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hamsafar

@hamsafar

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Posted: 13 years ago

Dear Friends...We have something special to share with you...We don't know if this will make sense to all of you or not...It is a bit abstract...

We have had this scene visualized for Preeto & Rajbeer...which for us is a representation of their story...their love...their journey...what it has been and what it will be...

We want to share it with you...and we want you to respond to it...tell us what you see in this... 😊

Imagine a courtyard...not too big, not too small...a square courtyard...with building around it...

The Building is atleast two floors tall...

The courtyard has mosaic floor - white, black and teracotta...the building around it is a pale red & beige...
Covered corridors run around the courtyard...they are not very well lit.

The courtyard is brightly lit with the sunshine.

Upar ke floor se awaazein aa rahi hain...hulchal hai...beeji ki...bani ki...meeta di ki..the mundane voices of the everyday living ...bartan gira...almari ka darwaza khula...

Aur... yahan...upar se neeche, left to right...idhar se udhar...across the courtyard...bahut sare strings bandhe hue hain...patle patle dhaage...colorfull...they have formed a web...

And in the middle of all this is Preeto...in a yellow chunni...hair in a dheeli choti...

...aur yeh lagi hui hai...in between these strings...haath se kabhi strings ko upar karke raasta banate hue...kabhi strings pe se taapte hue...sara concentration strings mein hai...she is on and on...😊

And Rajbeer...in a White shirt, black trouser...

...He is walking around in the corridoors...slowly...softly...smiling with an amused expression...looking at her...so busy with her own antics...kabhi ruk ke khada hoke ise dekhega...when she is weaving out of a difficult tangle...he will stand with his arms crossed in front..."Arre!" with half a step forward and then he will stop...😊

They will just exchange a smile...and then she will get out of that tangle and they will look at each other and share a smile of contentment..."I did it"..."Yes, you did it"...😊

And then she will go back to her dance amongst the strings...

This is a vision we have for these two...what do you think this tells us? about these two and their love and their life...Can you please interpret this scene for us...
😊

Edited by hamsafar - 13 years ago

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adiana12

@adiana12

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Posted: 13 years ago

😉 Gr8 post hamsafar and a gr8 visualization of the RB-P relationship. I will use the RB dialoges to interpret this.

RB tells that dil se sochne waali ladki aaj duniyadaari ki baat kar rahi hai. This sums up Preeto. She is all about duniyadaari, about moh-maya, about the tangible and so the web while RB is all about nirmoh, about the intangible so is not caught in the web but is seeing her with amusement.

RB also tells Preeto ki jaanta hoon tumhe sab khud karne ki aadat hai. So though he sees her entangled and takes one step forward but he stops as he knows she would want to disentangle on her own and yet he is still there to catch her if needed.

This is such a beautiful description of this relationship.

Thank u for sharing this.