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Tere Bin

CHARACTER SKETCH

BAJPAI FAMILY

Suhaana Bajpai

A very modern and fun loving girl. Suhaana lost her mother when she was very young. So her father has fulfilled all her wishes to keep her happy and thus pampering her. Suhaana is very adamant and short tempered. If she likes something she wants that at that moment. And she keeps something only if she likes it. She is very lavish and loves partying. She loves her sister very much. But behind this fun character is a very innocent and childish Suhaana who craves for her mother's love.

Kamal Kishore Bajpai (KK)

Father of Suhaana and Sanjana. KK is a very successful businessman. After the death of his wife Vinysha, KK has taken full responsibility of bringing up his daughters. For KK life means his daughters. He has done everything to keep his daughters happy. He has tried to give all the love he has but still feels he has not been able to give their mother's love. He has always hidden the fact from his daughters that he still misses his wife a lot and thinks a lot about her. He fears the day when both his daughters will leave the house to their sasural.

Sanjana Bajpai

The younger sister of Suhaana. Sanjana is much more responsible than Suhaana. She understands her sister better than her father. She is a sweet and quiet girl, exactly opposite to Suhaana. She likes to stay mostly at home with her father. Sanjana is a very good badminton player and always starts her day playing badminton with her father. She is in her final year of college.

The Bajpai house is mostly silent. But with Suhaana in the house there is sure to be lots of fireworks. When both the sisters need anything, they never ask their father. They demand it from him. The Bajpai House's life is the sisters.

KASHYAP FAMILY

Ambernath Kashyap (Dadaji)

He is a very fun loving person. Retired, he mostly spends time reading newspapers and loves playing carom and chess with his son and grandsons. He loves fighting with his wife for fun. He loves his daughter-in-laws and treats them as his daughters.

Gayathri Kashyap (Dadiji)

She is loved by everyone in the family. She is the cool dadiji and understands youth very well and even changes accordingly. She too treats her daughter-in-laws as her own daughters and shares a great bonding with them and the entire family. Both she and dadaji are the life of the Kashyap House. They have 2 sons and 2 daughters.

Shailaja Kashyap (Badi Maa)

Badi Maa is the eldest daughter-in-law of the family. She is one of the two pillars of the family. No decisions will be made without her consent. She is a like mother to everyone. With Badi Maa in the house there will never be any problems between anyone. She has 1 son and 1 daughter, both married. Each and every person in the house respects and adores her.

Alok Kashyap

Second son of dadaji-dadiji. Alok is a very responsible and honest person. He is the other pillar of the family. For him family comes first. He always wants to see his family happy and is always concerned about them. He has great respect for Badi Maa and always seeks her advice. After his elder brother left the family and Badi Maa for his own career, Alok has taken all the responsibilities on his shoulders. He works for a bank and gets a good salary.

Rano Kashyap

Wife of Alok. She has always does what Badi Maa says. She loves her like her sister. She is a very innocent and lovable person and the children of the house loves teasing her for her innocence. But behind this innocence is a very caring person who always cares for the family and shares all her feelings with her husband Alok. Alok and Rano has 1 son and 1 daughter.

Inder Kashyap

Son of Badi Maa. Inder is a very mischievous person. He loves teasing his brothers and sisters. He along with his brother Ilesh runs a company. He likes spending time in the house instead of going out. If Inder is present in a place there is sure laughter.

Rajini Kashyap

Wife of Inder. She is the ideal daughter-in-law. She does all the work and loves everyone in the family. She understands everyone and loves Badi Maa. Inder and Rajini have 1 daughter, Meeti (5yrs).

Panna

She is Badi Maa's daughter. Married to Raunak she stays in the same city. She comes very often to the Kashyap house and is loved by everyone.

Ilesh Kashyap

He is the son of dadaji-dadiji's daughter. He lost both his parents at a very young age and is brought up in the Kashyap household. He and Inder run a company and he is very sincere to his work. Both the brothers' motto is never to discuss business at home. He is very intelligent and easily solves issues in the house. He and Inder is the best combination for roller coaster laughter ride.

