---**SGP TaskMaster**---'Titles and Winners Pg63' - Page 21

DANCE FREAKS

PRESENTS

Suhaana and KK

Suhaana goes to Maayka

Bell rings, KK opened the door

Suhaana: Hello Dad! [Smiling widely and bents downs to touch his feet]

KK: are yeh kya kar rahi ho? Pehle to kabhi mera ashirwad nahin liya

Suhaana: wahi to papa, still learning to be good bahu!

KK: ok ok, chalo ander aayo, tumhe pata hai main tumhe phone karne hi wala tha!

Suhaana: kyun?

KK: who jo tumne dress mangi thi, maine who khareed li!

Suhaana: OMG! papa aap bahut hi slow ho, Ishaan ne mujhe wo gift bhi kardi aur maine use pehnkar waapis bhi kar diya!

KK looks shocked

KK: kya? TUMNE DRESS WAPIS KAR DI!

Suhaana: haan bahut mehngi thi na, toh mujhe bura laga. ishaan ki puri income us pe lag gayi! Aur ghar pe fridge bhi lane wali hai na! isi liye

KK: chalo paise ki keemat to pata chali.

Suhaana: What?

KK trying to change topic: Ishaan kaisa hai who kyun nahin aaya?

Suhaana: Sona se fursat mile to aayega na, Sona toh uske peeche hi padhi rehti hai! Pata nahin kabh jaayegi?!

KK: kyun, suhaana kashyap is jealous huh? Waise bhi sona toh perfect bahu hai! Ghar ke har kaam jaanti hai aur sundar bhi hai! [said teasingly]

Suhaana staring at KK: WHat? Suhaana bajpai, I mean Kashyap Jealous of Sona! Seriously are you okay Dad? Main sona se kai guna zyaada achchi hoon!

KK: achcha kaise? Batao zara?

Suhaana: well, I can make coffeee, tie ishaan's tye in the morning, and make family laugh, aurr aur.....!Suhaana kashyap doesn't need to prove herself ! main apko yeh sab kuch kyun bata rahi hoon! Aur waise bhi aap mere father ho ke uske! Jaayo use hi adopt kar lo! [looking annoyed]

KK: are no one can replace you! Main to mazaak kar raha tha! Par dyaan se rehna kahin ishaan uski taraf kheechta hi na chala jaye

Suhaana: Kaise chala jayega, apni itni beautiful wife ko chod ke! Dun worri Dad, aap uski chinta choddo, meri chinta karo, I m starving!

KK: sorry, Chalo let's go out, your choice my treat.

Suhaana: Wow Dad! Don't change your mind later okay?! [Happily]

They both Leave !! 😉

SCENE CHANGES! [thnk god jaan bachchi! 😆]

The end!

My sincere apologies for crappy Hindi, i m not very good in it, and I couldn't think of any way to make it funny! jus happy that our team has something to input! 😉

@Dance Freaks

Hey Keenu , awesome post yaar 👏👏
I liked the whole conversation,you handled the track very wonderfully and the fun element you added is as natural as we usually get in KK suhana scenes whenever they comes in the show. I wish we could have such cute scenes in our show too.

Hey CV's where are u guyz, just stop writing for a while and take a look over this thread for these wonderful posts, hats off to dance freaks again for their nice work😊

@Sushanomania

Hey sanjii and Fabs ,fabulous work yaar, i liked the whole Inder badi maa conversation, all the dialogues are too good and touch the heart to its depth. Amazing work👏👏

Deesha

- *Excitedly walks in* Di .. Di dekho na di *her eyes on the magazine* wow kitna sundar hai.. Di..😛

Rajni - *Lost in thots and doesn't hear Deesha*

Deesha

- *While looking into the magazine bumps into Rajni* Di ?dekho *Showing the saree she has chosen from the magazine to Rajni*

Rajni - *Still not answering*

Deesha

- *Taps Rajni on the shoulder* Arre di ...uffo aap sun rahe ho ke nahi..

Rajni - *Wakes from her trance* Huhh ... Deesha ..tum

Deesha

- *Waves her hands in front of Rajni* Ofcourse Di. ..mai hun ..Deesha 😆

Rajni - *Gives a smile* 😊 Kya baat hai ..aaj bahut khush lag rahi ho *Goes to fold Meethis dress*

Deesha

- *Sits with a jump on the bed* Haan di... aapko pata hai .. aaj Elesh ne mujhe kya promise kiya hai? 😳

Rajni - *Smiles at Deesha* Nahi... kya promise kiya hai?

Deesha

- *Elated* Di ...*showing the magazine* yeh jo saree hai na di ... Elesh ne mujhse promise kiya hai.. ke woh apni iss mahine ki salary se mujhe yeh saree khareed ke dega 😳

Rajni - *Gasps in shock* 😲Par Deesha yeh to kum se kam 25,000 se 30,000 ki hogi?

Deesha

- *Arches her eyebrows in surprise* To???

Rajni - *Stares at Deesha dumfounded* Deesha tum yeh 25,000 ki saree kharidoge??? Dimag to thikane pe hai?? 😕

Deesha

- *Turns away and walks to the window* Kyun di ..agar Suhana 20,000 ki dress kharid sakti hai.. to main kyun nahi??

Rajni - *Comes from behind and turns Deesha around* Deesha ... tum aapne aap ko Suhana se kyun compare kar rahi ho? Woh to abhi..

