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@LoveSana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Part 8...

Preeto's Sangeet...

She was dressed in a light brown lehenga. Rajbeer in a white sherwani and Vikram came in a baby blue sherwani. Ladies start applying mehendi on Preeto's hands. Rajbeer and Bani dance on a DDLG song. Everyone is happy and the end of Preeto's Sangeet.

7:30 everyone except Rajbeer and Preeto went to Gurudwara. Rajbeer made a excuse that he had to finish a important file and Tarji let Preeto stay behind. As soon as everyone left, Rajbeer went up to Preeto and - Preeto, jaldi se apne thode kapde lelo aur mere saath chalo.

Preeto- lekin kaha

Rajbeer-Preeto tumhe kya itna bhi nahi baata mein tumhe yaha se bhaaja ke leja raha ho. Aur mere bj papaji se bhi baat ho chuki hai.

Preeto- ok.

Then she goes to her room to get her clothes and then Rajbeer goes to his room to get his bag. They both come outside the mansion and then sit in Rajbeer car. Rajbeer starts driving.

It is like 8 pm and RajPreet are in Lodhiyana. Rajbeer stops the car outside a gurudwara. RajPreet get out of the car and then enter the gurudwara.

Half hour later, they come outside holding hands. Preeto had sindoor in her mang and a mangalsutara in her neck. Which meant that they got married. They sit in the car and Rajbeer- Preeto aaj ke raat ek hotel mein hi gusar lete hai kyunki Amritsar tak ka reshta 2 ganto ka hain.

Preeto nodds and then Rajbeer starts driving. After like 20 minutes Rajbeer stopps the car in the parking lot of a hotel named 'HOTEL DESCENT'. They both go in the hotel and then Rajbeer starts talking to the receptionist. Preeto starts looking around and then the receptionist hands a key over to Rajbeer.

Rajbeer - chale.

They start walking in the hall.

Preeto- yeh sab actually films mein hota hai. Do ajnabi; ek ladka ek ladke, ek hotel mein ek raat.

Rajbeer- tumhe films dekhne ka bhaut shock hai.

Preeto- hai.

They reach their room and then Rajbeer opens the door. Preeto enters the room and then Rajbeer closes the door behind him. He huggs her from the back.

Rajbeer- aur phir woh ajnabi tumahre saath romance karta hai. Aur tum bolte hoke...

Preeto backs him let go of her and then goes near the sofa.

Preeto- yeh ap kya kar rahe hain. Mere shaadi ho kuki hai

Rajbeer- really

Preeto turns around, face to face with Rajbeer.

Preeto- ha aur agar mere pati ko patta chala toh phir woh apko shoot kar dingay.

Then smiles.

Rajbeer- accha.

Preeto nodds. Rajbeer- toh phir unhe baatna mat.

Preeto- kya matlab hai apka.

Rajbeer starts unbottoning his shirt and then he is shirtless and then starts walking towards Preeto.

Rajbeer- mere matlab hai.

He comes even closer to Preeto and then lifts her in his arms and then walks towards the bed. He gently places her on the bed and then goes closer to her. He was about to kiss her and then there was a knock on the door. Rajbeer had a little angry face and then got up and then opened the door.

He was a lady, (who looked a lot like a call girl).

Lady- hey, dekhne mein toh hai lekin tujhse nahi iss ladki se baat karne hai.

Rajbeer turns to Preeto - Preeto, tumse baat karne hai inhe.

Preeto curiously walks over to the door and then looks at Rajbeer. She signals him to go away, he goes away.

Preeto comes out of the room and walks to the lady.

Preeto- ji boliye, mujhe kya kaam hai apko.

Lady- dekhne mein toh mashala. Woh ladke hai toh accha aur tu bhi kuch kaam nahi hai. Mera matlab hai ke nie hai iss dendhe mein.

Preeto-kya.

Lady- nahi, toh phir iss chekne ko kaise maanaya.

Preeto- excuse me, Woh mere patte hai.

Lady- kya patte. Oh toh phir tu jaa. Mein nikal te hon.

Preeto comes back in the room and then closes the door behind her.

Rajbeer- kyun thi woh

Preeto- woh aurat jo descent hotel mein customers late hai.

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Sonia

@love03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Finally they got married, is this last part or is there a continuation? great job as always 😛

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Part 9...

Patiala...

Tarji found out that both Rajbeer and Preeto are missing.

Tarji- mein pochta hon key kaha gaye woh donu.

Papaji- hume nahi patta.

Tarji- chout maat bol Gagan. Bol kaha hai woh donu.

Bj- mein baatati hon. Un donu ne shaadi karle hai.

Tarji- KYA

Bj- humare ijazad le kar.

Tarji- tum donu ne mujhe baataya kyu nahi.

Papaji- apne pehle se rishta pakka kiya tha.

Tarji has tears in his eyes.