Disha Kashyap

Wife of Ilesh. She loves her husband a lot. She is the ideal sister-in law and loves Rajini as her own sister. She loves the entire family and she shares a great rapport with Rajini and Inder.

Ishika Kashyap

Daughter of Alok and Rano. Ishika is a typical sister who gets all the things done by her brothers. She loves being with Disha and Rajini and helps Meeti with her studies. Ishika is in her 2nd year in college.

Radha Bua

She is the adopted daughter of dadaji-dadiji. But she has never been treated like that. Radha Bua is a very strict person and the entire family obeys her orders. But she never goes against the orders of Badi Maa and Alok. She loves Ishaan as her own son and always have a soft corner for him.

Ishaan Kashyap

Son of Alok and Rano and the youngest of the brothers. Ishaan is a very soft, simple and innocent person. He never gets angry even if his brothers make fun of him. In fact he loves when his brothers make fun of him. He loves his family and wants them to be always happy. He does whatever the elders ask him to do. He works as a civil engineer in a big company. Ishaan is a very confident person outside but he remains innocent at home. He never wants to show that his profession and work is better than the others. He is a very understanding person and cares for everyone in the house.

The Kashyap house is always full of noise. The bonding among the brothers and sisters is very strong that there is no feeling that they are cousins. There is always fun and happiness and the family knows how to turn bad times into a happy one.

OTHER CHARACTERS

Dolly Didi and Gopi Kaka

Dolly Didi and Gopi Kaka work in the Bajpai house. They are more like a family to the sisters. Gopi Kaka has been working there for more than 12-13 years and has seen both the sisters grow. Dolly Didi has been working for more than 8yrs now. For both Suhaana and Sanjana, Dolly is like their elder sister. Both have a lot of respect for Gopi Kaka too. KK at times shares his feeling with Gopi Kaka.

Suli and Sudi

Best friends of Suhaana. Suli-Sudi always hangs out with Suhaana. Suhaana is their leader. Suli-Sudi has no worries. They just love to party, shopping and sleep. Suhaana sometimes tries to make them do something useful but always failed. Whatever may be they are true friends of Suhaana. Their lifestyle may be different but their friendship is very pure.

Roshan

Only friend of Ishaan. Roshan belongs to a very rich family. He and Ishaan studied together from school. Roshan then went to US for his graduation while Ishaan studied in Delhi. Roshan is a very humble, down to earth and a true friend of Ishaan's. He never brings his status in friendship. He has always solves Ishaan's problems at school. But Ishaan has always found himself awkward being with Roshan. Ishaan always makes excuses from meeting him but loves talking with him through phone and shares all his secrets with him.

hows it guys...??
Edited by shwetha.spring - 15 years ago
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Tere Bin Teaser

Suhaana and Suli-Sudi are standing in the parking lot of a big construction company waiting for their car. Suddenly a brand new car stops in front of them. A person gets out of the car. He is wearing trendy white boots, cool blue jeans, branded white shirt tucked in. He is also wearing a attractive matching wrist watch. He is…..

Edited by shwetha.spring - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome charachter sketch shwetha...Inder and Elesh run a company and Elesh is sincere to his work😲...k it definately seems interesting😆

Originally posted by: shwetha.spring

Tere Bin TeaserSuhaana and Suli-Sudi are standing in the parking lot of a big construction company waiting for their car. Suddenly a brand new car stops in front of them. A person gets out of the car. He is wearing trendy white boots, cool blue jeans, branded white shirt tucked in. He is also wearing a attractive matching wrist watch. He is?..

i guess it is Roshan and Ishaan is inside that building...😉
waiting for an update...continue soon😛
Edited by amotlymileo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome character and teaser Shwets!!!!! want to read more!!!!!
and as for the teaser I think its Roshan if Sid is not in the FF!!!!:)
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@leo...thanks ya..yes ilesh is sincere..

@haaki...thanks ya...
il post the first part by monday...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome is d word I can use for d teaser n the charachter update👏...pls update it soon...Cool...we now have five FF here in SGP forums...thanks to all the FF writers😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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how on earth did i miss out on this FF........

