RoSid SS-MEMORIES completed

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai everyone...a concept is disturbing me for long days...I wanted to pen it down badly...but then my logical side told me, what are you doing you have a ff pending and ur exams is below ur nose...so Im confused...I don't think I can complete this ss by 17th. also after 17th i'll be able to come only on december 15th...so you guys tell me...what should I do...if you guys are ready to wait i'll start it now or otherwise I may lose track and will be forced to dump the concept...so please tell me ur opinions
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls continue dear we can wait
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thanks guys...so by your opinion I decided to start this one hoping not to keep you guys waiting for long...so her we go... PART 1 Bharadwaj house is especially crowded by relatives and friends today...Why not? Their elder son Siddhant Bhardwaj is getting married. Getting married again, in fact...It has not been an easy task for anyone in the family to bring a new girl in to their home as Siddhant's wife and their daughter in law. It was heartbreaking indeed to give another girl her position. Yes, Roli's position...Roli- the loving wife of Siddhant, best daughter in law of the family and caring mother of Diya, was no more now. She left all her loved ones in a car accident. Diya was barely 11 months old then.Siddhant was broken with the incident; it was like if he forgot to smile. Yet, he lived for the symbol of his and Roli's love; their daughter Diya. Now after 2 years, Siddhant is getting married. But it is purely a compromise; only for Diya. Everyone is happy for it, but all have the pain of losing Roli still in their hearts. In Sid's room. Sid looked at the picture in which he was with his Roli. He was all dressed up as a groom, but his face reveals that he's least ready for this marriage. He caresses the photo with tears brimming in his eyes. "Ae roli...Why did you do this? Why? Why did you leave me and our Diya? See what is going to happen...Now, somebody else will enter our house in your position. She'll be the daughter in law of our house and our Diya will cal her Mamma...But she'll never become my wife, my life...It's only you my Sherni...It's only you...No one can replace your position in my heart...You may ask me, then why do you do this...Just for our Diya...Just for her happiness...I'm helpless Roli...Will you forgive me for this/? Will you be able to forgive me? "Sid cried his heart out in front of the pic. Suddenly he felt a little hand over his shoulders. Yes; it is their little angel Diya. Dressed up in a adorable choli by his sister Cherry. She looked at Sid and furrowed her monobrow. Like mom, like daughter. She is a miniature of Roli in all aspects from looks to character. As Sid admired his little angel, she started speaking in her little squeaky voice. "Papa, you didn't get ready yet...See should I come to make you dress up also? What an irresponsible dad my god...See, get up fast...Nani told me that the marriage is gonna happen fast...Come on, quick..."S9id forgot his sorrows at the sight of Diya and picked her up lovingkly. He kissed her cheeks and said "Ok...Badi maa...I'm coming...See, I'm ready...Now we'll go down..." Diya smiled and kissed Sid's cheeks. "You're so good Papa...I love you..." she said. "I love you too my princess..."Sid replied her. He started to stir out of the room for his marriage with teared up eyes throwing glances at Roli's pic again. I don't know if it's up to mark..Just an another attempt...Please tell me how it is and your guesses on the future story too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heart touching dear really roli died or she is alive bring her fast
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Posted: 9 years ago
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continue dear roli died 😭 wishing that she is alive
waiting for next
Edited by rolisidhanth - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so emotional😭 wish roli is alive
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Posted: 9 years ago
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no roli not die heart toching fab dear waiting for nxt
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PART 2 Sid came down with Diya in his arms. The whole family remembered Roli at the moment. Everyone had tears in their eyes thinking of her. Sid kept Diya down as he came down. He took blessings from elders. Everyone advised him to be calm but they could guess that he was burning inside. He too smiled at them dryly and headed towards the mandap. His bride had already occupied her position there. Sid didn't even bother to throw as much as a glance at her as for him the only one girl who could get his attention is Roli. No one could even dream of getting her position in his life. Sid's mind was racing through the moments 5 years ago when he got married to Roli. He wasn't taking his eyes from him. He was waiting for each ritual to complete. But now he doesn't want them to be complete. He wanted time to stand still so that this wedding which is almost like a nightmare never gets absolute. But as it is, Time waits for no one. It was the turn of Pheras. As he took the pheras carelessly, Sid went back to their wedding. How he carried her in arms and took the pheras...All seems to be a dream now...Now it was the time for the most important ritual. He was to tie the mangalsutra around the bride's neck. A tear escaped out of Sid's eyes as he reluctantly tied the thread which was symbol of his love for Roli but nothing more than a chain of black beads for this girl. Now he was to fill the bride's hairline with vermillion. Sid couldn't help it. He remembered the mornings when he himself filled his Roli's hairline. The girl gazed at him but Sid though looked at her face couldn't admire it. With his eyes closed his eyes and filled her hairline with vermillion. The girl- Shraddha Batnakar became Shraddha Siddhant Bhardwaj. Diya smiled happily and hugged Sid and Shraddha. Sid gave a dry smile and stood up. The duo took blessings from elders...Everyone sincerely prayed to make his life a happy one. I know many hearts are hurt with this update...But it's a necessity for the story...please don't mind and keep guessing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sid married 😭
can't guess dear😭 wishing roli to be alive 😊
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Update fast dear can't wait hope roli is alive😭😭

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