Oka Chance Istava PrAnu FF- Jai Vennala part 3B page 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sandhiya_1195

Cute update 😳 Ride to ooty in bike 😲,nevertheless loved it😛

Do continue!


Thanks.
Yeah people go on road trips to ooty, there are two routes. But I'm sending our couple via the ghats😛😆
Yup, will continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Enti darling idhi?

😳

Beautiful
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Intuitive

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">Part 3A</font>


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<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">As the sun rose, Vennela spread her arms taking
in the fresh air. She never felt like this. It felt heavenly. Every minute of
her life was with him, in his thoughts. And how beautiful did it feel to
dissolve in him, to let her vanish and become him...</font>


<font size="2">She heard the honk and immediatelywent
down with her backpack. He was there, her darling was there in blue formals and
white pant on his bike.She had worn a casual white top and blue jeans.
She could feel his intense eyes on her. Jai was mindblown, he couldn't stop but
keep looking at her. In the misty air of Bangalore, she was his angel. She
started moving towards him, placed her hand on his strong shoulders and took a
seat. And they left...It was a three day trip they took.</font>


<font size="2">Her hands slowly went around his waist and
tightened as she leaned on him. Whooo hooo sooo fast !!!! Their hearts were singing a different song...On
the way they stopped at a tea cottage in Ramnagaram. The tea was amazing...</font>


<font size="2">Vennela -Mmm...Isn't it amazing?</font>


<font size="2">Jai could do nothing but nod and keep looking at
her. Oh God! This woman!She is making him go mad. He enquiredthe tea
owner regarding some routes. And was about to leave, when Vennela asked him to
stay for some time. And could he deny her? HER?</font>

No to vennela ?? No way !!!!!

<font size="2">They sat their for some time admiring the beauty.
She placed her hand on the slab and slowly he placed his over hers.</font>

aaawww that touch would send chills down her spine !

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">'Vennela?'</font>


<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">'Hmm..What Jai?'</font>


<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">'You know, you are the first one in my life.
There wasn't anybody in my life like you till today.' He said looking down. She
just smiled and lifted his chin towards her. His eyes were filled with
emotions..pain, fear and a happiness.</font>


<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">'And I will be there forever.'She said and he
placed his head over her shoulder. All this was different to him. To have
somebody to enjoy with, to share with...He was always to himself. To have
somebody to whom you can open up to, enjoy with...it was all new to him. A tear
fell from his eyes.</font>

I don't understand, she told I will be there forever and placed his head over her shoulders, did he realise that she was in love with him or was it just a sign of affection ??

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">Vennela didn't know what to say. She wanted to
comfort him, but she let it be. She let him let his emotions out, so many
emotions that he hid for so many years. She just tightened her arms around
him...</font>


<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">It was for a while they sat like that. Vennela
slightly lifted Jai's head and asked him if he was fine. He nodded his head and
they left...</font>


<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">At around 10 30 they reached Mysore and decided
to visit the Shivanasamudra Falls they were one of the most beautiful falls..</font>

So romantic !!!

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">While Vennela enjoyed the scenic beauty in front
of her, Jai couldn't help but enjoy the beauty in front of him. He moved closer
to her and held her hands. He wanted this...for lifetime. They clicked a few
photos and Vennela's journalist mind couldn't help but want to know more of the
falls.</font>


<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">Suddenly, a few girls approached Jai.</font>


<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">'Hey, you are Mr. Jay Akula right? The one who
runs 'Trends & Styles'?'</font>

Gggrrr...

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">'Yeah!' He could see Vennela getting jealous. He
was enjoying this and hence engaged in a conversation with the girls. Vennela
was burning inside. She just moved away from the place. Jai saw that and went
behind her, leaving those girls.</font>


<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">'Vennela, why did you go off like that?'</font>


<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">Without replying anything, Vennela gave a look
at him and smacked his head. 'Aaa!' Very good Vennu !!! Keep smacking him.He just gave her a what are you doing look?</font>

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">She just gave him another look and hugged him.</font>

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">'Enti darling idi?' He questioned her.</font>

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">[What is this darling?]</font>

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">The moment he called her darling, she could feel her cheeks going pink. This was the first time he had called her so. Jai felt a warmth in her embrace and then went on...Again, that hug is to express her love for him or just like that ? Did he get the cue ? Sorry I am daft..</font>

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">From there, they went via Bandipur and reached Masinagudi around 5. The whole journey was scenic. They had to stay in a resort in Masinagudi for the night. The whole place Masinagudi was very beautiful, especially for the wildlife lovers. They were to visit the places in Masinagudi on their way back from Ooty. For now, they were staying in the resort for the night...A beautiful candle light dinner or maybe a romantic boat ride under the moonlight ?? 😉 </font>

To be continued...

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Hope you all liked it. Your feedback is welcome.😛




I liked how you added the pics to give us a feel of the story
👏 Different characterization of Vennela from the demure, bubbly village belle to the smart, bold city girl.. waiting for the next part.
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: bahubalifan



I liked how you added the pics to give us a feel of the story
👏 Different characterization of Vennela from the demure, bubbly village belle to the smart, bold city girl.. waiting for the next part.
😊


Those are subtle signs. Right now, they have an understanding with each other. It's not like they are sure that the person loves him/her, but they're sure that they would like to be life-partners. For now, they're two people who want to spend all of their life with each other, that they know. Love is growing by everyday, but the stage where you're in deep love hasn't yet arrived.
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ..Lunatic.Lover

Enti darling idhi?

😳

Beautiful


Thanks.😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
The Banner of PrANU was so Nice.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
The Ooty Trip of Jai and Vennela was so Beautifully explained.😊
The way Jai became Emotional with Vennela was so Nice.😊
Jai and Vennela Conversation was so nice.😊
The Feelings of Jai and Vennela were so Beautiful.😊
Vennela Jealous was so Cute.😊
Jai calls Vennela calls her Darling was so Cute and Her Blushing was too Cute.😳
Jai and Veenela will stay in Resort,it was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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Edited by PriyaSweety-Anu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
awww i loved it... spcly the way u describing the feelings...hope it wont take different twists
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
A beautiful romantic story written with an emotional quotient ! An interesting start , in the next ,a beautiful culmination of love between two sensitive hearts , now turning in to a cascading emotional feelings flourishes in that Ooty resort . Waiting for the next stage of love .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
sorry...my net was a problem from the morning, so i couldn't read from morning...but WOW!!!!
that was so cute...and adorable, jai lying on vennela's shoulder scene..i always imagined that there should be scene like that...thanks for writing it...i loved it a lot...

im waiting for the next part...thnak you so much for the PM love...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Hi Rashmi! Just came across this FF... superb!
Part 1:
I loved their introduction and the way Jai asked for her phone number. He was quite obvious as much as he wants to be non chalant 😆
Our Vennala is already falling for him (or attracted/infuated maybe). Would love to read miee from Jai's side and his state of mind 😃
I can totally imagine Jai lost in Vennala like in Ithethi bagundi song

M gonna the read the second part now... :)

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