Wish this was there in the Honeymoon track!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello friends,
Well... you know we all are waiting eagerly for the honeymoon track and magic.... it has arrived. I was thinking about it and I got and idea!! A scene which I think should happen, which I think would show the true love between Sushaan. I hope you all like it. This is it........
Hopefully, many of you remember the scene when Rajni and Disha were helping Suhana getting ready for her SR. She was sitting in front of the mirror and sobbing thinking about all the mean things she told Ishaan and how much she must have hurt him with her words, but yet he is so forgiving. So, this is where I get my main idea from.....


Sushaan have arrived in Goa. They have reached the hotel. Suhana is really tired especially after her really long journey by train. (Come on, It was her FIRST train journey). She tells Ishaan that she is really tired and that she wants to go to their room. Ishaan tells her that she can go, he will make sure that all the arrangements for their trip are ok. Suhaana goes to their room in the hotel. She is really very tired, so she goes and sits on the bed, (her back resting against the wall). She is just wondering about something and suddenly she recollects all the mean things she told Ishaan. She begins to sob. She is lost in her world of grief. She is really very sad, she is so lost that she does not see that Ishaan has entered the room. Ishaan sees Suhana crying. He rushes to her side of her bed, and sits beside her. Suhana still ignorant of his presence.

(Suhana sobbing....... tears coming from her eyes.)
Ishaan : Suhana, kya hua tumhe? Suhana tum ro rahi ho, kya hua Suhana batao mujhe. Kya hua? Tum kyu ro rahi ho, Suhana batao mujhe, please. (He is holding her shoulders, like the scene when Sushaan are about to kiss, his hands on her shoulders)

Suhana is mum, she is still crying.

Ishaan: Suhana please ro mat, kya hua?

Suhana suddenly hugs him and starts crying even worse. (but not the Saas Bahu Serial ones)

Ishaan is taken aback, he is shocked by her behaviour.
Ishaan: Suhana... (before he could complete)
Suhana: Ishaan, (pause) I am sorry............ Please mujhe maaf karo........ I am really sorry..... (She begins to cry, she is still hugging him)
Ishaan is confused. He does not know why is she crying and asking for forgiveness. Ishaan brings Suhana in front of him.
Ishaan: Suhana, tum mujhe sorry kyu bol rahi ho? I am not angry with you. Suhana, (pause) I love you. To (hindi ) how can I be annoyed with you.? Batao mujhe, kya hua Suhana? Batao.
Suhaana: (She hugs him) Ishaan, I am sorry, maine tumhe pehle itne mean things bole. I was annoyed that time. Ishaan, I am sorry, I did not mean it. Ishaan please mujhe maaf kar do.... Please......

Ishaan recollects what Suhana had told him once.
Ishaan: Suhana, dekho..... (makes her see him) Main samajhta hu... Tab you were really disappointed with me... Tab Suhana Bajpai mujhse pyaar nahi karti ti.. par ab Suhana Kashyap loves me, right? Suhana Kashyap ka husband too loves her. It's alright Suhana, I am not annoyed with you. Please....... ro mat........please.
(Tears come to Ishaan's eyes)

Suhana hugs him again and says " I love you Ishaan!!!"

Ishaan " I love you too Suhana. "

Suhana is felling little better now, she is not crying anymore. She is trying to smile. Ishaan sees this and says," Dekho, wo sab humara past hein, ab hume use bhool jana chahiye. Ok? Dekho, ab Suhana Kashyap and Ishaan Kashyap Goa aaye hein Honeymoon ke liye, so how can they be sad? Hein na?

Suhana gives her million dollar smile. Ishaan smiles back.
Suhana says, "Thank you Ishaan. Mein kapde change kar ke aati hu."

END OF SCENE

PLEASE REPLY AFTER YOU READ THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please do tell me, how did you like the story? Hope you could interpret the message I wanted to send through this story and hoped you liked it. Please do suggest ways I can improve further😉

Thank you for reading and please, please comment.


Edited by ymanjushree10 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice very well written..excellent...you sketch the whole scene with your words...amazing...i loved the scene..Hats off to your imagination👏👏...hope something of this time happens soon and not only this ishaan should also seek forgiveness for all the pain that he has given to suhana because of sona
Edited by Sinha18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Manju.... very nice dear..😃..very neat attempt for your first thread..... cud imagine Sushaan thru your post....so well written and narrated one......👍🏼...
I don't know about OBS.... but acc. to your post.... u seem to prioritise them making a new start with apologies for the wrong dones towards each other.... that's a nice decent start....seems to be a matured one.... your thots can fit in after they get settled in each other's company..... may be get serious with their bond.... and then their realisation as to how they had messed up each other's lives before and then apologise and get drawn towards each other....
Seeing SGP shaping up Sushaan moments.....I guess HM is gonna be hilarious as well.....Ragini had herself said the HM is gonna be hilarious and romantic ....seeing yest. episode... can see them making a beautiful beginning for wonderful romantic innings for Sushaan...they started it off beautifully.... Till now Suhana has not reciprocated his attention much accept a few secs yest.... possibly in HM.... they will draw them more closer with many such sequences..... before Suhana finally surrenders to his arms....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Manju.... very nice dear..😃..very neat attempt for your first thread..... cud imagine Sushaan thru your post....so well written and narrated one......👍🏼...
I don't know about OBS.... but acc. to your post.... u seem to prioritise them making a new start with apologies for the wrong dones towards each other.... that's a nice decent start....seems to be a matured one.... your thots can fit in after they get settled in each other's company..... may be get serious with their bond.... and then their realisation as to how they had messed up each other's lives before and then apologise and get drawn towards each other....
Seeing SGP shaping up Sushaan moments.....I guess HM is gonna be hilarious as well.....Ragini had herself said the HM is gonna be hilarious and romantic ....seeing yest. episode... can see them making a beautiful beginning for wonderful romantic innings for Sushaan...they started it off beautifully.... Till now Suhana has not reciprocated his attention much accept a few secs yest.... possibly in HM.... they will draw them more closer with many such sequences.....before Suhana finally surrenders to his arms....]
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Absolutely Awesome and Superbbbb Interpretation!!!!!!!!!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Rubal Thank you so much. I was a little apprehensive about posting it as I was scared as to people would like it or not. Thank you for your encouragement!!!!

@Laxmi_s Thank you so much for your encouragement. Maybe if you wouldn't have told me I would not have typed it down and posted it!!!! You do have a point, I was thinking that if Suhana actually asked Ishaan for forgiveness, that could actually strengthen their bond. They could understand each other. And Maybe Ishaan too could ask Suhana to forgive him for hurting her during the Sona time (Sinha18's idea)

@Sinha18 Thank you so much.. You were flattering me!!!!! 😆 Anyway, thank you for your encouragement!!!!!!!!Well, you are right. I did not think of it. Thank you so much!!!!!

Edited by ymanjushree10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very well written dear! 👏
the forum is all abt sharing, so dun be scared from postin your creative writing next time 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWW THAT WAS CHOOOOO SWEEET. We can dream all we like but if they follow OBS, we won't get to see such moments BUT I do hope that they do something like what you've written because I feel its really important for Ishaan to know that Suhana didn't mean to be so harsh in their 1st wedding night.😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG...Its awsum..*claps*
dear u're a vry gud writer..!!!
So i suggest u to write a FF (fan fiction) on SuShaan..i wud love to read their luv story 4rm ur point of view...
Do think upon writing a FF...U're superb !

-Vipra
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderfully written manju...
could imagine the scene....so sushaan starting with apologies...really nice... :-)

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