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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
hlo yusu thanks yaar for updating 😊 i don't have a word to explain my feeling abt ur story ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,it such a really heart touching creation of rosid dear😊 really wonderful update n hope soon sid will get to know everthing abt (ROLI) divadi's daughter
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanx dear late reply but it awesome it such a really heart touching creation of rosid dear😊 really wonderful update n hope soon sid will get to know everthing abt (ROLI) divadi's daughter plz update soon dont take long time for next update plz this time make fast i cant wait really thanx update soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
very nice i loved this part so painful rosid love❤️ hope sid soon finds the truth...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Oh yusu its jst awsm. 😆. Oh yes yusu sorry for tht. .i ll pm u.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Nice update😊.. What those cunning fellows are planning?? When will sid get to know that roli is diwedi's daughter?? Do update more so that we know the answers soon😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
yusu u please delete your pms. i can't send you the msgs. your inbox is full.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Nice update yusu, and thanks for the lengthy update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Wow fabulous update yusu...i hope sid will know the truth soon...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi dear when u update next part plz dont take too much time i cant wait for next part plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi all.. i am sorry again for being late.. plzz forgive me i actually forgot about the story.. dt is why you all should make me remember... by sending pm
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CHAPTER 4



(scene starts from roli who was sitting on the bed deep in thoughts of sidhant.. )
roli to herself: jitnay sakht dikhtay hain utnay hain nai.. bht dard tha unki awaz mai jaisay khud say hi naraz hoon par aisa ku?
( sidhant ji is not that bad .. he was sounding depress.. seems like he is been fighting by himself )

roli made a sad face.. while simar came towards her
simar: maharani roli ji ap plzz uth jayee aur jo doo mehmaan aye hain na unkay liye naishata ka intezam kijay..
(princess roli you should get up and prepare breakfast for the guests)
simar said taunting roli in a funny way..
simar: ku ki agr zara bhi dair hogai na toh dijay humara bharta bna daein gi..
(because if we got a little late , dijay will probably shoot us)
roli looked at simar and stood up..
roli: ni ni simar mai naishta lay kay ni jaoo gi mai sidhant ji ka samna ni kar paoo gi mai toh unki taraf dekh bhi ni pati
(no simar i wont go to give them breakfast i cannot even face him . i dont even look at him)
simar made a face
simar: but you do think of him every single minute.. awww love should be like this. of you cannot face him so tell me how would you tell him that you love him?
roli's eyes gets bigger
roli: tera demag kharab hogya hai? mai ku btao gi sidhant ji ko yeh
(are you mad? why would i tell sidhant ji about my love?)
simar: toh aur kaun btaye ga?
(who else is gonna tell him?)
roli: simar teray demag mai kia chal raha hai?
(simar whats going on in your head? )
roli looks curious at simar while simar smirked
simar: bss hai kuch .. acha tu kitchen mai ja mai un dono nawabo ko naishata day ky aoo gi..
(its something, well you go to kitchen and i will go to the two royal guests for breakfast)
roli nodded and went

simar to herself: mai tujhay is jhanum mai rehnay ni du gi roli. yeh teri pyar ki jeet ki shurwat hai jo sidhant ji aj yahan hain wada hai mera tujhsy kay mai tujhy teri manzil tak phoncha kay raho gi.. tujhay aur sidhant ji ko mila kay raho gi..
(i will not let you live in this hell roli.. it is your loves victory that sidhant ji is here.. i promise you that i will make you reach your destiny. i will bring you and sidhant ji together and forever)
simar smiled to herself..


in sidhant-prem room

sidhant: What Da ... (he sweared) prem i cannot afford to waste my precious time. but at the same time i wanna know the truth.. the truth of mr and mrs divedi's daughter. they were my parents best friends. they lived together .
prem smiled at sidhants concern
prem: i can understand you sid but who would help us know the truth. i strongly feel that dijay and his son mr lalit is a big fraud and liars. you should have seen their facial expressions when i said that mr and mrs divedi's daughter is the half owner of all the property..
sidhant: prem i can judge a person just in 10 seconds to know what kind of personality they have and somethings fishy for sure. just wanna know about mr and mrs divedi's daughter..
prem looked curious at sidhant
prem: so much concern for a dead girl..
sidhant: SHE IS NOT DEAD got it!
sidhant shouted and glared at prem pointing his finger towards him.. prem got shocked by his reaction .. prem touched sidhants shoulder
prem: dude chill i just said she is
sidhant: she is not and em not buying these peoples shit..
prem was about to reply but saw simar on the door shocked..

simar to herself: yeh sab kia hai? dijay nay itni bari sachai chupai kay roli is property ki owner hai aur roli ko hamesha daba kay rakha uspay zulm karti rai
(whats all this? dijay hided such big thing that half property belongs to roli and dijay always underpressured roli and all the injustice with my roli)

simar was in thouhts when prem came towards her clapped his hands by which simar got startled and looked towards prem.. prem got lost in simars questioning eyes..
sidhant: what are you looking at prem ?
sidhant came and ask seriously..
prem shooked his head and looked at simar
simar : ji wo
prem: yes madam?
simar: wo aplogo ko naishtay keliye necchey bula rahy hn..
(they are calling you guys for breakfast)
sidhant without uttering went fron the room ..

