Written Update 8th April 2011

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Hi Guyzz,
As there is no power @ Shwets place😡 I have been asked to fill her shoes. I know those are big ones to fill but I will try my best..😆😆.

If you guyzz don't like it then please don't blame me, its all Shwets fault.....😉......And please try to bear with a first timer......My first written update ......😭😭😭😭😭.....(Khushi ke aansun hai bhai..samjhaa karo I borrowed some from Rano )

Alright then Friends Romans Countrymen here we go

Scene 1:

Amber Nath Kashyap's Residence:
Its night time and we can hear the frogs croaking...

Rajni rushes into the living room wondering when the 3 brothers will come and sees that Disha madam has dozed off in the living room watching TV. Rajni asks her to get back to her room and sleep but Disha the mahaan can't leave her dear Rajni bhabhi alone..........Disha is pissed off with the TV as there is nothing worth watching....( i can sympathize with her..happens with me all the time)

Enter the dragon..................

Suddenly they both hear voices of the 3 musketeers and Deepak...

Deepak and Ishaan enter the living room carrying Ilesh who is fully talli.....and the moment they enter the room they both drop him on the floor...Ishaan's bhabhis tell them not to create a commotion as Dada/Dadi will wake up ......

Rajni asks them why they are spanking Ilesh to which his dharam patni says confidently that his husband the gr8 must have done something worthy of a spanking....

Disha says proudly that Wherever there is Ilesh there is some problem or the other....Everyone urges Ilesh to reveal his doings but Ilesh is worried about his reputation which he doesn't have😆😆😆

Deepak is about to reveal but Ilesh makes him realize that he is younger to him and should shut up...Inder on the other hand comes up with his amazing one liner: Oh mere poot bata apni kartoot(meaning oh my son tell what u have done)

Ilesh: Pressure agar jyaada ho jaayega toh kya karega insaan(under pressure, what will a man do)🤣

Inder: Pressure agar jyaada ho jaaye toh control karega ek sabhya insaan(under pressure, a gentleman will try to control)🤣....He will use the public toilet and will not do it anywhere like an animal....🤣

Disha is furious when she comes to know that he was caught by police and Rajni starts beating him up......

Chi chi chi Ilesh............how disgusting...dhaat chiii haaat

Scene 2 :
Panna's Place:

Panna is evaluating the answer sheets and is pleasantly surprised to know that the current generation children have become very mature and reads out one answer sheet which reads like:

"U will never succeed unless u love your job
man should live for his dreams
if one needs to realize his dreams he should not fall into unnecessary relationships
I will have everything which I want, I live for today not for tomorrow..."

After reading this answer sheet she realizes that this guy is just like her patidev...arrogant and impractical and then goes into flashback remembering all the words which our impractical Rounak used to tell her.....no compromise on salary and perks.....

The flashback makes her eyes moist and on seeing her sad face panna's FIL tells her that she was thinking abt Rounak to which Panna says that it rare these days but this student whose paper she was evaluating reminded her of him.....She says around her there is so much misery/pain that her own pain/suffering is looking nothing in front of all this...She sympathizes with Suhana and Ishaan in front of FIL and tells him that there is one couple who want to live together but can't and another couple u can live together but don't want to.......👏👏👏well said...
FIL asks her to stay at the kasyap's for few days but she refuses as she doesn't want to add to their misery.....

Scene 3:

Ishaan enters his room...

On seeing Suhana sleeping, he goes flashback where they show Suhana's reaction when she comes to know that she is pregs..He then in his trademark depression wala look starts staring @ Suhana remembering all the interactions with the doctors....
He then takes the calender in his hands and then remembers how he used to mark the days when Suhaana wanted to leave...(Poor Ishaan felt really bad for this guy in this scene)..
He tells himself almost crying and helpless that he doesn't want to know when the reports will be out as he is scared.......

Scene 4:

Morning at the Kashyaps where everyone is having BF and the usual masti where they are pulling Ilesh's leg and no one gives him BF and tea.....Ilesh in his usual bechaara waala expression tells Suhaana that he has not been given anything to eat since Morning...

Suhaana is confused as she is oblivious of the fact......She takes Ilesh's side and questions everyone why they are boycotting Ilesh and when Inder is about to reveal Ilesh tries to cover up....

Enter Badi Maa who sympathizes with Ilesh before she too gets to know Ilesh's kartoot......and then Mr Ishaan murmurs the same in Suhaana's ears ...On hearing this Suhaana madam toh can't control her ....(not Ilesh waala control yaar) laughter and says she will never ever speak to Ilesh..........Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk is the word ..................

