after long time i enjoy PREMAR'S ROMANTIC SCENE WITH MY SHOIAB IN DEEPIKA BY UR WORDS!!!😳😳
sid's entry was superb😉
and last part was very funny!!!😆
p.s: it is just my pov,pls dnt think as bashing or harshly saying this to u..u r writing for both pair,which means u have to be careful with ur writing bcz being a ROSID fan,sometimes without ur knowledge u may give some importance to them,so pls consider it,y im saying this means both hero's intro was not in equal level..thats y, u r writing this for both fan group,so pls dude consider this and make entertain both group!!! if u think im wrong means leave it...i wont compel u to accept it..😊
other than this ITS IS AN AWESOME START...KEEP GOING ON!!!⭐️👏
WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE😛