Deesha

- *Continuing* Bachchi hai...right?? Di mujhe samaj nahi aata ki jab Suhana kuch bhi karti hai to kisi ko koi problem nahi hoti.. lekin main itna sa bhi kuch kahun to..*Stops in a huff* 😔

Rajni - *Puts her arms around Deesha* Deesha... Baat tumhare aur Suhana ki nahi hai.. baat hai Samajhdari ki.. Suhana mein kitna bachpana hai yeh hum sab jante hain. Aur waise bhi woh ek alag mahol se aai hai ..aur use hamare sache mein dhalne me thoda waqt to lagega na aur waise ... Ishaan bhi to use kuch tofhe dena chahega na?? Aur Elesh ki naukri to bas abhi abhi...

Deesha

- *Agitated* Abhi abhi lagi hai.. aur kabhi bhi choot jaegi ...nai?

Rajni - Deesha.. yeh kya keh rahi ho? 😲

Deesha

- *Angrily* 😡 Di yehi problem hai.. aap sab Elesh ko sirf nikamma hi samajhte ho... jaise ki kisi bhi pal uski naukri ja sakti hai.. !! Di Elesh badal gaya hai.. zimmedar ho gaya hai..! Mere liye aur iss parivar ke liye aapni zimmedariyon ka ehsas ho chukka hai usse..

Rajni - *Smiles* 😃 Janti hun Deesha.. aur isse sabse zyada khushi tumhe hi hui hai.. par main inn khushiyon ko sanjhoke rakhna chahti hoon

Deesha

- *Looks hurt at Rajni* Aur aapke hisab se main nahi sanjona chahti? 😒

Rajni - Deesha ... Tum meri baat ka galat matlab kyun nikal rahi ho??

Deesha -

Kyunki aap baat hi galat kar rahe ho... Chahe Suhana ho.. yah Raunak jiju .. kuch bhi kare Elesh ko kuch bhi kahe ..kiski ko koi problem nahi hoti.. par Elesh aur main kuch bhi kahe yah karna chahe to aasman tut padta hai.

Rajni - *Stumped* 😲 Deesha ..aakhir tumhe ho kya gaya hai?? Tum janti ho ghar me sab kitne khush hain ki Elesh ki naukri lag gai hai.. aur aakhirkar tum dono ki zindagi mein khushiyan aai hain. Par khushi ke waqt usse sanjokar rakhna zaruri hain... kyunki kabhi kabhi khushiyon ko aapni hi nazar lag jaati hai

Deesha -

*With tears in her eyes* 😭 Haan di ... Main hi aapni khushiyon ko nazar laga dungi na 😭 .....Aakhir mujhe haq hi kya hai khush hone ka... haq to sirf Suhana aur Raunak jiju ko hai na.. aakhir woh itne raees jo hain??

Rajni - *Shakes her head sadly and walks towards the window* Yeh suraj ko dekh rahi ho Deesha?? Kya eese dekh kar koi keh sakta hai.. ke shayad kuch hi pal mein woh kaale badalon se ghir jaega?? *Turns to Deesha* Waqt aisa hi hota hai... kab badal jaae .. koi nahi janta..!! Kab kisi ki khushiyan ..ghum ke badalon se ghir jae ..kise pata!

Deesha

- *Wipes her tears and looks at Rajni* Par suraj to suraj hota hai di.. badal to kuch hi pal mein chatt bhi jate hain ...par suraj humesha ki tara chamakta rehta hai. *Turns and leaves without a word*

Rajni - *Takes a deep breath* Par yeh badal kab laut aaye ..kise pata? 😔

Deesha

- *Walking in the gallery towards the kitchen to get a glass of water hears the phone ring and picks it up* Hello

Suddenly Deesha's face changes to shock... 'Elesh...' 😲

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'Waqt to waqt hai.. aapni gati se chalta hi rehta hai..

aur

waqt har pal kisi na kisi ka imtihaan leta hi rehta hai'

-the EnD-

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Guys really sorry for another ordeal ..😭 par kya karein we are not writers so maaf kar do 😭

thank you guys for liking my very first attempt at writing 😳

wonderful work...Dance freaks...i really want more of KK-Suhana scenes like this...

@Masakalis...superb convo between the two....loved it...!!!

@Massakallis:

What an amazing script yaar, and what a dramatically written dialogues just create a picture through such dialogues, puri tasveer khich ke rakh di hai , both the characters just become real in front of my eyes with all their movements of hands and expressions, such is the power of the words that you used in this script and moreover you just not created a scene only but at the same time give the message of the month just SGP gives us hidden messages, u did the same , what a beginning and what a end yaar, especially this dialogue is the heart and essence of ur script:

Great work Tanu and Manasi👏👏👏👏with such a superb script u guyz really took revenge, hum sabki waat laga di yaar😭😭

Well done again👏👏for me ,this is the script of the month as far as meaningful message and central theme is concerned.

Himanshu..................thanchyuuuuuuuuuuu thanchyuuuuuuuuuuu so much....🤗u hv no idea...how good it feels to hear such great encouraging word from someone who is an epitome of creative writing himself......thank u so much 🤗

Tanu and Mansi aka Masakali, zabardast, zabardast really loved it, best for me!!! so very realistic. Now I am going to kidnapofy you guys for nest task.
Dancing Freaks, enjoyed reading enormously, could picture the scene actullay
Sushanomania, serioulsy good stuff, jandaar plot and a shaandar write up.
Tanu is right dew-drop pear , we havent had the privilage of your company for a long time, good to see you back.