Mr Ilesh tries to convince Suhaana that one should hate sins not the sinner...But Suhana who has become smart now after a year at the kashyaps takes the news paper and starts spanking Ilesh and asks everyone to join...Seeing all this masti Badi Maa gives her trademark smile which expresses happiness at the same time worry...Ilesh as usual takes shelter in Badi Maa who in turn asks Suhaana to forgive her Jheth(BIL)......

Super excited Suhaan then calls everyone and starts gossiping about the beautiphul Manju aunty-Deepak waala Kaand(episode) ...They show how Manju aunty praises Deepak(compares him with chulbul pandey of dabangg..gabru jawaan...Deepak looks like is working out big time these days..) when he and Suhaana were on the roof top..

Manju aunty is so excited that she says she will never ever leave him and will talk to Radha bua about

Deepak aur Babli....In dono ki shaamat aaaye yaa qayamat.....oh ho oh ho....

she reminds him that their pair was a hit in childhood and will be a superhit now..She then tells him that her husband has planned to gift a car to bubbly's would be and also that her father has left a lot of riches for Bubbly so its party time for Deepak..Aish hee Aish... maza heee maza......

Madam Suhana is very annoyed and irritated listening to Manju aunty( which is not unusual)...dono ki kabhi jami hai jo aaj jamegi....

Suhana tells Manju aunty to stop the match making as she being the bhabhi of Deepak will decide who he will marry....

Some funny lines during this scene:

Manju A: Axe Cuse Me.......Wah bhai wah wah bhai wah kamaal hai

Suhaana: Deepak mera Voh hai,
Manju A: toh Ishaan kaun hai(poor Manju aunty showed concern for Ishaan there)

Suhana warns Manju aunty and asks her what is so good abt ugly bubly.......She says she can make out from the factory how the product will be,,.,,,,,,,,😆😆😆

Manju aunty couldn't take her words and is furious as usual....

Suhaan says she didn't speak anything bad she just insulted her........Now they both shout in unison.....Inder ki Maa ....Ishaan ki maaa...sambhaalo apni bahu ko..chachaji....blah blah

Suhana now knows each and every word that Manju aunty says...Rag Rag se waakeef hai vo abhi......

Flashback done........

Everyone is very happy that Deepak got a match specially INder and Ilesh...Both the guru and chela go to Manju aunty to make the most of this match.......Everyone else run behind them and Ishaan tells Suhaana why did she take panga but Suhaana says she doesn't want to miss the action and speds from there.....

Badi Maa stops Ishaan and tell him that just leave her ...Her happiness comes first..She says she can forgive anyone for her happiness and our Bholu is all smiling and happy....freeezzzzzzeeeeeeeeeee

PRECAP:


Suli Sudi have plans to take Suhana to a fashion show but our madam has other plans..She wants to have a fashion show in the kashyap parivaar...OMG....and the supermodels being

Rajni Disha Ishika and Meena Kumari......(Monday toh ramp par aag lagne waali hai.......🤣)





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iViews thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tejesh I " ENJOY " 😆 wonderful Update.... I enjoyed every word , every line..... Bravo......Keep writting the update plz..... 👏

Edited by netri - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guyzz I would appreciate if you provide valuable feedback on my written update.......I would be happy to read them all......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update tejes if i'm nt wrong itz first time u hv written d update n u hv written it very well👏.....about the episode it was gud one.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tejesh, MashaAllah, MashaAllah, you not only filled the shoes perfectly but you have left a mark as well!!! Mujhay such mai bohat aacha laga you style of eritting.
I am really impressed with the creatives how they tried to patch up the mistake of SP by blending few good scenes with the flash back as they had no other way .
Panna scene was a excellent and I do agree with her about the new generation !!! and the dialogue about the sorrow of others makes your own sorrow unsignificant.
An a okey episode.
Edited by venture - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful update Tej...👏





Edited by crysind - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: netri

Tejesh I did wonderful Update.... I enjoyed every word , every line..... Bravo......Keep writting the update plz..... 👏

😆😆😆...Nets yeh kya hai??? Khud ki tareef????🤣... and Tejesh din say anything????😲😲😲😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: laxmi_s

😆😆😆...Nets yeh kya hai??? Khud ki tareef????🤣... and Tejesh din say anything????😆



Laxmi Di plzz read the first line as:

Tejesh I did(enjoy) full stop wonderful update....


Nets if u don't agree then plzzz do so at u'r own risk

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Posted: 14 years ago
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and Laxmi Di where's u'r feedback...Please don't be scared ok...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: laxmi_s

😆😆😆...Nets yeh kya hai??? Khud ki tareef????🤣... and Tejesh din say anything????😆


Using stupid PDA..... 😆 have to press really hard and typing mistakes/........ Sorry Tejesh..... I 'll never b so impatient for the update..... 😛

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