premar & rosid ff 'DESTINY' part 8 updt - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh god another ff super eagerly waiting for the 1st update please continue soon we love your ff so much both the sister are awesome
and 1 question in u both who is roli & who is simar??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalrosid

oh god another ff super eagerly waiting for the 1st update please continue soon we love your ff so much both the sister are awesome
and 1 question in u both who is roli & who is simar??

oh god nishaa u asked a secretive question but i ll tell u. my lovely radhu is roli and i m simar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so sweet !! lovely sisters so have u met prem and radha have met siddhant😉 just a joke don't mind it😆 and continue your all ff soon 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalrosid

so sweet !! lovely sisters so have u met prem and radha have met siddhant😉 just a joke don't mind it😆 and continue your all ff soon 😛

ah again want 2 knw secrets. I ll nt mind it. Hehe. I knw u r joking. Frnds hv d ri8s 4 it. I hv nt yet met prem and she hasnt met her sid.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok ok thanks for the information my dear friend hope soon you will met them 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice dear 😉 Plzz continue

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice pls PM wen its done


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalrosid

ok ok thanks for the information my dear friend hope soon you will met them😉

hehe hope so we shld met them soon. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: prabha.abha

nice pls PM wen its done



thnk u.k.surely ll pm u.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1

A boy is sleeping. Alarm rings. He founds it with closed eyes and offs it. Then he gets up and looks around his room as he is searching somebody. He then takes a bath and gets ready; he is wearing his watch when his phn rings.

Boy: hello!

Friend: hi PREM! I have 2 tickets for d Surjhankaar Dance Academy's annual function, we r going today evening.

Prem: today? Sorry yar, I can't go today I have some urgent work,

Friend: no excuses 2day, u have 2 come, and I don't believe u r saying no for dance program…

Prem: fine, I will try..

He cuts the phn and goes downstairs. He sees his family, Mataji, sujata ma and surinder papa worshiping in the temple. He too joins them.

After puja:

Sujata: prem, where is SIDDHANT?

Prem: I don't know maa. I searched 4 him in d room also bt he is not there. I think he left early.

Mataji: f9. Lets us take breakfast.

Prem is driving when his phone rings. Stopping d car he picks it up.

Prem: hey!

Girl: b in d mission field now. (Her eyes and lips only visible)

Prem: y? wht happnd?

Girl: ur bro is playing death game again. (Her eyes and lips only visible)

Prem: wht? I m coming.

He cuts d phone and drives fast.

Mission field

A boy on a bike wid a helmet his eyes r only seen is trying 2 drive very fast moving his accelerator. There are many boys and girls in two parallel rows wid nearly 2 meter distance between them. All r cheering "siddhant"…"siddhant"….

He drives very fast and jumps from a gap of mountain having a 5 m distance 2 the other side of the mountain. Then he removes his helmet and looks smiling 2 everyone. Boys come and hold him on their shoulders. When they put him on the ground girls come and hug him. He becomes irritated. He pushes all of them and tells them 2 nt touch him again. Then he hears a voice "siddhant". He looks and gets stunned 2 see prem. He comes 2 him wid an angry😡 look and sid downs his eyes.

Prem: come wid me.

They go.

Prem: u again played it. Siddhant why dnt u understand? Ur life is precious why dnt u value it? If she hadn't called me…….

Sid: she? Dnt tell me any girl called u. as u knw I …

Both: hate girls.

Prem: I knw bt….u shldnt do it again….

Sid: f9 I ll try.

Prem: wht do u mean by try? U know na if somebody in house knows about it then wht ll happen?

Sid: nthng, u r there 2 save me.

Prem: stop joking and lets go 2 office.

Sid puts his hand around prem shoulder and they both go on. Sid sits in d car, prem opens d door and looks back a girl smiles on him(only lips r visible). He smiles back and goes away.

EVENING

Prem goes 2 d function. A group of girls' r on stage. Then d lead dancer enters and prem is unable 2 get his eyes away frm her. The girl is dancing and suddenly she falls and unable 2 stand again. Prem is tensed and gets up frm his sit 2 help her when his frnd drags him back on his seat. Suddenly prem see another girl enter d stage and dances supporting her. Prem sees her and a smile suddenly comes on his face. They both dance very well and gets standing ovation frm d audience.

OUTSIDE

Prem is waiting 4 d girl 2 come out. Then he see both d girls on d stage r coming out 2gather.

Girl 1: oh! I forgot my bag inside u go I m coming.

Girl 2: ok.

They go 2 diffrnt directions. Prem see d second girl coming bt she didn't notice him so he called her.

Prem: ROLI!

She turns.

Roli: prem….

Prem: hi!

Roli: hi! U here?

Prem: I didn't know u dance so well.

Roli: my di dances better than me.

Prem: (thinking) ha! She is her sister

Roli: hello! Whr r u lost?

Prem: no where. Aan any way thnks. If u hadn't called me 2 day 2 infrm about sid I wouldn't hv known about it anymore.

Roli gives him a smirk smile.

Prem: I knw u r always there whn sid is in danger bt still thnx…

Roli: u r teasing me?

Prem: no…not at all….

Then he laughs.

Prem: by d way whts ur sis name?

Roli: aa…..

Frnd: hey prem lets go we r late.

Prem: jst a min.

Frnd: nt a second

He drags him and take away..then a girl comes 2 roli and asked

Girl: hey roli where is SIMAR?

Roli: she has gone 2 take her bag. Whn she comes we ll leave.

Presid room

Whn prem enters he watches sid on d bed wid earphone. He goes 2 him.

Prem: siddhant I want 2 tell u smthng.

Bt sid is not listening him and enjoying his music.

Prem: 2 day I saw a girl bt I dnt knw her name, sad naa?

Then he looked at sid he is nt responding 2 him.

Prem: siddhant ……siddhant…….

Then he realizes sid is listening 2 d music nt his words. Angrily he pulls his earphone.

Sid: wht?

Prem: I m talking 2 u. and u r busy wid dis? Listen 2 me.

Sid: k. tell.

Prem: 2 day I saw a girl.

Sid: eeuuu……girl? Prem talk 2 me anything bt nt about any girl. U know naa I…

Both: hate girls.

Prem: bt atleast listen 2 me.

Sid: naa… if u want 2 tell about girls… I will not listen 2 u.

He lays on bed wid a pillow on his ears.

Prem: siddhant………

NIGHT

Presid r sleeping. When prem dreams :

Simar is sitting on a bench wid a book, when prem comes and sits near her. Looking at him she blushes.☺️Prem comes more near and keeps his hand on her shoulder. Simar again blushes.☺️

(Present)

Sid: leave me. Wht r u doing bro? leave me.

Prem is holding sid very tightly as he is dreaming him as simar.

Sid: prem.. leave me yaar.

Then he gives a tight slap 2 him. Wid dis prem gets up.

Prem: u?

Sid: ya me. Now dnt hold me so tight again.

2 be continued……..

hope u all like it. we tried our best and aspect good comments...

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