Tarji- itna andha hon mein apne betti ke khushiyan nahi dekh paya.

Bj- abhi bhi der nahi hua. Woh donu Amritsar mein hai.

Tarji wipes his tears aside and then calls his guards.

Tarji- GUARDS!

The guards come rushing aside and then Tarji- Preeto aur Rajbeer ko Amritsar se dhoond nekalo aur mujhe phone karna. Kise bhi kemat par.

The guards go out of the mansion.

Bj- apne yeh kyun kiya.

Tarji- unhe mein kud dekhlonga.

He leaves for his bedroom leaving a crying Bj. Papaji is trying to console her.

Loodhiyana...

Preeto- Rajbeer mujhe neend a rahe hai.

Rajbeer- okay. Lekin ek problem hai, sirf ek pillow hai.

Preeto smiles and then lyies down beside Rajbeer on the bed. She takes his left arm and then rests her head on his upper arm.

Preeto- mera pillow toh yeh hai.

Rajbeer- achha.

Rajbeer kisses her forehead and - good night.

Preeto- good night Rajbeer.

Preeto closes her eyes and falls asleep. Rajbeer is constantly staaring at her. Suddenly there is a big knock on the door. Rajbeer gently lifts her head and then places her head under a pillow. Rajbeer goes to open the door and then there was the manager.

Manager- jaldi chalo police ki raid padehai.

Manager just leaves and then Rajbeer closes the door.

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Sonia

@love03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Wonder what will happen when they all come face to face? 😛 Thanks for the quick updates.

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Part 10...

There is a raid in the hotel RajPreet are at. Rajbeer walks over to Preeto who is sleepling. Rajbeer feels bad that he is about to break the peaceful sleep that she is having right now.

Rajbeer- Preeto, please get up.

Preeto starts to open her eyes and then sees Rajbeer's tensed face.

Preeto- kya hua

Rajbeer- please chalo, ek police raid pade hai.

Preeto- kya.

Preeto gets up and Rajbeer starts putting his shirt on. They leave the hotel without being caught. Rajbeer drives away from the hotel.

Rajbeer - agar tum chaho toh phir soo sakte ho.

He turns around to see Preeto sleepling with her head against the side window. He smiles and continues driving.

At 10:30...

Preeto wakes up to see Rajbeer driving.

Preeto- ab kaha ae hai.

Rajbeer- oh tum jagae. Waise abhi 1 gante pehle ek dhaaba gaya tum soo rahe thi issi liye meine kaha pack karwadiya. Aur Amritsar ko apne mein 30 minute hai.

Preeto turns around and sees 2 styrofoam plates; one was empty, which means Rajbeer had already eat. Other one was covered in foil. She reaches to get the plates and brings to the front. She uncovers the plate and sees and it has roti, bindi, rice, and dal.

Preeto- thank u Rajbeer

Rajbeer- ur welcome.

By the time Preeto finishes eating, Amritsar arrives.

Preeto- Rajbeer hum ja kaha rahe hai.

Rajbeer- u'll see.

Rajbeer continues driving for 10 minutes and then stopps outside a small beautiful house.

Rajbeer- hum yaha rahengay.

Preeto- wow Rajbeer kitna pyaara hai.

Rajbeer- hmm, mere daada daadi ka tha.

Preeto- Rajbeer ek baat mujhe apse pochne thi, ap mere shaadi rokne ke liye 2 din baad kyu aia.

Rajbeer- kyunki iss ghar ki safae ho rahe thi. Ab chale.

Preeto smiles and they get out of the car. They walk to the front door and just then Rajbeer stops Preeto.

Rajbeer- roku.

Preeto- kyu

Rajbeer- ek rasam hai na. Woh toh at least poori karte hai.

Preeto- kunse

Rajbeer- abhi baata ta hon.

Rajbeer goes inside and comes back with something hiding behind him. He kneels down and puts a glass full of rice in front of Preeto's feet. He then stands up to his full height.

Rajbeer- ab apne right leg se isse gharao aur ghar mein ao.

Preeto smiles and then uses her right leg to knock the glass over and enters the house. Just then Rajbeer picks her up in his arms and then starts walking towards their bedroom.

When they reach their bedroom Rajbeer carefully puts Preeto back on the ground.

Preeto- well mujhe nahi patta tha ke apko rasame yaad rehte hai.

Rajbeer now has a naughty smile on his face- shaadi ke raat pe ek aur rasam bhi hote hai jise suhagrat kehte hai.

He starts taking slow steps towards Preeto and Preeto starts taking small steps backwards. Soon Rajbeer traps Preeto with a wall. Rajbeer- aur mujhe woh rasam karne mein koi itraz nahi hai.

Preeto- Rajbeer

Rajbeer- waise meine tumhe kya yeh pehle baataya hai ke tum salwar kamez se ziyada khubsorat sari mein lajte ho.

