PraNushka LS : Don't Love Me!/ Scene edits on PAGE 39/4th Sep - Page 29

Hi

I'm new on if and happened to read your FF. You're so talented. I just finished reading this story. Though it made me so sad, I should tell you that this is one of the most amazing love stories I've read. So simple and very realistic.

I am about to start with your other series. And also many others fivtions here. Writers like you are a great blessing to us. Keep writing :)

Originally posted by: fictitious

Hi

I'm new on if and happened to read your FF. You're so talented. I just finished reading this story. Though it made me so sad, I should tell you that this is one of the most amazing love stories I've read. So simple and very realistic.

I am about to start with your other series. And also many others fivtions here. Writers like you are a great blessing to us. Keep writing :)

Originally posted by: BornWithASmirk

Hi Kaushi(Hope I'm right with your name, I caught the name in Bahubali dt! )

First of all I'm guilty of not commenting here before(well I had exams ,I usually try to stay away from SM during those days ) but anyway it's better late than never!

And coming to the story it's one of the well written stories I've read. The thing I loved most is consistency in characters, and their bond, so pure! I won't tag it as 'love' some bonds cannot be named, theirs was one of those I feel, soulmates is what can come close to them and ending justified it. Their progress was also good, not through fairy tale moments may be, but some simple realistic ones. And the fact that Riha is a doctor makes things more realistic for me, like a doctor understands the phases a depressed person goes through, better than a non-doctor I feel, added to that her curious nature, it's totally believable that she would be attracted to a person like Vivaan (again clever characterization kudos to you for that! ).

And ending, love you for writing it the way you wrote! Honestly I would be surely disappointed if it was anything else, this is how it is, an accurate end I felt, their souls can continue the journey in a world where they cannot be separated! Thank you for sharing with us this beautiful story!

Ps : When I was reading this story Alizeh from ADHM was playing in background, Not that lyrics suits Vivaan-Riha entirely, but the tone and feel of the song is what I related with the story (may be it is the fact that it was playing in background, don't know! But the thing is, this is the most frequently played song on my device now and has nothing to do with ADHM but this story!!!!!)

It goes something like,

Pyaar maine to nibhaya

Tere rehte tere saath bhi

Sach kahun toh tujhse zyada

Chaha tujhko tere baad bhi!

Main dard hoon

Tu dava hai na ? ?

Main aag hoon

Tu hawa hai na ? ?

Kahan hai tu

Mere dil mein hai na??

Tera hoon main

Tujhe yaad hai na???

When you keep up with your raw edits 😆

Just another poster to the story...

So beautiful

Pennie I hope you pm me in future whenever you write anything about pranushka..I love them...so kindly add me in unless it's not some AT or private chat group yar

Hey...i was a silent reader..and ofcourse i was very sad with the ending...but the way it touched all the reader's heart..signifies you are an awesome writer
I have a small request..isi story ko continue krke can u plz write about their reincarnation..where they meet finally...plz plz plz..