'Cause You Said I Can!' : PrAnushka SS: Update- Part 24 |Pg 72 |Nov 03 - Page 30

I read it from mobile and now reading from laptop, still can't get enough of the chapter and the pics. I have visited this place myself, and reading this chapter made me nostalgic absolutely. Honestly I never knew how beautiful rajasthan is, until I visited kumbhalgarh with family and a friend, and today you virtually took us there with your wonderful writing and pics. Your find is stunning subha !

Sid is showing mock anger to madhu, In real the guy is not able to hold the excitement of having her around. Their service apartme nt is so cool. I wish they stay for few more days 😆
The silent interaction between sleeping madhu and sid spoke volumes about his feelings. The non hesitance of sid in picking her call was also a giveaway . Madhu is slowly winning in reducing his inhibitions.

The best thing about your writing is it makes one dream. Meeting people from different lands and bonding with them for life, travel to rediscover yourself. These all things make life wonderful, and your story has those all. 😳

Keep writing and update soon 😃

Felt like I was there with them in that fort ...it was brilliant. .

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

<font color="#ff0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Chapter 1:</font>

<font color="#ff0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I simply adore your way of writing!</font>

<font color="#ff0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I already love Madhu and Harshit, as well as love their bondYou write exceedingly well.</font>

<font color="#ff0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">P.S. I will read the rest when I can and comment :)</font>

Krishnapriya,

Thanks a lot for being here, and being so kind! :)
Surprised and really happy! it's so rewarding to see someone sharing feedback for each chapter! :)

Take your time! Hoping to see you around :)

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Originally posted by: Penfolk

This was breathtaking!

Things I liked the most :

The pictures. Specially of the fort and the rural india. Even the apartment they booked.

Harshit's phone call which Siddhant answered. Cool.

Laddoo's energy.

Your vivid descriptions.

The foreigner couple who was so well hosted by US. Patriotic feels you see.

And also... How people RISE in love!

I love you so much Subhaa!

My update is never complete without your feedback!
Whether it's just a line or a long one!
You know how vital it is.

It's Don't Love Me that brought me to this forum.
You should know without saying, how much I love you too!

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Someone take me to Rajasthan, pleaseee!

Subha darling, I can't tell you how beautiful the update is! Enjoyed reading it a lottt..😃

Thanks for the double dhamaka,dear..will give a detailed feedback soon.. Can't access my laptop now!

As that someone to take me too! :(

How did you make that crying teddy! Super cute! 😆

Dhamaka became double accidentally only ! :D
Eagerly waiting for your feedback! ! 😳

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

<font color="#000066">Loved the update</font>

<font color="#000066">I love how madhu is so bold and non apologetic about her feelings towards him.</font>

<font color="#000066">I loved how they helped jai</font>

<font color="#000066">And michael and ella were nice additions</font>

<font color="#000066">The fort looked amazing</font>

<font color="#000066">And well why is he afraid of committment he loves her so why?</font>

<font color="#000066">Thanks a tonn for d pm</font>

Thanks a lot Aaru!
He is not really afraid of commitment, but unsure! We'll soon find out why! :)

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

Felt like I was there with them in that fort ...it was brilliant. .

And aa busile scene sharikkum goosebumps! Such tender moments

Thank you Ratna!
Patum enkil visit that fort someday! :)
Night bus journeys are always an ahem ahem for lovebirds! :D

Originally posted by: shreyj7

Thanks for the PM.

Two parts in one go was such a delight.

Ok.. This time I am serious. When are we going to Rajasthan? I so want to go there again even though I have been there twice I have never seen it like this.

The pictures were just amazing.

The descriptions of the fort, and the scenery around it though makes you feel like you are right there.

Loving the way love is building between Sid and Madhu. You have depicted that in a very heart-touching way.

Subha,

I don't know what to say. Your style of writing is just so amazing.

Love the way it is going.

Wondering what will happen in Jaipur?

.Excited for what is coming next. [Even though I don't know what is going to happen]😆

Ok, I know bad joke.

But, can't wait for the next update.

I appreciate all the hard work and effort you have put into this.

Thank you so much love!
First of all you fly down to India from the US.
Then we will go ! :D