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Kavyakrishna thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Romantic update di... May be some wild animals or der grp ppl came...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Friends,
Thanks for all your comments.. Sorry for not replying individual due to shortage of time...

Next update in few minutes...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 14

When he was moving towards her...

Unexpectedly rain drops started entering into the tent...

They started getting wet...

Oh! They are disturbed...

They didn't expect this...

What has happened...

They swiftly got up...

They looked at each other...

He gave upset look...

She cup his face...

She went near his face and kissed on his cheeks...

She expressed to wait...

He accepted...

They both went to a corner where the rain drops were entering less...

She lean on his shoulder...

He caress her cheeks...

Kissed her...

She blushed...

She knows how much he was eager...

But unexpected rain disturbed them...

Otherwise... She turned red even thinking that...

He looked at her pinky cheeks and pinch it...

She looked at him...

He hit his forehead with her and rub their nose together...

She smiled...

But the place they were sitting didn't give them solution to get rid of rain...

The rain got heavy...

They tent cant handle the water and was pouring the water inside completely...

They got wet...

Still got no other option other than handling it...

They were completely wet...

For a while... They were enjoying getting wet like how they enjoy in the falls...

But later when it was getting worst...

They started worrying...

They looked at each other what can be done...

Then he hold her hand and took her outside...

They looked around and went near a tree and stood there...

Thunder & lightening were making her afraid...

She hug him tightly...

He too hug her tightly and caress her back as a support...

That is when they saw that...

His eyes widened...

...Deeksha.... thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
i think they saw over flow of water or cave like rock
update next soon di
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kshamaD

i think they saw over flow of water or cave like rock

update next soon di


Thanks dear... Updating in few minutes...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: banuprasa


Yes there was no TV or Mobile or Internet to teach everything to even kids...

But in actual as i said... Ancient days people learn everything from nature only...

Even now only Man need to go to school and learn... only he need guidance of parents from parents...

All animals or birds or even aquatic animals never get anything trained...

They are having their life knowledge inbuilt...

So they do everything naturally without any teaching or guidance unlike human...

Sorry this is my personal opinion,... May be i am wrong...


yep di...these studies r really boring 🤢 we should have left like free birds
loved this comment a lot... i'm yet to read the updates 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 15
When he was standing below the tree with her...

He saw sudden floor rushed towards that place...

The water path which he dig for her was helping it to flow very fast...

He understood the situation...

He took her in his arms and pushed her to climb the tree...

She understood some urgency though not sure of what...

Climb the tree...

He swiftly climb too...

That is when she saw the flood...

She got afraid and hide on his shoulder...

They were sitting in the tree branch...

The flood within no time took away all the garden plants and also the trees badly...

The tree was shaking heavily...

He hold the tree by one hand and hold her on the other...

There was no sign of rain getting stopped too...

They were sitting in the tree getting completely wet...

It was getting complete dark being night time...

She started shivering in cold being wet for long...

He was unable to see her in that condition...

He hug her tightly and tried to keep her warm...

but in that situation where the rain was also not ready to stop...

Below on the ground the flood... which was shaking the tree badly...

There was no choice of getting rid of shivering...

After a while... She started losing her conscious...

He pat her cheeks and tried to get her back to conscious...

But he was not successful for long...

She slowly lost her conscious and fall on his chest...

He got no way to get down or do anything...

He got tears...

He was not knowing what can be done...

He can feel her breathe and pulse getting down...

He tried his best rubbing her hand... her body... hugging her...

All tries in vain...

He understood she is not going to get rescued by him...

He cant think any life without her...

He moved towards her face and kissed all over her face...

He peck on her lips...

He hug her tightly...

When she was struggling with her last inhales...

He decided to do that...

Yes... He hug her tightly and jumped in the flood water...

The flood water started driving them on its way for long...

He was travelling in the water path as it took its own directions...

He didn't tried to come out or rescue him...

He too started drowning in the water with her...

He gave his last kiss of that birth on her lips...

Finally the flood water was carrying them lifeless...



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: greshin


yep di...these studies r really boring 🤢 we should have left like free birds
loved this comment a lot... i'm yet to read the updates 😃


haha.. Greshin... Happy that you liked this comment...

Do start reading the updates...

As 1st birth has came to an end now...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi friends,
1st birth has come to an end...

You all know it was just with expressions and no language...

They were learning from the nature everything...

But unfortunately when they were about to unite...

Nature didn't show them mercy and taken away their life...

I just finished the 1st birth with 15 updates as i cant or dont want to stretch it too much...

Otherwise you all may start feeling bored...

So lets catch up in next birth by tomorrow...

Do guess what they are in next birth...
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Posted: 10 years ago
i give up my guess di
but 1st birth was a vegetarian love😆😆😆..sorry

all the emotions,feelings,happiness,desire all were just like ..i was realising it may be like this in

stone age...wow updates r super

di will u update next now or tomorrow

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