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Posted: 10 years ago
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Samud are the only couple who recently made me feel like writing poems because of the poetic atmosphere created by Sanjay Leela Bansali.He depicted the tragic love story Saraswatichandra like a beautiful poem.

Why?

You broke my dreams of love,

You wounded my heart,

You scratched my heart,

Then why are you healing

My wounds now?

You filled my eyes

With love and happiness,

But you snatched

Them from my eyes,

And filled them

With grief and agony.

Now when my eyes get hurt

By painful tears,

Why are you trying

To wipe them away

With a smiling face

On your hand?

Now also why do your eyes

Depict love?

When I was with you,

You left me alone.

When I am away from you,

Why are you with me?

What kind of love is this?

I cannot hate you

Though you hurt me,

But I have killed my happiness,

So even my love is so helpless

That the barrier between us

Can never be broken.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Lovely poem
Full of emotion
Thanks for pm n plz keep em comin my way
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Nice lines.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Such a poignant and emotional poem, Lovely indeed.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Wonderful poem👏, really liked it, defined them perfecly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely poem
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
A very nice and emotional poem jasmine.
SAMUD are a purely magical couple.
As they said on karvachauth
sukh main dukh main saath reh kar door reh kar hamesha ek doosre ka saath nibayenge...
They did this from the beginning till the end...
Do vote for them as many times as possible for ITA Awards...
Also do support us in messaging on facebook and twitter to star plus that JENAM should host diwali special.
We will message to such an extent that star plus account get flooded by messages and they r forced to fulfill our wishes.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You my friend
... Are an amazing poet.

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