RoSid FF: No more Strangers Completed FF - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Super narration di..waitin fr next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Hi didi...eagerly waiting for next strange... Strange...update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

One of the table of the pub...

The girl was holding the glass looking into it..

By her holding of the glass we can understand she is new to it...

Also her sad face conveys she is in grief...

Tear filled eyes...

She was trying her best to hide the tear in front of all...

Her modern dress showed she is from rich family...

Also the place too conveys the same...

She gave dry smile at the glass which was filled with alcohol...

She took it slowly towards her face...

The smell was not ok for her...

She turned her face to get rid of the smell which is near her face in the form of alcohol...

Still she didn't come to that pub to turn her face...

Instead to drink it...

She turned towards the glass again...

Her expressions showed she is trying to collect the courage to drink...

She closed her eyes and her wandering eyeball showed she is remembering something and got disturbed inside...

She just drink the alcohol at a stretch as if medicine is given to the child to drink and it drinks closing its eyes out of compeltion to drink it...

Only that glass was difficult for her to drink...

After that she ordered for more...

She started drinking again & again...

After few more glasses...

She was not in a position to even order for more...

She just dropped the glass on the floor...

The people around turned to see what is happening by the sound of broken glass..

She was not in a position to understand any of these...

She just paid the money which she herself not sure whether gave more or less and moved out from there..

Her legs were not in the grip to stand or walk firmly...

Her eyes were not in a position to even see the things in front of her...

She just started talking steps towards the gate of the pub...

Her state was not even allowing her to walk fast to the destination she wanted to go...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
really banu different ff really liked the start eagerly waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Awesome update love it w waiting for next plx update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Super didi...it's really strange...waiting fr nxt update

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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
diffrent concept akka.i have read al ur ffs.dis is totally different from ur usual writing style.👏 looking forward to next part.is tat roli and sid drinking in the pub?sorry couldnt comment day as newbie was allowed 10 post a day
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A very different take banu... intro was beautiful but raised questions in my minds... 😕...What happened with them in past that they don't want to be in their senses...my guess is that they are separated from their loved ones which is resulting in all this!! I'll get my answer's slowly...u left me wanting more... yes!!! I need more updates... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really different di
waiting for further updates di

iam back insisting you for further updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Hey awesome yaar...banu its getting interesting...

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