SaMud SR - 'Pinky' options to CVs - Page 5

Originally posted by: _Ank_

My SR day idea z little different Since gooman n LN r coming so aftr shadi wen saras sees ln n goo the old horrifying memories comes back again he remembers his mother's suicide attempt nd thr z little stressful convo btn d trio at his house in a room.he gets angry n sad nd starts to leave d place nd comes out of d room kumud sees him tries to stop him bt he doesnt listen to her n says leave hm alone for while.. Kumud undestands his state n let him go.. Saras goes near d same pound where his mother did suicide nd sits there.. On d other hand kumud z sitting in their room worried n tears comes in her eyes she waits for saras nd hugs hs photo frame she falls as sleep aftr sometym on sofa in awkward state.. Saras on d other hand staring at d water suface nd thinks abt all d thngs nd hs mom ...then after sometime reality strikes him..tht how come he forgot kumud in his pain..its their 1st nyt aftr shadi n it got ruined.. He feels guilty he stands up immediately nd goes to home..enter their room nd sees kumud sleeping on d sofa hugging hs photo. He feels bad nd gets angry on himself wen he sees dried stain of tears on her face..he gets emotional n curse himself for making her cry on their first nyt..he touches her face nd kumud wakes up she feels so happy seeing him near her. Saras just about to say sorry wen she said no to him moving her head n hugs him tight...she wants to take his all pain... Saras feels blessed n happy to have her in lyf who understands hm so well... kumud wipes saras's tears nd kisses him on forehead... Ltr on d bed kumud sits nd saras keeps his head on kumud's lap nd sleeps where kumud moves her hand in his hair nd stare at him nd his peaceful face...


Ohk this z part one of my version of SR..lol


Feel free to imagine wat saras wl do early in d morning for kumud..

Originally posted by: Arshics

SR as I want to see it

Thoda hot hai, not suitable for kids...

Guman's taunts had found their mark

And once again the horrors of the past reared their ugly head

Kumud sensed his pain, as she saw his taut body by the poolside

He had his back to her, but she could feel the tears in his eyes

"Saras" she whispered gently, as she softly turned him to face her

"Kumud mein..." His eyes glistening with unshed tears, his voice quavering with pain,

Saras was again pushing her away.

"Shshsh..., " and Kumud softly kissed his forehead

" today I want to remind you of an old promise Saras," she held out the white odhni -

" today I want you to choose me, my love and our life, tum aisa karoge na Saras,

look into my eyes and answer me"

And as Saras looked into her eyes, and saw his pain mirrored in hers,

his pain ebbed, and he realized

That what had happened was not what mattered.

She, this moment and their love - that was his life

To see her eyes light up joy was the only thing he cared about

And he smiled and drew her into his arms.

The embrace was gentle, and Saras drew comfort from her soft body against his

Slowly, kab ,kaise, pata nahi, but his arms tightened around her,

and her arms were around him,

her hands gently drawing his face towards hers.

Saras saw her looking at him, her lips half open, very very close to his,

and shyly, sweetly, softly but firmly, he heard her say,

"I love you Saras, and I want to spend my life with you".

and gently her lips brushed his cheek, just at the corner of his lips.

The feel of her lips, her gentle fragrance, her soft body touching his,

and Saras felt as if he was on fire.

Then the whole world disappeared, time stood still, even the moon,

not wanting to disturb the young lovers, drew a curtain of clouds.

Kumud felt a new kind of tension in him, which was inviting yet frightening and she blushed,

embarrassed at how her body was responding to him.

She buried her face in his shoulder and he carried her into his arms towards her room,

which was now theirs.

Badi maa, who was going towards the kitchen, saw them, and quickly retreated into her room,

not wanting to intrude into this intimate moment.

As Saras carried her to the bridal bed, their hearts beat with anticipation,

and they paused at each candle in the room and Kumud gently blew it out.

The room was now dimly lit, a single candle casting a beautiful glow,

and Saras lay his beautiful bride on the bed.

And kissed her, on the forehead, on her cheeks slowly and torturously delaying the moment

they were both longing for, and all the time Kumud waited for the moment

when his lips would touch her lips, and seal their love.

Just as his lips were about to touch hers,

the lone candle also decided to leave them alone, and the room was pitch dark...

At that precise moment, the odhni which lay forgotten at the poolside,

was blown away by a hawa ka jhonka, and landed on the thal of rangoli colors near the mandir,

And was soon covered in red the color of suhaag and marital bliss, orange,

the color of haldi depicting divine blessing, and green the color of fertility!

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

omi ji ...

aap to nok jhok karate karate .saras kumud ke bache bhi paida karwa dogi

anki ji ...

zara fantacies ko aur udaan de...app to ekdum sp walo ki tarah likh rahi ho...thoda star one dimaag bhi lagao ji

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Arshi this is so so beautiful.

Amazing!!

I loved the part where Kumud is blowing out the candle. So romantic!!

N the last part typically ur style. I mean that touch of poetry with the chunri rangofied!!

Superb!!👏

Originally posted by: Arshics

Now the previous post was sr as I want to see it

Looking at the present high intellectual thinking of our CVs,

I fear that This is SR as we are going to get-

Kalika was determined that shadi toh ho gayee, but Suhaagraat will not happen

As Kumud was being taken to her room by kusum and Kumari,

Badi maa insisted that Kumud should enter the room only by the kicking the pot of rice kept at the door.

Kalika took the pot and filled with stones at the bottom, but her plan flopped because at the last minute pandit ji asked them not to do this

Then kalika left a snake in Saras and Kumud's room, so that their sr would be ruined

The snake was found but yash decided to give up his bedroom to them and

he and kalika would sleep in the kitchen

Finally she played her last card, the stars were unfavorable and for the next one month Saras and

Kumud cannot be together as said by some pandit ji according to their horoscope.

Saras was told not to go to Kumud's room, so Saras decided to dress up as

Sadhvi MahaBhooteshwari, in a red saree, big tika, etal.

MahaBhooteshwari said that if she could do a secret pooja with Kumud in their room,

then the sankat would go away

Saras then dressed as MahaBhooteshwari went to Kumud's room and did a Maha yagya pooja

Loudly chanting mumbo jumbo

Kumud was initially taken in, then she saw him wearing socks and the familiar stink of the socks told her it was Saras

She pretended to be taken in by all this, and on the pretext of touching his feet she stole the moti which he had hidden in his socks and now the score is Kumud 4 Saras 3.

So she pushed him out of her room and he slept on the balcony outside while she slept clutching the moti, very proud of winning it.

Originally posted by: kiranpreethee

That would make sure we get back our original Saras. Love this idea but could include some hugs and show some romantic scene after that.

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

i too love jashn e bahara song.seeing it on samud will be dream come true

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Anki this is defo wat kind of gonna happen.

U u don't mind can I continue from there??😆

Sure u can continue...m actually stucked here nly.. I'd imagine only saras getting up early nd sees kumud sleeping in sitting position nd realises hw dobo he z..lol he tries make her comfortbl bt she wakes up nd sleepy kumud sleeps puting her head on his chest lyk a kid nd saras smiles n hugs her n they both sleeps hugging each other.. Lol
thts it..
ths z nt proper i would lyk to read ur v continued version

Anki u r too cute n adorable.

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Arshi🤣 🤣

What have u eaten during the week end to give us two extreme versions of SaMud SR.