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Posted: 13 years ago
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Next Day...
Preeto was at her house, about to leave when Yasmin called- Preeto suno hum tumhe ek bhaut important baat bola bholgaye the. Tumhara active rehna acchi baat nahi hai.
Preeto- kya matlab
Yasmin- i mean no dancing,no running or jumping. Nothing, hum toh yeh bhi kehte hai ke tum yeh job choudo aur full rest karo.
Preeto- nahi Yasmin, yeh mumkin nahi hai
Yasmin- toh phir tumhe sirf healthy food khana padega aur bhaut rest karna padega aur har hafte IV lena padega.
Preeto- thik hai.
The end the phone call, Preeto turns around to see Rajbeer. (The huge shocking noise happens) Rajbeer- kya hua aaj jaldi jaldi mein apna lunch bhi bhol jaati.
Rajbeer gives her her lunch and goes to have breakfast. Preeto is really relieved Rajbeer didn't hear anything. Before Preeto left, Bj- Preeto woh jo party thi na woh hum aaj rakte hai.
Preeto- thik hai Bj
Bj- aur sun Yasmin ko bola na bholna maat
Preeto- phone kar dongi.
Preeto leaves, she is really depressed. She was having trouble telling anyone that she was gonna die in 2 months maximum. After is left Preeto started talking to herself- kuch bhi ho mujhe Bj Papaji ko apni bimari key baari mein baatana hi padega.
Preeto goes to the boutique. At her lunch time, she calls Yasmin. Y- hello
Preeto- Preeto bol rahi hon
Yasmin- ha bolo
Preeto- bas yeh baataney key liye phone kiya tha key Bj ne aaj tujhe ghar bolaya hai sab ke saath khane pe.
Yasmin- yaar im really sorry lekin hum aaj bhaut busy hai sorry hum nahi a paengay.
Preeto- its okay
The phone ends, Preeto was putting the labels on the items. Preeto in her mind- mein zinda bhaut der tak nahi hon, bhaut kam waqt hai mere pas. Keyse hogay mere sare sapne poore. Kya kya socha tha, Bani ek air hostess, Sonu ek doctor, Ishu di aur Meeta di key bacho ke saath kehlongi. Papaji ki novel chapjaegi. Rajbeer se shaadi hogi, humare bhi bache hongay. Fir Bani Sonu ki bhi shaadi hogi aur unke bhi bache hongay. Lekin Babaji yeh keysa intihan ley rahe hon mera. Kuch bhi poora nahi ho sakta. Hai lekin ek sapna aur dekha tha, Rajbeer ki bahon mein maarna hai aur shayad Rajbeer ki bahon mein maarna mere kismat mein likha hai.

It is 6 pm...
Preeto comes home to see everything dark. Preeto- yeh kya electricity ka bill toh baara tha.
Then everyone except Yasmin, cuz she wasnt there yells- SURPRISE
Preeto is really surprised. The lights come back on, and everyone is there. Mama-mami, Rajbeer, Bj papaji, dhrishu, Bani sonu, Jogi Jassi, and Simmi. Preeto puts on a smile to hide her pain and then goes to them. Preeto- wow itna acha surprise.
Jassi- aur guess karo key yeh sab kisne plan kiya.
Preeto- kisne
Bani puts her hand on Rajbeer's shoulder- mere Rajbeer bhaiya ne.
Rajbeer smiles and looks at Preeto. Preeto is hurt but still smiles. Rajbeer is also hurt because he was actually planning to purpose to her in front of everybody today, ask Bj Papaji for her hand in marriage today but Preeto unfortunately broke up with him. Ishu gets the cake from the kitchen which happens to be a rectangle shaped chocolate cake. Preeto's smile kind of fades as she remembers Yasmin saying(Preeto tumhe sirf healthy food khana padega. No dancing, running or jumping)
Ishu gives the knife to Preeto- yeh le
Preeto- lekin Ishu di cake ki kya zaroorat thi
Dhruv- arrey zaroorat keyse nahi thi, tumhara birthday mom ki waja se hum maana nahi pa a lekin aj tumhari welcome party hai aur tumhari belated birthday party.
Preeto hugs her sis and Dhruv- thank u
Pankaj- oye lekin Rajbeer ko bhi toh hug kar, usne hi toh yeh saare preparations ki hai.
Preeto and Rajbeer look at each other. Everyone else is like- oyee or busy whistling or clapping.
Simmi nudges Preeto- jao na.
Preeto slowly walks to Rajbeer and hugs him. Rajbeer hugs her back and smiles.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Preeto Be Strong gal and RB keep fighting ..

Sana you Rock !! Poor Meri Preeto ko Sher Singh se Bheegi billi bana diya hai 😭 ..Hope to see my Sher back
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I hope Preeto will recover and Rajpreet get married. Awesome writing Sana.

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