Yeh hai MUMBAI meri jaan!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yeh hai mumbai, yeh hai mumbai, yeh hai mumbai meri jaanšŸ˜†
Yeh hai Mumbai meri jaan,

Yahan par rehna manoge tum apni shaan.

Paani ke liye kahin kahin hoti hai thangi,

Lekin baarish mein sadkein bhi lagthe hain nadhi.

Exercise karna ho toh train ki sawaari kar lo bhai,

Subah -shaam ki bheed mein apna food digest kar lo hai.

Achambe ki baat hai yeh train ki sawaari,

Koi karta hai bhajan yahan toh koi karta silaayi.

Koi khoya rehta apne pustakon mein toh koi bheek maangtha dekhar duhaai.

Honge kai bade restaurant yeah hotels,

par mitayenge apna bhook phir bhi hum kisi rasthe ke daabe par.
Koi burger- donut na sahi, humen phir bhi naaz hai hamare paani-poori par.šŸ˜†
Galiyon mein tum pavoge, bhindi-pyaaz ka bhaav karthe hue,

Par pavoge unke bacche , pizza-hut mein pizza khathe hue.

Pavoge na tum koi adchan kabhi, koi jagah dhoondne mein,

Mil jayega tumhe dost, har ghali, har chaurahe mein.

Ghar mein bhale ho jagah ki khami

Par dil hai bada karenge mehmaannavazi.

Tyohaaron ki baat math poocho bhai,

Milke manathe sab hindu-musalman-sikh-issai.

Ek doosre ko gale lagathe, kyunki manthe hum ek doosre ko bhai.

Aate hain bahut apna pehchaan bananae,

De jaate hai humen nayi prerna, nayi koshish apna mukhaam bananae.

Soch mein pad javoge tum sabhi , ki kya hai yeh Mumbai bhai,

Koi jadoo tona yeh pyar bhari nagri!

A small attempt to describe mumbai my way...Please bear with my gisa-pita stuff...šŸ˜†

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Posted: 13 years ago
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LAxmi Aunty, beautiful poem on mumbai and u have covered most of the pointsšŸ‘...I can say Mumbai is one of the best cities in india (frm what I have seen)...not biased coz I stay there,love Mumbai and spirit of Mumbaikars but now I m lil jadded by Mumbai...want to fly to some other place

BTW Aunty,Have u visited Mumbai??? coz I guess u r frm south
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Laxmi you are back with a bangšŸ‘...please come regularly here we all miss you😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Meenzy, I am basically from mumbai darling...(born and bought up in mumbai)... mumbai can be one and only one...ā­ļø... It has made life of many ... rags to riches stories keep happening here... the only city where one moves in with small aspirations and succeeds seeing many inspirations...
life though begins with struggles , mind does not get bogged down with fear of losing out...
one can see lives shattered due to terrorism in a place and the city lying still in a day... but the next dawn brings even the tiny tots to school and the crowd gets back to work...
So I love the spirit of mumbai dear..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: 111192

Laxmi you are back with a bangšŸ‘...please come regularly here we all miss you😃

thanks sweetheart... 😃... me too missed out on u all... but will be regular from now on...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent Laxmi, sounds so good just like my city Karachi !!! I would love to go to Mumbai, no not to see stars or celeb but to see and feel its spirit. I hope SGP covers some more aspects of Mumbai .
I agree with Reenu, I always feel adhoora adhoora with out you here, so please come as often as you can
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mumbai meri Jaan, Shaan aur Abhimaan. City which never sleeps. Love it love it love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome back laxmiji.. It's been long time seen your post..Even though i have not seen mumbai, i would love to see mumbai through SGP... Hope CVS do justice to this track..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifully written guruji😃...Me too love the spirit of Mumbai...as well as their rapchik-bhapka attitudešŸ˜‰šŸ˜†You described Mumbai so well in your postšŸ‘

Mumbai toh aapki jaan hain,par aap is forum ki jaan hai..so thank you for coming backšŸ¤—šŸ¤—...and now that you're back,I wont sue you!I will sue my other three gurujisšŸ˜”šŸ˜†...Mishal drooler ji,Singapooriji aur Upcoming Kaagdi jišŸ˜‰šŸ¤£
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Posted: 13 years ago
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šŸ¤— laxmi di! so happy to see u bak! and entry keh toh kya kehne! šŸ‘
i m jus pleasantly surprised by the way u described mumbai so beautifully in ur shayarana andaaz! 😊
Mumbai seems to be blend of amritsar and hong kong to me! šŸ˜› šŸ˜†!
I m tempted to go and visit mumbai atleast once~

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