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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was 6 in the morning. A alarm was ringing.
Preeto- "Rajbeer, get up.Chey (6)baj gaye hai." said Preeto.
"Nahi, neend a rahi hai."- said Rajbeer in a sleepy voice, he had one arm on Preeto.
"Get up, duty pe nahi ja na?."- Preeto, but Rajbeer didn't answer.
"Rajbeer, alarm kud ke liye lagate ho ja mere liye."
"tumhare liye, alarm tumhe jagaega aur tumhara dil mujhe" replied Rajbeer.[/DIV]
[DIV]"Acha, to abhi mein aur mera dil apko yeh baata na chahate hai ke key ab duty pe jane ka time hoga hai"
"thek hai, I'm awake now" said Rajbeer as he got up.

Kitchen...

Rajbeer got dreseed in his uniform, he came to he kitchen.
Rajbeer- 'gud morning love' as he wrapped his hand around her waist.
Preeto- 'gud morning' as she poured the tea in a cup.
She turned around and handed him the cup saying 'chai, mein table par nasta le kar ati hoon'
Rajbeer went to the the table only to put the cup there.
Preeto walked out of the kitchen, placed the food on the table and the noticed that Rajbeer was not there.
Preeto- 'Rajbeer kaha gaye'
Rajbeer- 'yaha ho' as he hugged her from the back.
Preeto- 'Rajbeer kya kar raho, time to dekho'
Rajbeer- 'time... Oh no late hojayoga' as kissed Preeto on the cheek and let hr go.
Rajbeer- Bye
Preeto- bye

Evening...

At 6:30 Rajbeer came home, went upstairs to change his clothes. He came downstairs dressed in black jeans and white shirt. He went in
the kitchen to find Preeto. Preeto was wearing a orange suit and was on a stool. She was trying to get something from the top shelf of thr kitchen closet. Rajbeer came behind her and starting tickling her. She was laughing, trying to stop him feom tickling but she failed. Suddenly she lost her balance and then fell in Rajbeer's arms.
Preeto- 'Mujhe chodo Rajbeer'
Rajbeer- 'sirf ek promise kar ne par'
Preeto- kya
Rajbeer- main ho chaho woh tum mujhe karne dogi
Preeto- tekh hai, promise. Ab to chodo
Then Rajbeer helped Preeto come down.

Dinner time...
Preeto was serving food to Rajbeer.
Rajbeer- tumhare plate kaha hai?
Preeto- woh mein lene ja rahi thi
She was about to leave when Rajbeer pulled her hand and made her sit in his lap.
Preeto- Kya kar raho?
Rajbeer- dont worry, abhi maine shatani suri nahi ki.
He fed her a spoon of rice and then they kept feeding each other.

Living room...

RajPreet were watching tv.
Preeto- rajbeer, apne kabhi road side wali chaat khae hai?
Rajbeer- i think ke tumhe ab apne diet pe control karna chahiya.
Preeto- kyun
Rajbeer- unhealthy hai, tumhar a weight issi liye bad jata hai, no wonder.
Preeto became angry, she turned off the tv and asked- apne mujhe heavy kaha?
Rajbeer- ha to
Preeto started hitting him.
Rajbeer- sorry baba, bas mazak kar raha tha. Tumhare liye 10-15 kg se bhi koi fark nahi padta.
Preeto was still mad, so she threw a pillow at him.
Preeto- 'Rajbeer please, oatao na.' pointing at the pillow.
Rajbeer picked up the pillow and put it aside. Rajbeer picked Preeo up in his arms and then caaried her upstairs.
Preeto- ap kya kar raho?
Rajbeer- tumne he to kaha ki please oatao. To maine oata liya.
Preeto- mera matlab tha pillow
Rajbeer- oh well main ab jo chaho woh karonga. Tumne promise kiya tha
They reached their bedroom and preeto dropped Preeto on the bed and fell on top of her. Then he pulled the blanket over them.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok come up with it soon...will read later...hopefully next week will read all the writings that i missed in the forum...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh you are starting Multiple tracks that coool..
Jeez there are so Many FF's going on and I am enjoying each one of them...
Can't wait for you to finish of this one...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS. There are so many talented people on this forum. Well done. Keep writing. Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2...
It is a Saturday morning, Rajpreet r sleeping. It is 8 am and the sun rays r annoying Preeto. She slowly starts to open her eyes. On the other hand Rajbeer is not annoyed at all and he is still sleeping. Preeto goes in the washroom gets ready and comes out dressed in a green suit and sees Rajbeer still sleeping.
Preeto- Rajbeer, subha ho gaye
Rajbeer simply just ignores her. Preeto gives up and goes to the kitchen to make tea. She comes in the room with a cup of tea. She stills sees Rajbeer sleeping. So she pulls the blanket away from him but that makes no difference.
Preeto- Rajbeer!
Then she sees him sleeping peacefully, with a innocent face. Preeto kisses him on forehead, she is about to leave. But Rajbeer holds her hand. Rajbeer is fully awake.
Rajbeer- ab kiss de kar oataogi to oat jaoga
Preeto then gives him the cup kf tea and then leaves. Rajbeer gets ready in jeans and a purple shirt.
Preeto had breakfast ready on the table and they ate.
Preeto- Rajbeer ap ko yqad hai na, hum Bj ke ghar ja rahe hai
Rajbeer nodds.