Preeto- nahi toh. Aur sari mein kyu ziyada khubsorat lajte ho.

Rajbeer places his hands on her waist- kyunki sari mein mujhe tumhare kamar dekhae dite hai.

Preeto- kya, ap mere mere

Rajbeer intrupts- kamar.

Preeto gets angry- ap mere kamar dekhte ho.

Rajbeer- ya

Preeto- apko patta hai ap iss duniya ke sabse besharam fauji ho.

Rajbeer- fauji ho itna patta hai lekin besharam kitna ho yeh tum decide karo.

Preeto- really

Rajbeer examines her and then comes closer to her- i think ke yeh salwar kamez thodi tight hai.

Preeto smiles- nahi toh.

Rajbeer comes even closer- figure yaha se dekhne mein bhaut accha laj raha hai, tumhare iss suit ke bina keysa lajta hai yeh mujhe dekhna hai.

Preeto- Rajbeer.

Rajbeer picks her up in his arms again and then walks to their bed. He takes no time in removing his shirt. He starts nuzzling her neck and then kisses it.

Preeto has a small laugh which means she is enjoying this- Rajbeer, yeh kya karahe ho

Rajbeer stops and looks at her face- kyu isse faltu sawal karte ho.

Preeto- okay sorry.

Rajbeer smiles- tumhe patta hai, mein tumhare har ek chisse bhaut pyaar karta ho. (kisses her eyes) tumhare yeh ankehe, (kisses her cheeks) tumhare yeh gaal, (kisses her nose) tumahare yeh jusse wale nek (they both smile at that, then he brings his lips near hers) aur especially tumhare yeh hoot.

He kisses her lips for a while, Rajbeer's hands are on her waist and Preeto has her arms wrapped around his neck. Rajbeer removes her dupatta and then kisses her neck again. Preeto closes her eyes tightly and her grip on Rajbeer's neck grows stronger. Rajbeer had become more naughty after he sees Preeto closing her eyes tightly and gripping his neck. He kisses both sides and her arms and then goes back to kissing Preeto's lips. One of Rajbeer hands manage to get to the night lamp and switch the light off. He knew that if the lights were off then Preeto would bring herself more closer to him. He was right, she actually went closer to Rajbeer and then light starts fading away...

PS- not the last part.

Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago

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Sonia

@love03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

wow unknownunknown you really go into the intimate details haha...great writing as always..you have an amazing imagination and its good to see the story moving forward..thanks for the quick update..always glad to read your story before I call it a night thanks soo much.

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Preeti

@preetihere

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Phir kya hua? I know the stupid guards will come!
Vikram also needs to run away, tarji will get heart attack 😆

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Bobby1810

@Bobby1810

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Wow what intimate and passion in your writing. IT is just amazing.

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Next morning...
A few cars arrive at Amritsar and few gueards are in the cars. The guards are sent by Tarji. They start looking for rajpreet.
Rajpreet house...
The sun rays are playing with Preeto's eyes, then finally she opens her eyes. Preeto wakes up to see her clothes all over the room, she is covered under a white blanket. The only thing that she is wearing is her mangalsutra, Rajbeer let her wear that only because that meant that she belonged to only him. She turns to her right side and sees a shirtless Rajbeer staring at her.
Preeto in a sleepy voice- Rajbeer kya dekh rahe ho?
Rajbeer- iss duniya ka sabse khubsorat nazara.
Preeto blushes and looks down. Rajbeer pulls her chin up so they could see eye to eye. Rajbeer starts nuzzling her neck. While nuzzling her neck he says- Preeto tum itne kubsorat kyu ho aur yeh raat itne choti kyu thi.
Preeto smiles at that and then comes back to reality.
Preeto- Rajbeer mujhe nahane jaana hai.
Rajbeer is still nuzzling her neck- mein bhi ao.
Preeto- nahi
Rajbeer- kyu kal raat issa kya tha jo meine nahi dekha.
Preeto- Rajbeer.
She makes him go away from him and then Preeto tries to getup but then remembers that she has no clothes. She lyies down on the bed again and looks at Rajbeer with her cute innocent eyes.
Preeto- rajbeer please mere kapde dona.
Rajbeer has a naughty smile on his- tum khud lelo.
Preeto- Rajbeer meine khapde nahi pehene.
Rajbeer- toh meine kaha pehene hai
Preeto- sirf shirt hi toh nahi pehena please lao na.
Rajbeer stubbornly gets up and gets her clothes. He walks to the bed and gives Preeto her clothes. He then reaches near her lips and gives her a light kiss on the lips.
Rajbeer- good morning.
He then leaves the room and closes the door behind him leaving a smiling Preeto behind.

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Sonia

@love03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

aww preeto-rajbeer are soo cute, hope they don't have to face too many problems from the rest of the family now. You write great short stories, thanks again I know you have to take time out of your schedule to do this and everyone appreciate it sooo much...thank you 😛

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