Valentine's surprise OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Valentine's surprise
Seeing Danny celebrating Valentine's day with Kusum in the show 'Saraswatichandra' like me many of the Danny-Kumari fans must have wished to see Kumari in Kusum's place with Danny.This OS is for them.



Kumari sat waiting for Danny.
K:Today is our first Valentine's day after marriage.Still Danny is not bothered to come early from his office.Let him come back.I won't talk to him.
Just then Danny came.
Kumari showed angry face at him.
D:Kumari...
K:Don't talk to me.You are so boring and unromantic.You easily forgot today's speciality.Today is...
D:Valentine's day..
Kumari was surprised:You hadn't forgotten that today is Valentine's day?
D:No.
Danny pulled her cute cheeks:How can I forget today's speciality?Today is the day of love and I love you a lot.
Kumari became emotional:I am sorry Danny.I thought because of work pressure you forgot everything.

D:I will forget anything,but not you.

She looked at him emotionally.
D:Hey Kumari...today is Valentine's day and you have not even dressed properly.Get ready.We will go out.
K:I will come now Danny.
Kumari went inside and wore a brown suit.

Danny was carried away by her innocent beauty.She blushed.
K:Danny,shall we go?
D:Ya...yes.
K:Where are you taking me to?
D:Surprise.But you will like it for sure.
K:Promise?

D:Yes darling..promise.I won't disappoint you.
She smiled.

Danny took her to a restaurant.
K:Danny...here there won't be any privacy.
D:No Kumari.I booked the whole hall for us.
K:Really?
She was surprised.
He took her inside.She couldn't believe her eyes.
The whole hall was decorated.Music was flowing on the back ground.
K:So beautiful.
Then her eyes fell on the floor where it was written 'I love you Kumari'.

She became very emotional and embraced him.He held her tight with a smile.
Danny led her to the table with a smile.
She was surprised to see the dishes.
K:These are my favourite.Thank you so much Danny.I never expected this much.
He held her hand and rolled his eye balls on her:I will do anything for your happiness Kumari.

She smiled.
D:Now shall we start eating?

K:Ya.
Danny took a spoon and looked at her romantically.She blushed.
He fed her.She fed him back.
When he started having food she took the spoon and started eating from his plate.
Danny smiled at her.She smiled back.

After some time they went back home.
Danny entered the bedroom.He was surprised to see the room being decorated with pink hearts.It was written on the wall:I love you Danny.

He looked at Kumari in disbelief.
D:Kumari...this...?
K:You gave me a Valentine's surprise.This is my Valentine's surprise for you.

He smiled:You have given me your heart by decorating the room of our love with hearts Kumari.I love you.
He held her closer to him.She blushed.
D:Happy Valentine's day Kumari.
She smiled:Happy Valentine's day Danny.

The End
Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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A sweet and simple OS! I loved the way it wasn't clusttered with too many ideas! Good job Jasmine! 😊 Do keep writing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Every time I read ur os I become emotional, this is really cute and lovely I miss so much danri. Likely u keep this couple alive with ur os. Good story, lovely picture, well written, hats of jasmine, keep writing it s always a pleasure to read ur story. I wonder where is kumari on the show, I miss her too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww this was very sweet 😳

Made me so emotional cuz they can't be together bcoz of Kusum to be precisely the stupid writer

I don't think I will be able to accept Danny & Kusum they don't click together!!

Varun & Vinita had a better chemistry khair just hope Kumari turns up soon have a bad feeling that she has quit cuz CVs are not giving her enough screen Space

Awesome OS loved it ❤️
Edited by MaaneetDeewangi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a lovely OS. So sweet and full of love, Jasmine. Have miss Danny and Kumari, thanks for bringing them back. Loved your pictures, like watching a Valentine's movie.👏
Edited by Punkin22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful os loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice sweet OS
Both kumari n Danny having similar ideas
Thanks for pm

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