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Hello everybody, I am back!!! I am really sorry but I do not have time to write Fan Fictions, so instead of writing the whole story, I just write the scenes which I would have included if I would have written a Fan Fiction.
To read the first scene I had written:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1604732
I got inspiration for this story from Sasural Genda Phool itself!! Yesterday, I was watching the episode in which Suhana comes to know that Sid cheated on her. I was thinking if I would have been in Suhana's place on the banch when she was talking to Ishaan, I must have felt really scared! Plus, I read the written update for yesterday's episode, so I got this idea which summarizes Suhana's and Ishaan's feelings for each other.
This is purely Fiction. I do not know if what I have written is possible in real life, but since an idea is a idea, I decided to write it. This scene comes after the day when Suhana introduces Ishaan to her mother. The same night.........
Suhana goes to her side of the bed and arranges her bed so that she can sleep. She lies down on the bed. Ishaan enters the room and closes the door and lies down on the bed. Ishaan and Suhana facing each other.
Suhana: Good night! (with a slightly sad feel)
Ishaan: Good night! (understanding that Suhana is not very happy)
Ishaan tries to hug Suhana to make her feel better. She holds his hand and says :Ishaan, please (in a voice tone signifying that she is not interested)
Ishaan respects her opinion and tell her good night and goes to sleep.
(After some time)
shivers............ shivers............shivers..............
Ishaan slowly wakes up hearing someone shiver. He sits up and looks around. He is shocked!!!
Ishaan: Suhana!!!!
Suhana is shivering!!!!
Ishaan hurriedly sits up and checks Suhana's temperature. Suhana has fever. Ishaan runs to the cupboard to get a blanket and puts it on Suhana. Suhana is still shivering. He waits for a minute, but Suhana is still shivering. Ishaan tries to wake Suhana.
Ishaan: Suhana..........utho Suhana,........ Suhana.................. Suhana?
She doesn't wake up.
Ishaan has a tear in his eye : Suhana, utho naa please........
Suhana is mumbling something.
Ishaan goes near Suhana :kya hua Suhana? batao.....
Suhana : (mumbling) Wo... wo log.... log..... maar... rahe.... hein....
Ishaan hears this and tries to wake her up. She doesn't. Suhana is having a bad dream.
Ishaan: Suhana utho naa please...... (and tears start falling from his eyes)
Suhana: (mumbling) please chor do!!! Mein please bhi keh rahi hu! Please chor do......
Ishaan: Suhana........
Suhana: (shivering and mumbling) Ish.... Ishaan..... chor do!
Ishaan is shocked because Suhana is telling him to leave her!
Suhana: Ishaan..... Ish.... Ishaan.........
Ishaan: bolo Suhana
Suhana is searching the air with her hands, as if she is searching for someone. Ishaan goes closer to her. Suhana puts her hands around Ishaan.
Suhana: Ish... Ishaan.... please bacha lo mujhe... please......
Ishaan puts his hand on Suhana's shoulders. Suhana stops shivering!!!! She is still mumbling something!!
Suhana hugs him tigher: Ishaan..... please......
She suddenly leaves him... Ishaan is shocked by her behavior. Suhana suddenly sits up....... and starts crying!
Suhana is looking down and crying. Ishaan lifts her head and wipes her tears. Ishaan and Suhana look at each other and don't talk. They are just looking at each other. Suhana is still crying and Ishaan sees that and starts crying too. They both are just looking at each other. Suddenly, Suhana looks down and starts crying harder.
Ishaan puts his hands on her shoulders: Suhana, dekho batao mujhe,..... kya hua... batao Suhana.......
Suhana is mum. Ishaan: Suhana (in a firm tone)
Suhana suddenly starts speaking: Wo, wo maar raha tha. Mom.... mom ko........ Mein unhe...... unhe..... bacha nahi payi....... wo... wo..... mujhe maar ne wala tha...... Ishaan.... wo.....wo....... (and starts crying)
Ishaan is shocked and speechless. He doesn't know what to say. Ishaan, seeing Suhana crying... starts crying..... Suhana sees that. She hugs him very tightly and doesn't leave him. Ishaan hugs her back. Then, he breaks the hug. Suhana is still hugging him. Ishaan tries to make Suhana sit but she doesn't leave him.
Ishaan: Suhana.... dekh.
Suhana: Ishaan... please mujhe yaha rehne do... Please, nahi to wo..... wo mujhe..... Ishaan mujhe bahut dar lag raha hein......She starts shivering yet again.
Ishaan hugs her...
Ishaan: dekho hum bed ke against bet te hein, ok?
Suhana: hmmm...
Ishaan and Suhana sit beside each other against the wall. Suhana clungs to Ishaan as a scared child would to her mother......
They stay awake the rest of the night sitting beside each other. Suhana hugging Ishaan and Ishaan putting his hand on Suhana's shoulders.......
Sometimes, it doesn't take a serious disease to prove that someone truly loves someone. Maybe even seeing someone suffer even in a dream turns out to be a nightmare for someone. Maybe that's what is true love, supporting the partner when they are troubled, scared or heartbroken are things which just prove that.
Ok, I am done!!
I started writing with something else in my mind and it turned out something totally different. I was thinking of writing a scene just showing that they love each other but it ended really different. It ended out being something that I would want in place of the cancer track. Hope you all like it.
Hit the like button if you like my work!!
And please do comment.
Thank you!!!!
Waiting for your response.... and sorry for the long post.