Later in the day, Rajpreet r gonna leave for Bj's house.
Rajbeer- jaldi karo Preeto
Preeto- hai baba, chalo.
Rajbeer is driving and at a traffic signal Preeto sees a gola wala.
Preeto- Rajbeer, mujhe gola kahana hai
Rajbeer- Preeto its street food
Preeto- So, mujhe gola kahana hai bas.
Rajbeer- tekh hai
Rajbeer parks the car and says tum jao
Preeto- kyun ap ko pasand nahi ha kya
Rajbeer- nahi tum jao
Preeto gets out of the car and asks 'bhaiya, ap ke pas mango flavor hai.
Gola wala- hai, abhi bana dita hoon
Rajbeer gets out of the car too and walks behind Preeto and says Preeto tumne khonsa oder kiya
Preeto- mango, kyun ap ko to street food pasand nahi tha na
Rajbeer- funny. Mujhe bhi ek gola dina please.
Rajpreet eat the gola and start driving to Bj's house.
When they get there everyone is happy. Pankaj meeta and dhruv ishu and jassi jogi r also there. The boys start talking in the living room and the girls go in Meeta's room to talk.

PS- do comment and hit the like button if u liked it.

Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good Job, keep writing thanks. 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Are wah Rajpreet moments 24x7 ? Nice and dreamyyy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice to see Rajpreet together. Lovely. Please carry on writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3...
Everyone had lunch at Bj's house. Ishu looked at the time- god, baacho ke ghar ane ka time hogaya. Dhruv ab chalo Nisha and Payal skating classes se wapas aiengay.
Meeta- pankaj, Mahtab ghar agaige. Chalo
Jassi- Bj ab hume bhi chalna chahiye.
Preeto- ha Bj, jana toh hume bhi chahiye.
Dhrishu, Pankeeta, Jogi n Jassi and RajPreet left the Dhillon house. When RajPreet got home, Preeto was feeling dizzy. She decided not to tell Rajbeer cuz he'll overeact. And yell at her for eating street food. In their bedroom Rajbeer- Preeto mujhe woh file do na closet mein hai.
Preeto goes and opens the closet and suddenly she faints. Rajbeer saw her fainting and Preeto was about to fall on the ground but Rajbeer caught her in his arms.
Rajbeer- Preeto, Preeto. Kya hua?. No response. He carries her in his arms and gently puts her on the bed. He calls the doctor, the doctor arrives. After a while Preeto wakes up. She sees the doctor and a worried Rajbeer and then the doctor smiles.
Doctor- congratulations Rajbeer, tum baap bane wale ho. Now I should leave. Bye, take care of her.
Rajbeer is soo happy after hearing this news. Rajbeer and Preeto both start smiling.
Rajbeer- thank u Preeto. Ag is duniya ki sabse bade khushi di hai tumne mujhe. Preeto waise tumhe kya legta hai, ladka hai ya ladki.
Preeto- ap ko kya lagta hai.
Rajbeer- probably ladki hogi
Preeto- aur agar ladka hua toh?
Rajbeer- tu bhi mein bhaut khush hun. Pata hai humare bacha hoga na uski akhein, gal, nek, hout sab tumhare jaisa hoga. Lekin height mere jaise.
RajPreet start laughing.

9 months later, in the hospital...
Preeto is in the operation theater, nervous Rajbeer waiting outside, Bj- Rajbeer puttar sab thik hoga.
Rajbeer nodds.
Suddenly they hear a little kid crying. Rajbeer gets up from his chair. The doctor walked outside the theater with a baby in his hands.
Doctor- Congratulations, beta hua hai.
Rajbeer is happy and then something strikes him. He looks at the doctor and asked- aur Preeto.
Doctor- maa aur beta donu sahi salamat hai.
Everyone is happy and Bj- woh mein apni beti se mil sakti hun?
Doctor- thodi der mein jab unhe hus aiga tab unka discharge bhi hojaega.
Later when Preeto wakes up, she sees Rajbeer standing playing with her baby. Rajbeer notices Preeto and says- beta hua
Preeto- mujhe do.
Rajbeer- nahi, abhi mujhe kelna hai apne bete ke saath.
Preeto- oh hello woh mera beta bhi hai.
Rajbeer finally hands over the baby.
Preeto- i think ke humare bete ka naam Veer hoga. Kyun?
Rajbeer- i agree

7 years later...
Veer, Rajbeer. Kaha hai duno.
Rajbeer and Veer were playing a video game in Veer's bedroom. Preeto opens the door and sees Rajbeer & Veer playing a video game.
Preeto- mein itne der se awas de rahe hoon. Tum donu ko suniya nahi diya.
Veer- sorry mom, sunae nahi diya.
Rajbeer- Preeto please disturb mat karo 2 minute please.
Preeto- thik hai, sirf 2 minutes.
Preeto closes the door behind her and goes to the living room.
Preeto- haye rabba. Yeh baap bete milke kitne gundagi filate hai. Kal rat ko movie dekhte waqt kitna kachra filaya hai. Aur saf humesa ki tera mujhe he karna padega.
She starts picking up things.
Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pata hai humare agar bete hui toh uski akhein, gal, nek, hout sab tumhare jaisa hoga. Lekin height mere jaise.
very nicee 😆👏




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