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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi!! 😊
with all of us dying to see rajpreet ❤️ together again, i thought about writing preeto's POV of the current state.

dis is my first attemt at writing & i apologize for any mistakes 😭and will be grateful for any comments/criticism/review/feedback..👍🏼...and little appreciation too..😉...

so here it is:


Preeto OS: In pain

The night sky seemed darker than usual... Maybe because it was a moonless night... or maybe it was just a reflection of the solitude a girl staring at it felt. Her dearest sister and closest confidante had left for a blissful future. & now there was nobody preeto could share the tempest raging in her heart

Whom was she fooling??? She had been losing the battleagainst her own decision each day of Ishu di's marriage preparations...Rajbeer's relentless presence... his unfaltering enthusiasm and his sense of responsibility for her family...only weakened her resolve...

She had blamed herself for his tears when she broke his heart. It killed her to give him pain. She had promised to be with him...to understand him and to...love him...always. But what had she done??? Left him...Waiting. His eyes told her of the pain...the longing...the love.

Tears forced their way out as a searing pain ran through her heart. This was hell...No, she couldn't allow him to be dragged into the endless responsibilities she had to fulfil. "But he was already fulfilling them, willingly & happily"...a small voice in her head said.

She let her head rest on the cool floor below and looked up into the sky. A smile fought its way through, as she remembered the karwachauth night. In this same place...she had lived another life. Bliss that had enamoured her wholly. That's the way his love was...So complete...So selfless. It made everything easy...Feel everything is right. Maybe it was...Maybe it was her who was making it difficult.

Preeto woke up with a jerk, as the possibilities, she had stopped dreaming about, threatened to open again. Can she have a life with Rajbeer? Only she knew the emptiness of her heart. How impossible it was to keep herself sane when her mind had decided not to think about the person who lived in every corner of her heart...Whose every smile & every happy moment filled her with joy. Preeto suddenly felt her heartbeat grow in leaps and bounds. Maybe, it had smelled the hope in the air. "Manali"...she sighed and got up to sleep. They were to leave for the family trip tomorrow. The place she had wonderful memories of the past. & new memories will be created, with her loved ones."With her love"...Her heart wished secretly and her lips...sent their prayer to Babaji...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thankuu very much for coming up with OS...was waiting for forum members to come up with more..😃
too Lovely n Sweet OS Loved it dear...very well written..👏
hey y dont u come up with more OS or start Rajpreet FF ?
By the way can i call u Sen or Madhu...tell me what u prefer..?...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi sneha...😊...i should be thanking you for all d encouragement 👍🏼 u provide..😃...not only 2 me but 2 all forum members...👏..👏..👏...

& call me madhu..😊...though anythng is fine with me...😃...

rajpreet ff..😕...im lttle scared of running out of ideas..🤔...maybe few more OS...& some SS...b4 i try my hands on ff...😊...

thanks again for your lovely comments.😊...i will try & live up 2 d expectations.😃...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Supabb post.dear... 😊 Yes i also wish...👍🏼
preeto ko uska love rajbeerse Manali me Milan ho jaaye.👏
coz Preeto apne love (Rajbeer ) ke liye hi sabse jyada duhki hai😭
& Rajbeer agr uske samne se 1min ke liye dur jaaye to Preeto bardast nahi karpayegi 😭 coz she tru love Rajbeer... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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super post... plz again & again post... 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sen_madhuban

hi sneha...😊...i should be thanking you for all d encouragement 👍🏼 u provide..😃...not only 2 me but 2 all forum members...👏..👏..👏...

& call me madhu..😊...though anythng is fine with me...😃...

rajpreet ff..😕...im lttle scared of running out of ideas..🤔...maybe few more OS...& some SS...b4 i try my hands on ff...😊...

thanks again for your lovely comments.😊...i will try & live up 2 d expectations.😃...


aww so sweet of u dear and its k Madhu as u wish will be waiting for more OS and SS frm u...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superbbb post Madhu...By the way what does OS and SS mean? I am new to this and couldn't understand sorry...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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She had blamed herself for his tears when she broke his heart. It killed her to give him pain. She had promised to be with him...to understand him and to...love him...always. But what had she done??? Left him...Waiting. His eyes told her of the pain...the longing...the love.

Bravo Madhu
The Rajpreet love story is unique in it's kind and I hope that Preeto reconsider her decision and no more sacrifice ,in this show .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankitaluv

Superbbb post Madhu...By the way what does OS and SS mean? I am new to this and couldn't understand sorry...



no apologies plzzz...😊...no place for dem between friends.😃...& between rajpreet lovers..😆..

OS = one shot (a pilot or a stand-alone story created as a single issue, rather than the more typical series format)

SS = short story

ff = fan fiction (stories about characters or settings written by fans of the original work)

hope dat solves d purpose...

& dont say thanks...u know na d famous dilaogue...😉..."dosti me..."...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Madhu for clarifying all the short cuts
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