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amotlymileo

@amotlymileo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Don't worry guys...Suhaana isn't lost...she just can't find something errr someone errr....well you guys will have to wait to find out😉

next part would be up in the evening😛

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amotlymileo

@amotlymileo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Chapter 3: Am I Lost??..umm

Suhaana,KK,Shruti,Sanjana and some of Suhaana's friends are at the airport and Suhaana's flight is being announced.....

She bids good bye to her friends and turns to her parents.She hugs them tightly and gives them a kiss each,,,

"I'll miss you guys...make it soon!!"

"Yes bachha, after all hum bhi apni princess se zyaada days tak dur to nhi reh sakte!!"

She goes on to say her last good bye to Sanju who has been standing in a corner throughout.She bears her in a hug and tells her,,

"Miss me sometimes.."

"I'll always miss you dii!!"

Tears escape from both their eyes....They break out of the hug and Suhaana leaves towards the departure area....

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The plane lands in Brisbane on scheduled time. Suhaana gets off the flight and goes to collect her luggage only to realize that one of her bag is missing. There were three bags out of which two were there and the third one, the biggest one that had all her clothes was missing. She went on to complain to the authorities and was told that they would find it in two days and would let her know....Suhaana decided to come back after two days as it is she didn't have much of an option but to wait for them to find her luggage...

She came out of the airport from Gate no.3 and looked around.She couldn't find anyone...

"Pata nhi koi aya bhi hoga ya nahi??"...she thought to herself.

She waited for some time and then decided to make a call....she tried finding the number but soon realized that she had forgotten to save it in her phonebook...

"Why!?Why do I always forget to save important numbers!?....ab dad ko call karma padega!!"

She called up her dad and told him that she had reached the airport and that her luggage had gone missing...

"Suhaana don't worry...mai abhi jaake pata karta hun what is the problem..!!"

"Take it easy dad!! Just one bag is missing....maine complain kar di hai and they said they would find it in a day or two"

"K...but still I will go and enquire once.."

"As you wish dad aap manoge to ho nhi!!...actually mujhe aapse Kashyap's ka number lena tha?mai unka number save karma bhul gayi.!!"

"To Eshwar ji ya unki wife se maang leti..!!"

"Unhe call karne k liye hi to number chahiye Dad!!....mai yaha gate par khadi hun and they are nowhere around..!!"

"What!?Kaunse gate par ho!??"

"Gate 3..Dad!"

"Look around...wo whi kahi khade honge !!"

"I-I can't find them!"

And the lne went dead.She was in a foreign land all by herself and had no idea where to go and what to do.....

KK got worried and called up Eshwar and told him that Suhaana was waiting for them at Gate 3.....

Eshwar and Shailja reached there and recognised Suhaana immediately...

Shailja called out to her...

"Suhaana!!"

She turned in the direction of the voice and was relieved to see someone...

"Hello aunty!!Hello uncle..!!"

"Hello beta.!!how was your flight!?"..Eshwar asked

"It was fine uncle!"

"We had been waiting for you at Gate no.1 when your dad called to inform that you were here..!"..Shailja said

"Wo actually I forgot to save your number and then the battery of my cell went dead.."

"Koi baat nhi?kal subah sab ka no. save kar lena....come lets go"

And they proceeded towards their car....

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"Tired?" ..Shailja asked

"Hmm.." ...

"We're almost here"

She smiled as she breathed a sigh of relief. Turning in to the entrance, she noticed all the lights of the mansion off except for the one. Rano's room,,,typical.

"Lagta hai koi tumhare liye ab tak soya nahi"

They stepped out of the car and went into the house....

Eshwar went to his room to change while Shailja stayed back..

Rano had arranged for some snacks knowing that Suhaana would be hungry.

She asked her to get fresh while she gets her some coffee..

"Aunty...please don't mind but I am really tired and I don't feel like having coffee right now!!"

"I absolutely understand sweety....chalo I had prepared some kheer for you...

you can at least have that!?"

Suhaana agreed although she wanted to just go hit the bed..

"Fine aunty!!"

She sat with the ladies for some time and then made a wish to go and sleep....Rano went and showed her the room.As she came back...

"Rano bura mat manna..wo bachaari thak gayi hogi aur itni raat bhi ho gyi hai..!!"

"I understand Didi!!...chalo ab so jaate hain aap bhi thak gayi hongi!!"

And they both went to their respective rooms...

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uthor's Note

*sighs* we finally reached home! I,,,,, Forgive the errors!

Oh remember when I said that this part was going to be short?? I lied!!! This turned out SO long...Im so sorry guys!!

I have to admit this isn't my best work but I've been preoccupied...sorry again.

Next Chapter?? I think it's time we meet the family! What do you think?

Please comment/hit like!

Your support makes me feel like I'm home!

Love Leo

xxx

Edited by amotlymileo - 15 years ago

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_Procrastinator

@_Procrastinator

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

A-W-E-S-O-M-E Update Yaar... 👏 👏 👏
completely loved it....Thank GOD...!!! Eshwar g found Suhana...nhi toh pata nhi kya hota Suhana ka..i m soooo happy now..
can't wait 2 read more... very intersting plot goin on
Hoping to c SuShaan scenes in d nxt chapter

btw thanks 4 da pm n continue soon...

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amotlymileo

@amotlymileo

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: trueraginifan
A-W-E-S-O-M-E Update Yaar... 👏 👏 👏
completely loved it....Thank GOD...!!! Eshwar g found Suhana...nhi toh pata nhi kya hota Suhana ka..i m soooo happy now..
can't wait 2 read more... very intersting plot goin on
Hoping to c SuShaan scenes in d nxt chapter

btw thanks 4 da pm n continue soon...

thnx dear....will try and update as soon as possible

me too wanna bring Ishaan in the picture😳

Edited by amotlymileo - 15 years ago

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harika

@SomerholicGirl

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#65

cute update yaar!!!!!!! continue soon....

and as far as my FF is concerned , I think I wont update it this week:(

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amotlymileo

@amotlymileo

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: haaki.b
cute update yaar!!!!!!! continue soon....

and as far as my FF is concerned , I think I wont update it this week:(

thnx dear....next part will come up soon..:)

why do you think so??..

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Leo....🤗🤗🤗 Thank u soo much for the PM dear...

n my my.................have i discovered a GEM of a FF writer or what...!!

Fabulous fabulous FF....luvd the character sketches n the story so far...😛

My net is kinda crappy tonite... i will make my detailed comments post tmrw..😉

Luvd the update....... keep rocking dear...❤️

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BeOptimistic

@allizzwell

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

leo sorry for the delay dear...i wanted to read it in fresh mind.... yest.i tried but my mind was damn restless ... cud not concentrate... so read today..... wonderful script yaar.👍🏼... how u manage to imagine a sequence and write yaar..😲.. so kudos to your imagination....👏..👏👏.. i liked your passion leo..😛.. i could easily imagine those characters in the narration and yes me too waiting for Ishaan to meet Suhana...😳. lovely work...!