simar to herself: should i talk to him about roli..
prem to himself: she is beautiful..

simar: prem ji wo..

before she could say further robbie came from behind
robbie: hi to the duo..
simar prem looked at robbie.. simar make a disgusted face..
prem: hi dude..
robbie was least bothered he eyed simar..
simar: apni ankho ko sambhal kay rakho robbie ji..
(take care of your eyes robbie)
she said sternly and moved out and robbie laughed .. while prem was confuse..




at the dinning table..

sidhant was sitting and eating with dijay and lalit..
dijay : aur lo na beta
(take somethimg more son)
sidhant in a rude manner
sidhant: i can help myself..
dijay greeted her teeth..
sidhant was about to take a toast when he noticed someones peeking from behind the window.. sidhant looked towards it but there was no one. sidhant again looked down.. when again someone peeked sidhant looked up again and this time saw a duppata flowing.. it was a green dupata..

lalit: acha maa mai ap zara wo mujy apny kamray say file daein daein..
(mother plz give me the file which is in your room)
both dijay and lalit went inside..
sidhant was eating when he looked at the window again .. there was someone..
sidhant got up and slowly slowly not making noise went towards the halls window.. and stood infront of the window.. a hand came and held the window knob from other side .. sidhant saw it and held it.. the other one tried to get the hand free when sidhant pulled the hand and the person fell but before landing on floor sidhant held the person in his arms.. its a girl he thought.. her big long hairs came on her face and she looked up in sidhants eyes ..
sidhant: roliii..
her name was a mere whisper..



tera mera rishta hai kaisa
ik pal dur gavara nai

sidhant looked in roli's eyes which were big.. he made roli stand straight still holding her hands


teray liye har roz hai jeetay
tujh ko dia mera wakt sabhi..

roli's eyelash caught sidhants attention and he moved forward to take the eyelash as his fingers touch her face she closed her eyes

koi lamha mera na ho teray bina
har saans pay naam teraa..



simar: roliii
simar's voice brought rosid back in the reality..

roli: wo mai wo khirki
roli stammered..
(i.. was.. i window)

sidhant was shocked at himself how could he loose his mind and get close to this girl who has not left his thought for once.. sid wanted to shout at her but couldnt..
so he greeted his teeth and went outside the house...


simar: roli i want to tell you something very important
roli was lost in sidhants touch..

simar: roliii?

dijay: simar . tum idhr ho? jaoo bazar jakay raat khanay ka saman lay kay aoo
(simar you are here go to market and bring food)
simar gulped down the fear and nodded

simar to herself: i will tell roli after coming back from the market ..

simar went away...


in dijay room:

lalit: maa ap soch ni sakti mujhy kitna gusa hai wo kal kay aye howay larkay office mai pichlay saray accountski detailing kar rahay hain
(mom i cannot tell jow angry i am those bloody boys are checking all the accouts details in office)
dijay in anger threw the vase on the floor..
dijay: is tran toh barson purani mehnat par pani phir jye ga. yeh sab dolat shorat rutbaa hasil karnay keliye mainy kitna kuch kia hai koi soch ni sakta koi bhi ni
lalit: maa humay kuch toh karna hoga warna is tran toh yeh larkay sab khatam kardaein gay inhay humaray saray black money ka pta chal jaye ga maa hum barbaad hojaein gay ..


roli by listening to vase breaking was coming towards dijays room but stood outside when she heard

dijay: barsoon pehlay mainay aek chal chali thi aek aisi chal jisnay sabki zindagian badal di.. jab jamna aur vidya kay ghar beti hoi toh mainay usay humaray mali ko day dia takay vidya apni property us bachi kay naam na karday aur vidya ko btaya ky uski beti mar chuki hai.. aj tak na hi simar na hi roli yeh jaan pai kay wo dono sagi behnein hain aur na kabhi jaan paein gi
(long ago i did a thing which changed everyones life when jamna and vidya had their daughter i gave the kid to gardner so that vidya didnt give her ownership to her daughter and told her that het child is dead. till now neither roli nor simar came to know that they are blood sisters and never will they do)

roli listened to this and was utterly shocked tears skipped her eyes and she put her palm on her mouth.. and started sobbing realising that simar is her bigger sister..

suddenly prem came dre and saw roli crying and went to her

prem: app?
roli got scared and ran from there before dijay or lalit saw her she ran outside sobbing her heartout she was bare footed and running on the road she went to the jungle side she was running and running when she banged into a car... the car stopped at screeching halt it was sidhant both rosid looked towards eachother.. sidhant hurriedly came out and roli ran to him and hugged him..




the end


precap: rosim confrontation
rosid friendship
premeer friendship
and foursom scene


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