Gr8 Start Shweta ........looking forward to yr next update!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Beautiful character sketch...👏👏👏👏 n cant wait to read the first epi...right away...😉
and nice teaser...from the sound of it.....i gues its Roshan...🤔
Thank u soo much for the PM...🤗
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Points to Note

    the characters and plot may resemble... iam not very good in hindi..so 50% english will be used
  1. there will be grammatical mistakes in hindi...especially in genders...laugh within yourself...

"TERE BIN"

Part-1- The Bajpais

Scene-1

Suhaana and Suli-Sudi are standing in the parking lot of a big construction company, waiting for their car. Suddenly a brand new car stops in front of them. A person gets out of the car. He is wearing trendy white boots, cool blue jeans, branded white shirt tucked in. Suhaana looks at him from his shoes..pants..shirt.He is also wearing an attractive matching wrist watch. He is..

(Alarm goes on...Tringgggggg!!!!!!!!!!)

In a beautiful round bed full of dolls, a hand comes out of the blanket and bangs the clock. Suhaana Bajpai gets up and sits in the bed, eyes still closed'.and suddenly shouts

Suhaana: No yaar...maine mere dream boy ka face nahi dekha...how will I know recognize him now...(sits quietly...again shouts)Dolly Didi!!!!!😡
(Dolly Didi comes and gives three cups of coffee'Suhaana chooses one and Dolly Didi leaves)
Suhaana:
(sips coffee..opens eyes)..mmm..coffee toh achi hai..lekin dream isse zyaada achi thi...kaash..kaash yeh alarm ring nahi karthi...(hits the clock again😡)...I could have seen my dream boy(dreaming...sips coffee)...OMG!!!😲 Suli-Sudi will be waiting for me and today is so special!!
Scene-2

KK and Sanju playing badminton in the lawn

Sanju: Suhaana di ab tak uti nahi..aur aaj itna special din hai..

KK: jab Suhaana ko yaad aayegi na Sanju..tab dekho..kitne speed se thaiyaar hoti hai..(😆..and sighs..) aur kahegi galati hamari hai'(thinks..) Sanju..pl aaj ke liye bas..i can't play anymore..tak chukka hoon..(goes and sits)..

Sanju: 😊Dad..aaj main maanthi hoon kyunki ..aaj raat party hai..so main preparations shuru karthi hoon..varna Suhaana di bahut naaraz ho jaayegi..😆kahegi ki main irresponsible hoon..iam going..

KK: ok bete..main bhi ab jaakar Suhaana ko utaathi hoon..

Scene-3

Suhaana is getting ready..KK enters room

KK: Suhaana..bahar jaa rahi ho kya??

Suhaana: Haan dad..Suli-Sudi are waiting for me..So have to go..u know dad, evening party bhi hai..so I will be late..see u tomorrow morning dad..Bye..(leaves)

KK: Suhaana..aaj..

Suhaana: (turns) yes dad..

KK: kuch nahi..(disappointed face) bye Suhaana..have a good time..

Suhaana: Bye dad..

Scene-4

KK is sitting in the dining..Sanju comes with a paper..

Sanju: Dad..look at this..raat ke dinner pe yeh saari dishes banegi..all your favorite..

KK: (silent)..

Sanju: (looks at him..sits near him) kya hua dad..di kahan hai..(excited)..tell me dad..di ne kya gift diya???

KK: (silent..smiles..tells loudly)..woh bhool gayi!!!😲

Sanju: kya!!!!😲(gets up)Suhaana di aapke birthday bhool gayi..??!!

KK: (nods head sadly)

KK and Sanju look at each other (long time), Sanju shocked and KK disappointed

Sanju: phir se???😲😲

KK: haan phir se!!!😲mujhe pata nahi ki woh baar baar wohi cheez kaise kar sakthi hai..I am very disappointed..kitni umeed thi mujhe ki woh meri birthday pe..

Sanju and KK looks at each other and..starts laughing..😆😆

KK: kuch naya karagi..lekin..(silent)..naatak kar rahi hai woh ki jaise woh meri birthday bhool gayi..

