'Cause You Said I Can!' : PrAnushka SS: Update- Part 24 |Pg 72 |Nov 03 - Page 28

Originally posted by: shreyj7

Thanks a lot for the PM

behold this is going to be a long comment!😆

This is so BEAUTIFUL I literally have no words to express the feeling I have in my heart for this.

But, I am still going to write feedback.

'Cause you said I can' has and will always have a special place in my heart. I will always remember this story.

This is just not a story it is the meaning of love. You made my belief in love go a lot higher all through this. After every chapter I believed in love more and more.

I would totally love to see Madhu in that beautiful dress❤️

The feeling you know of this whole chapter just creeps up into your heart and it stays there does not move a bit.

I really agree on Sid about that professor, and what Madhu should do about him. Excited to see what she will do with him.

Sid oh my god my heart ⭐️

And lastly Subha,

You are amazing in every way.

You are a terrific writer, and an awesome human being

You are so helpful.

Love the awesome and different way you write in. It just leaves you thinking about the story all day long, and trust me I mean ALL DAY LONG.

Keep writing.

Love Love you.😃😃

Originally posted by: cosmosandme

That was such a dreamy chapter ☺️ I was blushing throughout I guess.
I was mesmerized by their stargaze escapade. It seems like they both have gained each other's quality in love. He acquired hers and became shy while she acquired his and became bold. Nonetheless I like madhu taking lead. It's enjoyable, cute and funny. Sid too feel same for her, then why holding so much. The way he is controlling will cause inundation of feelings someday. 😆

" Northern Lights..or Polar Lights.. You know, it is a dream.. To lie under the magical polar lights someday in Finland or Norway! But looks like it's forever gonna stay a dream! "

Our astronomer has cool dreams I must say. I really really loved and enjoyed the entire conversation. Tu meri adhuri pyas is so apt for sid. You found a perfect song for his situation and the edit is just lovely. The guy has no other go but to fall for this beautiful soul.
Your write very well subha... Keep it up girl and update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: fictitious

Inundation of feelings is good if it can create something amazing in the end right!😛😛

There's this astronomy lover friend of mine who first told me about Aurora! You know her right? The weird friend of mine. 😉

We both have planned to see it someday! Only God knows if she'd take me, or ditch me and go with her boyfriend!

Thank you, Mehtaab!😃

Originally posted by: fictitious

That coming back was a reference to the dream dear!😊 He's still not brave enough to do that!😆

But trust me, that day is not very far when he would actually make his dream a reality ! 😉

I also have no idea how Sid looked for the party!😆 Guys were not very fancy about the dressing let's say!

As for Madhu, this is what I could manage to find, and only face. I think max I can do is post a blue dress separately!🤣

via Imgflip GIF Maker

Originally posted by: fictitious

Adwitya,

Damn!😲 If you had PM-ed me this comment, I could have copy pasted the lines in my update!🤣

Honestly do you know what I exactly felt after reading this comment of yours?

If this story is made into a book someday, I would like to have those lines at the back cover! 😆

The story might or might not be readworthy, but there would be such captivating reviews at the back that would lure a person into buying the book anyway!😆 Writing such a review for another persons work is not something that's easy!

But your talent is not something that should be confined to reviews alone. Promise me that you will consider writing something!😊

Bindu,

If you're the one who brought Adwita here,🤗 !!

Let's also team up to trouble this girl still she starts writing something on her own! Wordsmith is such a perfect name!

Bond Di?? 😆

I like it, whatever the story behind that is!

Originally posted by: fictitious

Sorry for the late response! With each passing day, I'm getting closer to becoming a sloth bear.🥱 As soon as I update, I mostly shut my system down and leave. Later on I log in from mob, but it kinda gets inconvenient to quote! 😭

Love makes shy ones daring and vice versa, but I was kinda worried if Madhu's bold acts and Sid's responses would look believable! Glad you liked it ! 🤗

Such dreamy setting in a desert might never happen in our monotonous lives! 🤢All that seems too fancy to be true in my life, I make a part of the story! 😆

Thank you for travelling with me, Bindu! ❤️

Originally posted by: Bindu.

@cosmosandme:

Hey dear, I remember Lashy di mentioning you in HBAS thread.Glad to see you here.Are you still following HBAS? 😊

Originally posted by: cosmosandme

Hey bindu 😃
Yes I am around, and I am still following HBAS. Lashy hasn't updated for a while now ! Actually lot of people comment on her thread, so it's hard to find what she told about me.