 10:00 am n smoking god I don't want nikhil to be ill as I am already connected to him.
Please Roshan do something for your friend I am sure he is trying but more is needed.. you almost made me cry ...

Lovely update ..

Thanks Nishtha. 😃 Hopefully, he will heal and in time.

Quote

poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: hasi.83
Nice update rach.. 👏 👏... interesting

Want to know more about nikhil's past. Hope that baby is his and that's his wife..

Thanks for the pm. Pls update soon...

Thanks Hasi. 😊

The upcoming chapters will slowly reveal the bitterness and the reasons behind the pain. 😃

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

shreya

@shreyj7

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Ab itna bhi mat rulao!😭 I need the shoulder again please

I feel bad for ma BOI Nikhil. He is destroying himself like this ahh Nikhil I agree tragedies happen, but please don't spoil your health at this extent..

Smoking is not good at all, and oh my lord! Drinking at 10:00 am.. Rachna Ji look at him he giving me heart attacks now!!!

But anyways ahh the grief and pain can be felt through the screen here.

Roshan the savior please come over and save him for sure. You are an amazing friend truly!!

Rachna Ji,

I am truly running out of words for this review.

Hehe i am just going to say tremendous work done by you and hats off for that👏👏

Love love love it.

Keep Writing

Update soon

Quote

poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: shreyj7
Ab itna bhi mat rulao!😭 I need the shoulder again please
I feel bad for ma BOI Nikhil. He is destroying himself like this ahh Nikhil I agree tragedies happen, but please don't spoil your health at this extent..
Smoking is not good at all, and oh my lord! Drinking at 10:00 am.. Rachna Ji look at him he giving me heart attacks now!!!
But anyways ahh the grief and pain can be felt through the screen here.
Roshan the savior please come over and save him for sure. You are an amazing friend truly!!
Rachna Ji,
I am truly running out of words for this review.
Hehe i am just going to say tremendous work done by you and hats off for that👏👏
Love love love it.
Keep Writing
Update soon

Arrey Shreya, why are you crying now? 😭 There's a long way to go for that duffer, but he will learn.

Thank you so much for reading.

Your BOI will be fine 😆

Quote

bahubalifan

@bahubalifan

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

I will make you gulp karela juice as punishment for smoking Nikhil !! 😡

Roshan... this fella needs a face. Who is it going to be ?? Childhood addiction or bava?? 😉

What bungalow is he dreaming about ?? He is in Bangalore and has not gone to see little rebel or his wife??? Gggrrr !!!

Missed Rohini in this update. 😔 Hope she will be there in the next one.

As usual flawless writing by you !! Bravo!! 👏

Edited by bahubalifan - 7 years ago

Quote

poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: bahubalifan
I will make you gulp karela juice as punishment for smoking Nikhil !! 😡

Roshan... this fella needs a face. Who is it going to be ?? Childhood addiction or bava?? 😉

What bungalow is he dreaming about ?? He is in Bangalore and has not gone to see little rebel or his wife??? Gggrrr !!!

Missed Rohini in this update. 😔 Hope she will be there in the next one.

As usual flawless writing by you !! Bravo!! 👏

Karela juice ... that's a good one. Nikhil deserves that only

He has not met Little Rebel yet. 😆

Don't worry, Rohini will be back soon. 😳 And CA as Roshan ... 🤣