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annete

@annete

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Arshi jaan lagta hai shayari hi dhun chaa gaye
CVs ke chacha jaan Ghalib bhi bahar aa gaye
Vidya chatur,Dukhba,Kumud aur Saras kaal kar rahe the kavita mai baat
Chat pathe CRISP BYTES ki lag gaye lagta inko bhi laat
Tukbandi ka huka jo tumne gudgudaya
Saraswatichandra me bhi logo ne iska dhua odhaya
Tez Dhar ne kaal jo patang baazi ki shart lagai
Lootere ne bhi apni jaan ki baazi lagai
Maanze se jo Lootere ka haath gaya cut
Tez Dhar ka dil pigla usne pyar se marham lagaya jhut
Inki prem kahani me ab jald hi aayega naya mordh
Pur hum sab jante hai kali jubaan , kali nazar ya ho kali patang in ka prem ha aloot aur majboot hai inka jodh.

missed u last night .

Edited by annete - 11 years ago

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Mrieshka

@Mrieshka

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: annete
Arshi jaan lagta hai shayari hi dhun chaa gaye
CVs ke chacha jaan Ghalib bhi bahar aa gaye
Vidya chatur,Dukhba,Kumud aur Saras kaal kar rahe the kavita mai baat
Chat pathe CRISP BYTES ki lag gaye lagta inko bhi laat
Tukbandi ka huka jo tumne gudgudaya
Saraswatichandra me bhi logo ne iska dhua odhaya
Tez Dhar ne kaal jo patang baazi ki shart lagai
Lootere ne bhi apni jaan ki baazi lagai
Maanze se jo Lootere ka haath gaya cut
Tez Dhar ka dil pigla usne pyar se marham lagaya jhut
Inki prem kahani me ab jald hi aayega naya mordh
Pur hum sab jante hai kali jubaan , kali nazar ya ho kali patang in ka prem ha aloot aur majboot hai inka jodh.

missed u last night .

Super super like ji. You and your poem are awesome always.

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Arshics

@Arshics

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: annete
Arshi jaan lagta hai shayari hi dhun chaa gaye
CVs ke chacha jaan Ghalib bhi bahar aa gaye
Vidya chatur,Dukhba,Kumud aur Saras kaal kar rahe the kavita mai baat
Chat pathe CRISP BYTES ki lag gaye lagta inko bhi laat
Tukbandi ka huka jo tumne gudgudaya
Saraswatichandra me bhi logo ne iska dhua odhaya
Tez Dhar ne kaal jo patang baazi ki shart lagai
Lootere ne bhi apni jaan ki baazi lagai
Maanze se jo Lootere ka haath gaya cut
Tez Dhar ka dil pigla usne pyar se marham lagaya jhut
Inki prem kahani me ab jald hi aayega naya mordh
Pur hum sab jante hai kali jubaan , kali nazar ya ho kali patang in ka prem ha aloot aur majboot hai inka jodh.

missed u last night .

Awesome annete. Kal ka episode was so full of tukbandi, that even the usually reticent and khadoos VC couldn't resist a few lines

And this tez dhaar is oopar se tez, andar se makhan malai

Khas kar jab Saras pe museebat aayee

Saras so satayegi, karegi tang

Par kaatne ne degi kisi aur ko uski Patang

I missed the epi, and then watched it on extremely poor net connectivity

Couldn't post bytes, though there was so much to discuss and share 😡

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

i want dadaji to be their ...he has such a positive energy in him...he lightens the show...i dont want him to die...cvs should keep him alive as now i feel he is the lucky charm of the show ...like baa was for kyuki saas bhi kabhi...

i have a feeling pramad and kalika r now working together and it will come like a surprise to us...may be that kaali patang was of pramad coz he hates saras ...and is playing his game through kalika asking her to get haveli in her name ...throw desais out and he will get hold of saras...thus pramad with kalika will avenge desais andf saras and finally hurt kumud which is the main aim of pramad and kalika

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@twila

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Arshii ...

You missed out watching the episode on TV ... ( Hope you catch the Re-run ) 😊

and despite that you have given us such Awesome CB ... 👏

You managed to see and read so much in the epi ... Amazing ... 👏

Besides the obvious coming of the Black Clouds in SAMUD land ( that Black Kite being the evident indicator ) ...I was just stuck looking at these two Beautiful people SAMUD ...

My heart and mind did not register anything other than the utterly Gorgeous SAMUD and their Beautiful Love , in that Lovely Scene of Kumud with tears in her eyes tending to his wounded hand ... 😳😊

After a long time ...actually ever since that terrible Kususm FIasco started ... finally got a scene where SAMUD's Love touched my heart again ... ❤️

Finally we got a Kumud completely suffused with Saras' Love ... Vulnerable ... Pained ... with all her guards down ...and Caring only for Saras ...Expressing her Love ... saying in words that she was his ...words that not only Saras but in fact all of us had been wanting to hear from her ... 😃

So yesterday's Makar Snakranti epi was Significant and Beautiful for me ...more because of that SAMUD scene ... rather than merely the Kite Flying ...

of course all the Kavya - Kavitaa and the Tukbandii was great Fun too ...😊

Thanks again for a Fantastic CB ...

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@twila

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: annete
Arshi jaan lagta hai shayari hi dhun chaa gaye
CVs ke chacha jaan Ghalib bhi bahar aa gaye
Vidya chatur,Dukhba,Kumud aur Saras kaal kar rahe the kavita mai baat
Chat pathe CRISP BYTES ki lag gaye lagta inko bhi laat
Tukbandi ka huka jo tumne gudgudaya
Saraswatichandra me bhi logo ne iska dhua odhaya
Tez Dhar ne kaal jo patang baazi ki shart lagai
Lootere ne bhi apni jaan ki baazi lagai
Maanze se jo Lootere ka haath gaya cut
Tez Dhar ka dil pigla usne pyar se marham lagaya jhut
Inki prem kahani me ab jald hi aayega naya mordh
Pur hum sab jante hai kali jubaan , kali nazar ya ho kali patang in ka prem ha aloot aur majboot hai inka jodh.

missed u last night .

annette ...

Waah ...Waah ... Kyaa Khuub Likhaa Hai ... 👏

Aap to Aaj Kal Purii tarah Kaavya Ras mein Doobii Huii hain ... 😃

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Aditi

@-AditiS

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Hi Arshi, i thank you from the bottom of my heart for todays bytes. I loved it completely.

I sincerely hope u r not reading too much into some very shallow writing.

Romance apne jaga hai but story is wht moves a show ahead...

If the picture you paint is what lies ahead, saraswatichandra dekhte rehna hi padega for the two ppl beautiful inside and out and their journey of love and life.

Kudos to you!

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KK84

@KK84

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Arshi..brilliant post as always!

I agree with Santhi..its the external forces that may this time lead to Saras's world shattering infront of him...not sure if they may bring the whole fear of losing Kumud as their ante this time. Time will tell.

The change of Diya...I think its Gumaan...I cant seem to associate that hand with anyone else but lets see.

Yday's epi was beautiful! From execution to direction to dialogues...Gautam and Jenny nailed it and so did the entire crew! The hot diya and patang made you think and worry slightly but they were totally overshadowed by samud moments!

Love is in the air and how! Both not afraid to show their love for one another to the whole world...I am loving it! Gautam and Jenny have def raised the bar and given chemistry, soul mates, made for each other, LOVE a new definition!!! Yday's epi did a 360 turn for me!!

Neither are out to prove anything...they are just out to make the most of the time they lost...to carry on from where they had left before that bhayaanak night.