Sanju: 😆😆😆

KK: kitni baar Sanju..kitni baar..😊agar ek baar aise karthe tho surprise lagega..lekin har saal isi tarah..😆 yaad hai Sanju..last year bhi Suhaana ne yahi kiya..mujhe wish nahi kiya..phir phone karke wish kiya..aur gift ko chupa diya..phir kaha ki "Dad'find it'"'😃

Sanju: dad..sirf last year nahi..😆last 3 years..aur hame bhi acting karne padthe hai jaise hum surprised hai😲waise dad..ek acchi baat hai..di aapko same gifts tho nahi deti..😆she finds the best for you every year😊

KK: yes..(proudly)..whatever Sanju..hume natak jaari rakna hoga..har saal ki tarah..alright??

Sanju: yes dad..(hugs him)

Mobile rings..on the table..KK picks up..
KK:
hello!!

Suhaana: Happy Birthday Dad'!!! Iam standing just behind you..

KK: (smiles..hugs Suhaana)..thank you soo much bete(fakes)..tumhe yaad thi mere birthday..😲

Suhaana: of course dad..aapko kya laga..main bhool gayi..never..yeh surprise thi😊

Sanju: (fakes)di..what a surprise😲kyun dad???

KK: haan..iam totally shocked😲(stern)..Suhaana..where is my gift??

Suhaana: dad..the phone..takes the mobile..this is the latest mobile with the best features..for you..(gives)now say thanks..😊

KK: (actually very happy..takes the phone)thank u sooo much Suhaana..(fakes)..surprise was superb..mujhe pata hi nahi chala kit tum plan kar rahi ho mujhe surprise karne ke liye..(hides laugh)..kyun Sanju..

Sanju: (nods)

Suhaana: but dad..Sanju..i have to say one thing..(bursts 😆😆)'I think aap dono ko memory main kuch problem hain..kuch nahi zyaada hi problem hain..can't you remember guys..main har saal aisi hi surprise deti hoon and you people din figure it out..😆😆'sach main..i thought you will find out this year..but😆😆..i think you both have to go to the doctor for a nice brain checkup..😆😆

KK and Sanju shocked 😲😲😳😳
Scene-5

Late night in the lawn after dinner..KK, Suhaana and Sanjana are sitting in the grass having fun..

Suhaana: Great dinner dad..

KK: all sanju's choice..

Sanju: 😊

Suhaana: dad..I was thinking..aap old hote jaa rahe ho..look at you..few grey hairs..body not so strong..

KK: (😲looks at himself)is it so???😲

Sanju: No..no..dad..u r looking perfect..

Suhaana: 😆'whatever dad..ab hamara gifts deejiye..

Sanju: haan..

KK: 😊'you girls will never forget that alone..wait(goes inside and bring a bag..)

KK gives a gift each to both..
Sanju: (opens)wow dad..an Ipod..cool..thank you sooo much'

Suhaana: wow..branded watch..color cud have been better..but the model dad..fantastic..thank you..

KK: 😲'tum dono ko pasand aaya..I thought you won't like it..isiliye maine doosre gifts be rake the..

Both: kya😲dad pl woh bhi deejiye..please..please..

KK: 😊'OK'but iam sure you will like it'

KK gives gifts to both'both opens it..it's a photo of KK, Suhaana and Sanjana(as children)..with their mother Vinysha..both are very silent..and suddenly jumps on their father and hugs him..
Sanju:
thank you sooo much dad..

Suhaana: you are the best dad..I love you..

KK: I love you to (hugs them)

Both the sisters run with the photo to their rooms..KK still in the lawn..very happy..looks at the girls running home..looks at the sky..
KK:
thank you soo much Vinysha..(looks at girls).. for everything..main soch bhi nahi saktha ki main in dono ke bina...
(sighs and smiles)
TERE BIN
guys....how is the first part....???do comment...
Edited by shwetha.spring - 15 years ago
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wonderfull part yaar....i just love the trio Suhana-KK-Sanjana 😃
Will wait for d nxt part...update it soon..!!! 😉

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