To read the first scene I had written:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1604732
I got inspiration for this story from Sasural Genda Phool itself!! Yesterday, I was watching the episode in which Suhana comes to know that Sid cheated on her. I was thinking if I would have been in Suhana's place on the banch when she was talking to Ishaan, I must have felt really scared! Plus, I read the written update for yesterday's episode, so I got this idea which summarizes Suhana's and Ishaan's feelings for each other.
This is purely Fiction. I do not know if what I have written is possible in real life, but since an idea is a idea, I decided to write it. This scene comes after the day when Suhana introduces Ishaan to her mother. The same night.........
Ishaan!! Ishaan, please mujhe bachao!
Suhana goes to her side of the bed and arranges her bed so that she can sleep. She lies down on the bed. Ishaan enters the room and closes the door and lies down on the bed. Ishaan and Suhana facing each other.
Suhana: Good night! (with a slightly sad feel)
Ishaan: Good night! (understanding that Suhana is not very happy)
Ishaan tries to hug Suhana to make her feel better. She holds his hand and says :Ishaan, please (in a voice tone signifying that she is not interested)
Ishaan respects her opinion and tell her good night and goes to sleep.
(After some time)
shivers............ shivers............shivers..............
Ishaan slowly wakes up hearing someone shiver. He sits up and looks around. He is shocked!!!
Ishaan: Suhana!!!!
Suhana is shivering!!!!
Ishaan hurriedly sits up and checks Suhana's temperature. Suhana has fever. Ishaan runs to the cupboard to get a blanket and puts it on Suhana. Suhana is still shivering. He waits for a minute, but Suhana is still shivering. Ishaan tries to wake Suhana.
Ishaan: Suhana..........utho Suhana,........ Suhana.................. Suhana?
She doesn't wake up.
Ishaan has a tear in his eye : Suhana, utho naa please........
Suhana is mumbling something.
Ishaan goes near Suhana :kya hua Suhana? batao.....
Suhana : (mumbling) Wo... wo log.... log..... maar... rahe.... hein....
Ishaan hears this and tries to wake her up. She doesn't. Suhana is having a bad dream.
Ishaan: Suhana utho naa please...... (and tears start falling from his eyes)
Suhana: (mumbling) please chor do!!! Mein please bhi keh rahi hu! Please chor do......
Ishaan: Suhana........
Suhana: (shivering and mumbling) Ish.... Ishaan..... chor do!
Ishaan is shocked because Suhana is telling him to leave her!
Suhana: Ishaan..... Ish.... Ishaan.........
Ishaan: bolo Suhana
Suhana is searching the air with her hands, as if she is searching for someone. Ishaan goes closer to her. Suhana puts her hands around Ishaan.
Suhana: Ish... Ishaan.... please bacha lo mujhe... please......
Ishaan puts his hand on Suhana's shoulders. Suhana stops shivering!!!! She is still mumbling something!!
Suhana hugs him tigher: Ishaan..... please......
She suddenly leaves him... Ishaan is shocked by her behavior. Suhana suddenly sits up....... and starts crying!
Suhana is looking down and crying. Ishaan lifts her head and wipes her tears. Ishaan and Suhana look at each other and don't talk. They are just looking at each other. Suhana is still crying and Ishaan sees that and starts crying too. They both are just looking at each other. Suddenly, Suhana looks down and starts crying harder.
Ishaan puts his hands on her shoulders: Suhana, dekho batao mujhe,..... kya hua... batao Suhana.......
Suhana is mum. Ishaan: Suhana (in a firm tone)
Suhana suddenly starts speaking: Wo, wo maar raha tha. Mom.... mom ko........ Mein unhe...... unhe..... bacha nahi payi....... wo... wo..... mujhe maar ne wala tha...... Ishaan.... wo.....wo....... (and starts crying)
Ishaan is shocked and speechless. He doesn't know what to say. Ishaan, seeing Suhana crying... starts crying..... Suhana sees that. She hugs him very tightly and doesn't leave him. Ishaan hugs her back. Then, he breaks the hug. Suhana is still hugging him. Ishaan tries to make Suhana sit but she doesn't leave him.
Ishaan: Suhana.... dekh.
Suhana: Ishaan... please mujhe yaha rehne do... Please, nahi to wo..... wo mujhe..... Ishaan mujhe bahut dar lag raha hein......She starts shivering yet again.
Ishaan hugs her...
Ishaan: dekho hum bed ke against bet te hein, ok?
Suhana: hmmm...
Ishaan and Suhana sit beside each other against the wall. Suhana clungs to Ishaan as a scared child would to her mother......
They stay awake the rest of the night sitting beside each other. Suhana hugging Ishaan and Ishaan putting his hand on Suhana's shoulders.......
Sometimes, it doesn't take a serious disease to prove that someone truly loves someone. Maybe even seeing someone suffer even in a dream turns out to be a nightmare for someone. Maybe that's what is true love, supporting the partner when they are troubled, scared or heartbroken are things which just prove that.
Ok, I am done!!
I started writing with something else in my mind and it turned out something totally different. I was thinking of writing a scene just showing that they love each other but it ended really different. It ended out being something that I would want in place of the cancer track. Hope you all like it.
Hit the like button if you like my work!!
And please do comment.
Thank you!!!!
Waiting for your response.... and sorry for the long post.
Edit: to all of you who read my FF !!!!
Mangal Lakshmi
Bade Achhe Lagte Hain
