ROSID FF: GIST OF LOVE UPD PG 52(2), 53 (4) Completed FF - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love the concept and eager for it, as always for your ff.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: srdevi

Love the concept and eager for it, as always for your ff.


Thanks Devi Dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

Roli Divedi the only daughter of Jamanlal Divedi & Meena Divedi was talking to her father.

The open hair was showing she did coloring & perming recently..

There was no sticker or sindoor in the middle of her eyebrows..

Her eyebrows were well shaped by threading..

Her eyes were showing her 'Dont care' mentality.

The sharp nose were not having nose ring.

Pink color shining lips showed she has put pink color lipstip with glitter

Her pinky cheeks showed she did mild make up on her cheeks too

Roli's neck was having small platinum chain.

She was wearing sleeveless tops and knee length skirt.

Her Right hand was having platinum bracelet while left hand was having a fancy watch.

Her smooth and shining hands & legs were showing she took additional care in maintaining her beauty. Also confirmed her as regular visitor to beauty parlour.

She was wearing high heels slippers

Roli: Oh Dad! Please tell me what you wish me to do.

Jamanlal: Roli, We shifted to US as soon as I finished my studies and after getting my job here. After marriage i bring your mother too here. You were born here only.

Roli: Ok. SO what are you trying to say by this.

Jamanlal: You are here only since birth. We have not even visited our village. Now it went so many years. I wish we go to India this year.

Roli: Oh Dad! See my friends are all here. I will be getting bored if i come there leaving all of them.

Jamanlal: ROli, it is just matter of few days. Again we will be getting back. So what is there to worry.

Roli: Oh No! I heard about India. It is crowded, polluted, congested place. I dont feel like even going there.

Jamanlal: Roli, You are talking about cities whereas our village will not be like that. You can enjoy different life there. Calm & peaceful.

Roli: Oh really!

Jamanlal: Yes. You come with me. I am sure you like it. Wont you do this also for your father.

Roli: Dad! I can do anything for you.

Jamanlal to himself: Hmmm.. I am in that belief only and taking step..

Roli: Dad! what you said?

Jamanlal: Nothing ROli.. Just pack your clothes we are leaving to India tonight.

Roli: Ok. As you wish.

Roli went to her room to pack her clothes..

Meena went to Jamanlal.

Meena: Whether she will accept after going there? I fear for that.

Jamanlal: Meena, Lets go there. Without trying we cant decide anything now.

Meena: I feel like you are taking risks.

Jamanlal: May be. But we got no other option other than that now.

Meena: What if she dont cooperate for our plan?

Jamanlal: We need to make her accept. I cant see her growing in this culture any more and getting married to some American.

Meena was worried.

Jamanalal, Meena & ROli packed thier clothes and started their journey from US to India.

Roli was not knowing the trip is going to turn her life completely...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks Nishaa dear. Updated the first part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations!!! 🥳 on youryour 19th ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: justloverosid

awesome start Banu👍🏼



Thanks ani dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naujoker

Congratulations!!! 🥳 on youryour 19th ff



Thanks a lot bro.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update banu congrats for new ff but tell me dear how can u manage 2 2 ffs is that not hectic for u i think first u complete 18th ff then start this one don't take more burden dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheetal1979

nice update banu congrats for new ff but tell me dear how can u manage 2 2 ffs is that not hectic for u i think first u complete 18th ff then start this one don't take more burden dear


Thanks a lot sheetal dear. I feel happy to get you all friends who has concern about me. Yes will do dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

Roli with Jamanlal & Meena reach Delhi Airport.

They came out of the airport..

ROli was showing unhappy expression on seeing the crowded city outside.

Roli: Oh Dad! See how much crowded the place is!

Jamanlal: Roli, as i said this is city. It will be like that only. You will like our village for sure..

Roli: Lets see Dad.

They get into the taxi.

Jamanlal informed the taxi driver their village details..

Taxi started its journey from Delhi city towards thier village...

Roli was surprised to see driving on right side as she used to see only the driving side on left...

Roli: Dad, see the driving seat on right instead of left..

Jamanlal: Roli, here in India driving seat will be on right only. Here it is opposite to US. We need to keep left while driving.

ROli: Oh!

She asked with surprise...

ROli was looking outside all the way..

She was not feeling good on the crowded city, traffic jam roads,

Roli: Dad wont these people follow any rules or what? Why there is so much traffic jam in the road..

Jamanlal: Roli, here it is like that only. Not regularised like US.

ROli: Does this mean they dont have any rules & regulations..

Jamanlal: Not exactly. They do have rules. But few follow perfectly while few doesn't.

Roli: By not following the rules they are only suffering creating traffic jam right.

Jamanlal: You are right. But they did not realise it and that is causing these traffic jams.

Roli was looking all those with irritation.

After couple of hours driving only they came out of the city limits.

Jamanlal: Roli, now we crossed the city limits. You cant find that much traffic from now..

But unexpectedly the roads were not good.

It was creating heavy jolt in the car..

Roli: Oh God! What is this? I cant understand how these people travels in these places with such damaged roads.

Jamanlal: Roli, May be roads damaged due to rain or something like that..

Taxi driver: Sir the road damaged so many months back. Who is finding time to do all these works? Maximum state highway road will be like this only.
Jamanlal; Driver, already she is irritated. Why you are adding oil to already burning one? Please be silent.

Taxi driver stopped talking further..

Roli was terribly irritated by all these...

Jamanlal was wondering the starting itself is like this and how he is going to handle further...
Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago

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